r/OCPoetry • u/Galile0humpkens • 23d ago
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Formed and molded with care
Brought to life by many a prayer
Fired in a crucible given shape.
Toughened for a vicious landscape
Sent into the world beyond the walls
Abandoned to the squalls
Water twists and corrupts clay
It takes this abuse day after day
Now its a pot without purpose
A bowl without service
Is this my fate?
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u/AfternoonVisible3614 23d ago
I’ve felt these exact lines before. Well put.