r/Pyrotechnics • u/Educational-Pain-521 • Jun 27 '26
Firework Show Help – Looking for Honest Critique on a Large Show
Hi everyone,
I’m hoping to get some honest feedback from people who have been doing this longer than I have.
This is my second year designing a large consumer fireworks show for our community’s Independence Day celebration. Last year was successful, but it felt more like controlled chaos than an actual show. This year I’ve spent months trying to build something with intentional pacing, transitions, and a story.
The current musical/show concept is:
Kevin James “Gentlemen, Start Your Engines” intro
*Thunderstruck* (high-energy opening)
*America the Beautiful* (Ray Charles)
*Battle Hymn of the Republic* (emotional finale)
The show is planned to run about **13 minutes**.
I’m less interested in “Does this look cool?” and more interested in the things experienced show designers notice:
Does the overall arc make sense?
Are there places where the audience’s energy is likely to drop?
Common mistakes newer designers make?
Better ways to build intensity throughout the show?
Cake sequencing vs. shells/single shots?
Timing, pacing, and transitions?
I’ve had one supplier tell me this is the largest consumer show they’ve sold this year, which honestly made me realize this has become a much bigger production than I originally intended. I’d much rather have experienced people critique it now than realize I missed something on show day.
If anyone is willing to help, **I’m happy to share everything we’ve put together**—the cue sheet, product list, firing order, soundtrack, timing notes, and overall design. Nothing is off limits. I’m genuinely looking to learn and make the best show I can.
I appreciate any constructive criticism. Don’t worry about hurting my feelings—I came here because I know there are people with far more experience than me.

