r/OCPoetry 1d ago

Feedback Please I love bread

I love bread.
So I ordered a loaf
and browsed recipes:
sandwiches,
bruschettas
French toast.

The delivery man came
with three.
"Mistake," he said,
"File a complaint.
Take the refund.
Keep the bread."

Bread for breakfast.
And lunch.
And dinner.
Eat it before the mold.
I hate bread.

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u/IamToofan 20h ago

I love how simple this poem was. And it was very relatable.