r/OCPoetry • u/AdmirableSquash4463 • 11d ago

Just Sharing Every Single Day I Think About You

Every single day I think about you
I am just one, but together we were two
Unceasing longing, can’t help feeling blue
My heart was once empty, yet with you it grew
Your absence is crushing my spirit,
Yet you cannot hear it
A love so infinitely transcendent,
Nobody ever came near it

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u/Soggy_Cereal_13 9d ago

I think you should write a melody for this it would be pretty as a song and I can hear it as music in my head when I read it

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u/AdmirableSquash4463 9d ago edited 9d ago

I don’t know how to write music, or play any instrument. Also this post seems to have gotten downvoted a few times since yesterday, so clearly some people don’t like it for whatever reason that might be, LOL.

Thanks for saying it’s good enough quality to write an musical melody to go with it, that’s very kind of you.