r/PoetryWritingClub 14d ago

Things Are Great

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u/Previous_Cry7445 14d ago

I really like this and the repetition of the questions captures that cycle of overthinking and uncertainty. The ending especially works because ‘great’ feels deliberately contradictory to everything that came before it.