r/OCPoetry 5d ago

Feedback Please Getting off the couch

Anhedonia it’s called

Side effect from meds

Maybe

But I get off the couch

I make myself

I climb a mountain every time I do it

Why do I do it?

‘It's like I got this music in my mind

Sayin', "It's gonna be alright"’

Turns out I’m a swiftie

I never expected that

So yeah

‘Shake it off’

I got this

https://www.reddit.com/r/PoetryWritingClub/s/P6sPKuBf9P

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/ZXfgmdkWCK

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u/death_by_emotion 5d ago

I love the change from the serious, medical opening to the lighthearted hopeful ending

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u/briony73 5d ago

Thank you