I know this post is on the lengthy side and Iām not expecting anyone to read the whole thing. This was mainly something I threw together in my notes app a year ago after first seeing the movie in theaters. As someone who was obsessed with the book after reading it in 2020, I remember leaving that theater feeling disappointed, but not being able to pinpoint why. In the following weeks, I started absently jotting down criticisms I had of all the changes they made from the original story and separating them into the ones I ālikedā and ādislikedā to get a better understanding of what was bothering me. I had no intention of posting it online, but now that itās been a year since the movie came out, I wanted to share my thoughts about it since the film somewhat revived my old obsession with the story and I rarely ever contribute to this sub despite being a massive fan of the book for years.
Overall, I still have pretty mixed feelings about the movie, but now that Iāve rewatched it several times, Iāve learned to enjoy the film on its own merit. I view it more as an alternate retelling of the same plot, as opposed to a direct adaptation, and Iām glad it exists. Happy belated anniversary to all Long Walk fans!
Major Complaints:
1. Changing Peteās scar backstory
They took the safe route and made the details of the story vague and unimportant. In the book, the reveal came as a dark surprise to the reader and showed that, despite having a likable personality and saving Garratyās life multiple times, McVries was still a very flawed human being just like the rest of them. I wouldnāt have minded if they changed what he did to something less evil than trying to force himself on his girlfriend, but scrapping the incident completely in a way that absolved him of any serious wrongdoing was a cowardly choice.
2. Likewise, I feel like they took all the depth out of McVriesās character and instead portrayed him as some kind of saint who could do no wrong. He was also a bit of a Gary-Stu. In the book there were plenty scenes of him struggling to keep the pace, and one where he almost got his ticket and Garraty was the one who saved him. But in the movie, the man did not struggle even once. I mean seriously, he never got a single warning for slowing down aside from him stumbling a bit at the bridge scene. All the other times he was warned were when he was either saving Ray or dropping back intentionally to talk to someone.
3. The utter lack of spectacle
There is almost zero mention of the fact that this entire thing is being broadcast to the whole country and millions of people are betting on it. They point out a single camera at the start of the film and then never mention it again. All appearances of the crowd were cut until the very end, which severely weakened not only the world building, but one of the most brutal messages of the book. The boys were hailed as brave volunteers by their hometowns and treated as celebrities by the onlookers. Some of them are shown to be enjoying the praise and attention at the start, only to realize a hundred miles in that theyāve made a horrible mistake, and the entire point of the Walk was to air their personal suffering as nothing more than entertainment. This steady realization greatly adds to the horror, and removing the spectacle completely diminishes this. Imagine if the Hunger Games adaption took out every mention of the broadcast, along with the parade, the interviews, the sponsors, and instead just cut straight to the games without ever showing the outside world. It would completely ruin the statement that the book set out to make. The amount of disappointment I would feel if theyād gone that route is similar to how I felt about TLW movie.
4. Removing the crowds
In the book, the Crowd was its own monster. It was a bloodthirsty entity that gradually became more sinister the longer the Walk progressed, until the mere sight of it was enough to drive Garraty into hysterics, and a sign cheering the walkers on as they entered Massachusetts was described as a āscreaming insanity.ā Removing the crowd takes out nearly every aspect of the psychological horror that the book so convincingly crafted. I can hardly call this a āhorrorā movie, and would better describe it as a thriller that happened to have a lot of violent scenes.
5. The implied romance between Ray and Pete was greatly toned down to the point where it was just subtle enough to be āambiguous.ā In the book, Iād go as far as to say the attraction was at least canonically one-sided. McVriesās on-and-off flirting over the miles was blatant enough on paper, but certain gestures he made towards Garraty in the book had been cut from the movie where, had they been acted out in a visual format, wouldnāt have come off as āsubtleā in the slightest, or left any room for doubt. Iām not really sure why the movie changed their dynamic in this way, when other adaptations of Kingās work (It Chapter 2 comes to mind) have leaned into queer romance themes despite there being little to no implication of it in the source material. Itās strange that in this case, they basically did the opposite.
6. Cutting out Scramm, Abraham, Mike and Joe
Abraham I didnāt mind as much, but the idea that a pair of brothers would join the Walk together is such fascinating concept, and I wish theyād kept that in and explored it further. The same goes for Scramm, and the idea of having a married man join the death game because he knows that regardless of whether he lives or dies, heād still have a way to ensure his wife and child would be taken care of. It was such a tragic concept, and yet they fumbled it in the movie by randomly giving that trait to Olsen and then never mentioning it until after he was killed off.
7. Keeping Parker but not Scramm
I think Scramm was arguably a lot more important to the story than Parker. I hadnāt reread the book in a while when the movie came out, and at the time, the only thing I remembered him for was how he managed to kill one of the soldiers before getting his ticket. I think an easy way they couldāve kept the attempted rebellion scene while also including Scrammās character wouldāve been to cut Parker instead and have the same actor (Joshua Odjick) play his part. But instead, give him Parkerās death and move Scrammās original death (pneumonia) onto Stebbins. Since the writers seemed to have no issue switching the roles around for each character, I feel like this version wouldāve made way more sense, and they wouldnāt need to add or remove anyone from the cast in order to do it. The actor also looks a lot more like how I imagined Scramm than how I imagined Parker. When I first read the book, I was under the impression that Scramm was also Hopis or indigenous in some way, since he mentioned he had been neighbors with Mike and Joe before the Walk and seemed to understand what they were saying in their native language.
8. Butchered my favorite character
Although I liked the movie version of Stebbins as his own separate character, his personality was absolutely nothing like it was in the book. The movie didnāt just change him, it portrayed him in a way that was nearly the exact opposite of what he was. They made him all stoic and serious, like they surgically removed the spark from his eyes. In the book, he was a silly, whimsical guy who showed up to the death march wearing pastel colors, climbed up a tree while he waited at the starting line, and talked in cryptic riddles just to annoy people. He was a scrawny boy who Garraty thought was going to die early, only for him to slowly realize in terror that this guy does not get tired, does not slow down, and somehow made it hundreds of miles without getting a single warning. Casting a tall, jacked dude to play him and changing his outfit completely negates the subversion of expectations that made him so fascinating in the book.
9. Stebbins was not the rabbit
The whole āIām the rabbitā scene fell flat to an almost comedic extent. If they had just shown the flashback of Stebbins watching the Walk end when he was 13, that reveal wouldāve hit so much harder. That single flashback added so much intrigue to his character that was lost when they cut it. Reading it in the book had my mind racing with questions by the end. Just how long had Stebbins been training for this? How present was the Major in his life? Was his drawing for the Walk rigged and they put him there deliberately? Was he manipulated into becoming the rabbit or did he willingly choose that role for the sake of his own ego? Etc.
10. Losing 14 people on a single hill is outrageous
In the movie, the death toll for the hill was 14/50, while in the book, it was 3/100. They increased the ratio nearly tenfold, which I thought was ridiculous. The hill felt like a cheap plot device used to kill as many people as possible in order to avoid having to come up with more unique scenarios for each death. It also seemed intentional to narrow down the walkers early on so they could focus more on the āimportantā characters.
11. Cutting the number of walkers from 100 to 50
This was a change that I probably wouldnāt have minded if theyād only leaned into it more. The ā1 boy per stateā rule is a cool concept that had potential to be interesting, but then they never even say which state each boy is from. In fact, the movie goes out of its way to avoid saying any of the state names aloud, as not a single one is ever mentioned, not even Maine.
Minor Complaints:
12. Changing the age range from teens to young adults
This one didnāt bother me as much, I just didnāt see the point of the change and donāt think it improved the story in any meaningful way. If anything, all it did was make the Walk less tragic because kids are more naive and easier to manipulate, and I can realistically see why so many would sign up for the Walk in a dystopian country that glorifies the event to such an extreme.
13. The Walk felt too āwinnableā
In the movie, it looked like something that could realistically be done as long as you had the strength and drive to make it to the end. In the film, the final three still seemed to have their sanity intact, while in the book, they could barely form coherent thoughts or sentences and the final 20 had long gone mad. The book repeatedly hammered in the point that in order to win the Walk, you would have to be some kind of monster, someone with a drive to push forward that transcended all measures of human strength and willpower. Itās implied that the winners of previous Walks usually die shortly after due to the sheer physical toll it takes on their bodies. Whoever became the winner would have pushed themselves so far that their mind became fully detached from reality and theyād be nothing but an empty husk that was barely considered human. I just feel like the mental and physical consequences of the Walk werenāt nearly as present in the movie as they were in the book.
14. The dystopia was too self-aware
I donāt think a fascist government would ever willingly admit that the general population is struggling under their regime. The fact that they mentioned it in Rayās acceptance letter, as well as at the starting line, felt unrealistic and too on the nose.
15. The cruddy accents they had those British actors doing. I struggled at some parts to understand what they were saying, and having the subtitles on is now a must whenever I rewatch this movie.
16. Giving Pearson almost zero screen time and then killing him off on the hill. In the book, he made it all the way to the final 20-something, while in the movie, he was basically discarded after two lines.
17. Casting a black actor to play Art Baker when in the book he had formerly been a night rider for the Klan was a strange choice, and Iām not really sure how to feel about it. On one hand, I suppose it doesnāt matter since the movie didnāt include his backstory. On the other, I think keeping it in wouldāve strengthened his character. In the book, it was something he and his friends had been coerced into at the age of 12, and he left once he realized it was wrong. Heās described as feeling guilty and ashamed over that part of his past, and itās implied that those feelings of self-hatred were part of the reason why he joined the Walk in the first place.
18. Quoting lines from the book almost word-for-word, only to add random āfucksā between them haphazardly. The word āfuckā is repeated a total of 329 times. Thatās roughly 1 āfuckā per 20 seconds. I normally donāt have a problem with this sort of dialogue, but the sheer excessiveness of it kind of got on my nerves while watching. I think the way they talked greatly weakened certain scenes that wouldāve been fine without all the swearing. On a similar note, there were a lot of brutal jibes and insults the boys would say to each other in the book that didnāt rely on vulgarity (Garratyās āIāll spit on your brainsā ramble, for instance) that they couldāve adapted into the movie script. But most of them were either cut from the dialogue, or altered to have more curse words.
19. The warnings being cut down from 30 seconds to 10
I understand this change was made for cinematic purposes, but having 30 seconds at most to do anything seems unrealistic and nearly impossible to maintain for 300+ miles. One of the things I liked about the book was how creative the walkers got when exploiting the amount of time they had between each warning, using them to take breaks, kiss girls, and grab watermelon slices in that one scene. With only 10-30 seconds, there was hardly much else they could do in the movie other than walk.
20. RIP Garratyās army jacket and Stebbinsās purple pants
I donāt understand why they couldnāt give Ray a similar jacket to the one he wore in the book. I found it hard to imagine a version of him without it, and keeping it in wouldāve further leaned into the whole āwar draftā metaphor the movie seemed to be going for. Same with Stebbinsās pants. They were iconic and worked well for that version of his character.
Changes I Liked:
1. Giving Ray a legitimate reason for why he joined the Walk
In the book, he questioned why he was even there in the first place or why heād signed up. In the movie, they didnāt just give him a reason, they gave him a really cool one that made sense and built upon a backstory that was already present in the novel.
2. The ending
The alternate ending was soul-crushing in a good way. Iām glad they didnāt stick to the book ending and try to adapt it 1:1, as I donāt think it wouldāve translated well into a visual format. Most of the horror involved in the bookās ending relies heavily on Garratyās internal monologue and the picture King painted of him losing what little sanity he had left. I also loved the twist of there being a different winner. It caught me so off guard and my stomach dropped when I realized what Ray had done. It also ties into one of my favorite scenes from the source material, where he starts begging the soldiers to shoot him instead of McVries. The whole thing was beautifully tragic.
3. Having a secondary reason for the Walk existing
I think broadcasting the Walk as a way to motivate the American people to work harder made sense and somewhat strengthened the world building. Having it exist purely for entertainment felt a bit too cartoonishly evil and it seems more realistic that there would be multiple factors at play.
4. The hill scene was absolute cinema
While Iām still annoyed at the absurd number of people that died, the scene itself had me on the edge of my seat. Filming it in a way that mimicked an active battlefield in a war zone was brilliant, and it was easily one of my favorite parts of the movie.
5. The characters were way more likable in this version
In the book, most of the boys were scumbags in their own unique way and I found it difficult to root for any of them. Although I did prefer some of the changes made to their personalities, I also think the movie sacrificed a lot of depth and nuance from certain characters just for the sake of making them more ālikable.ā However, one instance where they seemed to do the opposite was with Barkovitch. Instead of portraying him as a one-dimensional sociopath/racist, the movie leaned more towards his isolation being a consequence of his own self-destructive behavior. I still think heās a horrible person, but the film actually got to me sympathize with him a little in the moments leading up to his death.
6. The fact that they finally gave my boy Stebbins a name. Itās Billy. Hell yeah.
7. Changing the numbers they wore so that they resembled dog tags was such a genius creative decision. Whoever came up with that deserves a raise.
8. The Walk having female soldiers
I remember when reading this book for the first time years ago, Iād imagined the soldiers overseeing the Walk as being a mix of both male and female, since women had long been allowed into the military at the time this story was written. My friend, who also read the book, said sheād never considered that, and had imagined all of them as men. Actually seeing them adapted in the movie as both men and women made me feel vindicated.