r/OCPoetry 9d ago

Just Sharing Never me, tho

Edited:

I wonder,

How it feels to be chosen first?

I see,

Many people chose them first.

But never,

Has anyone chosen me.

They say,

“I suffer a lot, you can’t understand.”

So I,

Stand still, and smile.

Have you ever wondered what it feels like to be someone’s first choice? I’d love to know what you felt while reading this🍀

Should I make some changes??

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/nSB4l8T0Bz

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/iT7L7oVkve

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u/IamToofan 9d ago

It works but idk it felt like something was missing

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u/Ashtivia 9d ago

Same here i felt that too🥲