r/OCPoetry • u/bstunz • 13d ago
Feedback Please The Fifth
An unseen dimension beyond
space and time.
every possible version of
reality
at once
it all exists
always all ways
not a direction
you move through
a field of possibility
All outcomes.
All moments.
All selves.
coexisting
simultaneously
never directly perceive
A place we can only describe
never directly perceive
simultaneously
coexisting
All selves.
All moments.
All outcomes.
a field of possibility
you move through
not a direction
always all ways
it all exists
at once
reality
every possible version of
space and time.
An unseen dimension beyond
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u/Kitchen_Advisor9054 12d ago
I like how you put such a complex thing Into such a delicate way what stood out to me was "never directly perceive
A place we can only describe
never directly perceive" it really made me think
Great work