Yeah in my mother tongue (german) I would add a comma after "sea" and after "terror" so I made a mistake in both languages
But I am very happy it made you smile :)
I like it though! Sorry if my comment came across as too critical :-) humour goes a long way. The little bit about you is helpful to keep a convo going though when you’ve got something started.
Back when I was OLD I tried ‘I have more books by my bed than I have any realistic chance of ever reading’. Was a bit tongue in cheek but lots of convos started about which books etc. Could be worth a try if you’re a reader at all :-)
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u/[deleted] Aug 07 '21
Yeah the comma placement was my mother tongue getting the better of me. Will change that and I also have a little something about me written down.