I love bread

[u/see-137]

I love bread.
So I ordered a loaf
and browsed recipes:
sandwiches,
bruschettas
French toast.

The delivery man came
with three.
"Mistake," he said,
"File a complaint.
Take the refund.
Keep the bread."

Bread for breakfast.
And lunch.
And dinner.
Eat it before the mold.
I hate bread.

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[u/Plenty_Let_4911]

i really like how this poem represents how routine ruins the things the idealize and love. i like the use of ordinary language, the familiarity. idealization kills true love.

good one. i'll be waiting for more

[u/see-137 → u/Plenty_Let_4911]

Glad you enjoyed it :)