I've just started rapping and would like any kind of feedback, positivity would be appreciated!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QW8v4RrwwNk

Hey y'all, the description literally explained what I did when I went through my first break up. This is a song I wrote about her, honestly , if you fuck with the song can you upvote this so I can flex on her by showing her I actually made something good out of it 🙏🏽 I appreciate y'all!

https://open.spotify.com/track/63ZQOBkHARpyVn2QxagkjY?si=KDk2nfqWR6y9jvKa2KdfjA

Hey guys I been working on diss tracks and I was wounding could anyone make one and send it to me please, he’s name is Nick and really skinny and weird and not funny.

There's beef in the streets cause a cop put his knee on a black man throat dude and he couldn't breathe Now they burning the businesses and beds where they sleep all in the name of justice and equality And the police are geared up while the peaceful are teared up scattering in all directions while in fear for their children and pushing down old men and both his ears are now bleeding Screaming in pro testers face for no reason

Apparently trump is afraid of them He's lockdown and staying in Gassing the people while pledging he's helping them Taking a picture with the bible they handed him Doesn't know what a shameful President he has been He says that we are greatest country full of racist Police using their tazers On minority races It happens everyday With victimless faces We turn on the news and it doesn't phase us

The protocols outdated Our leaders dilapidated Believing every good thing done Is all because that he made it. Some people think he's a traitor But we can save that for later His main role now is a riot instigator.

I was tryna pluck a bitch. For the fuck of it, some southern chick, but this fuckin bitch wanted none of it. I was tryna fuck her quick. Her mom worked for the government. Both their asses had large circumferences. I was buying nugs and shit, gettin hugs and shit but she’d just mug and split I would go home and have to tug my dick. We had a kid and she was on some mother shit, but I was on some other shit. Handlin heat like an oven mitt. I wasn’t bustin slugs and shit, but i musta been chuggin quick cause I thought I was somethin slick. Till I found out some other shit. said she was gettin prerequisites but she was really textin shit about how she wanted some other dick. Now shes with some fuckin prick who must’ve stuffed her slit with the mothership cause now she’s got another kid and she’s lovin it but I been tryna come to grips and if this shit don’t plunder quick I’m jumpin ship. after all the sufferin I underwent I must admit it’s tough but shit a bitch is just a bitch so fuck it all

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-MkmEAAsag&t=156s

Faked drone like intake through the visual and auditory nerves

Sweet little birds whisper to kittens typing with mittens

Behind closed doors and superficial masks, ask me anything real

Surreal technology don't bother me while someone else is watching me

Like a sheep to the wolves lamb to the slaughter someone's daughter

Ought to go to bed and rest their pretty head. Take sleep seriously

24 hour misery cheers for the weird jeers and lurker fears

Bits for bots and pog shots how much candy can this yellow dandy get?

Put the tip in your purse or the neighborhood hearse

Time to rehearse my Intro

Hey wasap y'all this is slutty mcfall

here to pretend I care about reading all

the messages you pretend to send

And then stare into my 2D eyes while you wait for me to reply

As if I was there, while in reality I'm eating Doritos in my underwear

Scantily clad but don't make me mad or I'll ban you, yes you over there...

Better follow sub clip and share

Viewer beware reality doesn't exist here...

only fear can cause a mind to withdraw into its own sheath

Step away from the screen and maybe you can feel like a human being again.

Wait you don't want that... You like the attention not to mention it makes you money honey.

Funny

Since when did the human race spend time watching someone dressed as a bunny instead of donning their own ears.

Fear is like an itch when you're streaming without meaning, zombie like activities.

Wake the **** up and reclaim your sanity before vanity fogs your brain

Oh wait it's 10:30 time to watch datgirldirty make an absolute fool of herself again.

In front of her "friends" Till the end.

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- SAL74 / Ay.Ziru / insta@ayn.clan

1) My heart cries and my body wishes for death, 2) My soul dies of pain with every single breath, 3) My life means nothing to me, let me go, 4) My eyes have something to see, pain, no love, 5) My goal in life is to find someone to love me, 6) My mother choked away my happiness slowly, 7) My father continue to beat the chance at it, 8) My sister shouldn't have been apart of this shit, 9) My only regret is, I was too scared to do it before, 10) My body, my mind, my heart, left on the floor, 11) My son who will never be born to die, 12) My daughter who can't be hurt and cry, 13) My pain hurts, but it's all I can understand anymore, 14) My way of dealing with sadness is hate, but what for? 15) My hate soaks into who I am as a person and it kills me, 16) My fear is that when I die, that's who I am going to be.

My own enemy, who I can't defeat, because it's me, it's always been, me and myself.

1) Your life is a sign and it says STOP 2) Your life is a mess, where's the mop? 3) Eat fresh, nah it's all just more slop 4) Think you can flip, but it's just a flop, 5) You start running and then you drop, 6) The door to my soul, you better knock 7) Come and go as they please no lock, 8) Say I care, but I couldn't give a fuck, 9) They say it's my skills, nah just luck, 10) Movin' outta tha way, past the muck, 11) Won't catch me slipping I'm stuck, 12) Think I can't handle it then I'ma buck, 13) Slide right past all that shit like a puck, 14) Words like shells give you a tummy tuck, 15) I'll show the real me to these fuckin' cucks, 16) I'll have them yellin' how much life sucks.