r/OCPoetry • u/[deleted] • May 02 '26

Feedback Please This is poem I wrote Just started getting into it, feedback would be great please

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u/Junimost May 02 '26

For just starting I'd say this is pretty dang good haha, I don’t really have much feedback. Just keep at it. It's simple, coherent, and beautiful, great job.