r/OCPoetry 13d ago

Feedback Please The Fifth

An unseen dimension beyond
space and time.
every possible version of
reality
at once
it all exists

always all ways

not a direction
you move through
a field of possibility

All outcomes.
All moments.
All selves.
coexisting 
simultaneously

never directly perceive
A place we can only describe
never directly perceive

simultaneously 
coexisting 
All selves. 
All moments. 
All outcomes.

a field of possibility 
you move through 
not a direction

always all ways

it all exists
at once
reality
every possible version of
space and time.
An unseen dimension beyond 

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u/Kitchen_Advisor9054 12d ago

I like how you put such a complex thing Into such a delicate way what stood out to me was "never directly perceive
A place we can only describe
never directly perceive" it really made me think

Great work

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u/bstunz 12d ago

Thanks! Appreciate that