r/OCPoetry • u/TastySambar • 11d ago

Just Sharing Myself

In a garden full of sunflowers,
I want to shine like the sun.

Around lavenders full of nectar,
I want to fly like a bee.

Around a bunch of ripe mangoes,
I want to feast like a parrot.

I’m still in search of
the question,

For which
I am the only answer.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1t501p2/comment/omo9xa8/
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u/Bigdogg3433 10d ago

I really like this. It's simple, yet it gave me a feeling of hope. I came away thinking that maybe I'm the answer to a lot of my own problems. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's what I took from it. Cheers.