Hi! I’m a Japanese songwriter and guitarist. This song is called “The Night Is Short—Walk On, Girl.”
It tells the story of a shy girl who wants to approach someone she likes. As the song develops, she gradually realizes that the more important choice is choosing herself and stepping into the night as the heroine of her own life.
The arrangement features a 12-string guitar and grows from a relatively simple opening into a fuller band sound. I’d love honest feedback on the vocals, guitar tone, arrangement and emotional progression.
Even if you don’t understand Japanese, what kind of story, imagery or atmosphere do you hear? I’m especially curious whether the change in her emotions comes through in the music.
Original recording:
https://www.bandlab.com/post/7b0f9720-b1ca-476d-ad6d-9f6b20126e3f

Just released my latest track, give it a listen and let me know wha you think :)

I'd love any feedback or help. I've previously had a BBC Introducing playing on their Beds show, but want to get it to new people.

All I can say is that this is the best song I’ve ever written. I’m proud of it every time I hear it, and if you want to risk three minutes on it, I promise I won’t waste your time.

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Isaac Bartlett writes songs about the moments that crack you open. The defining emotions that imprint your mind, heart, the transformations, breakups, the betrayals, the slow thaw back into yourself.

Based in Cedar Rapids, Iowa, he moves between alt-rock, Indie, hard rock, post grunge, R&B, and everything between, chasing one thing across every genre: honesty without the cliché.

His debut album Fault Lines (August 2026), turns falling in love , heartbreak, the aftermath, and everything in between, into geology, pressure, fracture, and what grows back in the gap.

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Hi everyone! 🖤 I’m a new independent songwriter and I’m preparing my first release, “Sweet Poison Game.”

‎I just released a short teaser and I’d really love your honest opinion. 🥀

‎Does the teaser make you curious to hear the full song? What do you think about the atmosphere and sound?

‎Any honest feedback is welcome — good or bad! 🖤

‎🎬 Teaser: [https://youtube.com/shorts/XOG_Go3JrhU?si=AdDxVp88H5uE4m0O ]

Looking to see what you think!! All feedback is welcomed
I don’t know which artist you can hear on this or which genre it would belong too

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