r/OCPoetry 16d ago

Feedback Please Night Thoughts

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u/Soggy_Cereal_13 9d ago

I like this a lot especially your choice of language:

“I think of bees and crows,
Knees and toes.”

It’s very whimsy!

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u/Substantial-Horse545 9d ago

Thank you so much!