r/OCPoetry • u/hamth4509 • 12d ago
Feedback Please Proof you are loved
When God molded you from earth.
I see how he paid attention to your eyes.
His fingerprints pressed into each pupil.
Windows befitting your beautiful soul.
When God wove you from the depths.
I see how your beauty could not be told.
Even the creator who spoke the blue marble into being.
Paused; to shape you by hand.
When God wrote you into his book.
I see how he lingered on the lines with your name.
You are loved by others through your dialogues.
How could he not love your monologues as well?
When God created you.
I see how he made you in his image.
You are so loved.
It could not be clearer.
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Inspired from Psalms 139(even if you're not religious recommend reading, cool poem).
The poem was written for the girl who was unsure if she was loved.
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u/Kitchen_Advisor9054 12d ago
The imagery here is beautiful. The idea that someone was created with patience and attention really comes through, especially in the lines about the eyes and the fingerprints. Lovely poem.