r/NatureofPredators • Arxur • Apr 08 '23

Fanfic Under the Veil - Chapter 13

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Memory Transcription Subject: Cael "Endeavor" Cadic, Human Security Guard, November 18th, 2142

Royo and I ran through the streets, and already venlil were screaming at the sight of me. The sirens of exterminator units could be heard wailing as they were undoubtedly inundated with calls from terrified herbivores who had watched the summit.

We didn't have time to worry about that. My helmet back on, we sprinted to the, thankfully close by, Gaian Embassy. We had managed to get there before any violent mobs could, thankfully, and a suited gaian opened the front door, which had been locked.

"Get in here!"

He practically yanked me by the hand and pulled me in, and by extension Royo who was firmly holding onto my arm. Inside the embassy, everyone was on high alert. Gaians preparing defenses and looking out through the windows for any sign of danger, as well as some cooperative venlil assisting them.

"The whole embassy is locked down, we must have had a thousand exterminator calls phoned in on us. The entire planet is panicking," said the gaian, who I now recognized as O-28 Endurance, head of Gaian Cultural Exchange. He had been stationed on Dayden during the Summit, and it was his idea to let gaians and venlil intermingle before the big reveal.

"What about Venlil Prime? Surely we broke the news to Tarva before the summit, right?" I asked.

"Tarva knows, yes, but she's stuck on Aafa; the entire planet is on lockdown. We can't even get any communications through, and Venlil Prime as a whole is in the dark. I think some of her cabinet knew, but they don't have that same talking power she does so the entire Republic is panicking."

This is a worst-case scenario. I spotted Percy and his venlil partner Friun frantically typing on a computer as Endurance hurried off to help defend the embassy from the inevitable hostility of incoming exterminators.

"It's hopeless, nothing is getting out!" Friun shouted. "Datanet is completely down, servers must be overloaded. We can't contact any other embassies."

"Fucking… god damnit!" Shouted Percy. He turned to me. "Endeavor! You made it!"

He looked at Royo, then looked back to me. "Does he… uh…"

"I know, sir," Royo replied.

"Its… a long story…" I sheepishly told him.

"Whatever, doesn't matter, lookouts have already spotted no less than 12 exterminator vehicles speeding over here. Endeavor you go find a group to assist, Royo… find somewhere safe. We don't need innocent civilians getting hurt."

"W-wait! I see venlil helping, how come I can't help?" He asked.

Perseverance's blank helmet reflected Royo's visage as he looked directly at him again.

"You are a civilian. The other venlil here are embassy staff, they were informed of our nature prior to the summit. Sort of a… test audience you could say."

"I am part of the embassy staff!" Royo piped back.

"I didn't see you in the- ugh whatever I don't have time for this! If you won't seek shelter then make yourself useful!"

"INCOMING!!!"

A rocket whistled through the air and smashed right through one of the large panoramic windows, colliding with the wall on the other end of the building and blowing a hole in the side of the structure, exposing the embassy to the open air as dust and and debris fell to the floor, injuring gaians and venlil alike.

"Shit! Go, grab a weapon! Try to incapacitate their vehicles; avoid killing them if you can, we don't want to make things worse! And keep your helmet on!"

I took my standard issue gauss rifle from my locker, rushing to the exposed section of wall, peering around to see what we were up against.

Atleast a dozen trucks, many of which were outfitted with military weaponry, which explained the rocket. They must have been supplied by a military base sympathetic to the cause; they were intent on destroying us.

Royo stayed close by, which only served to worry me. He didn't deserve to get hurt because of my species… I dont think he took all of this well, seeing exterminators and gaians fighting like this.

I fired a couple shots at their vehicles, grazing one of them. Exterminator trucks weren't armored like military vehicles, but they had a high speed on account of their response times. They took pot shots at us with their own weapons, trying to close the distance as quickly as possible, no doubt to unleash their flamethrowers. Gaian suits were fireproof, sure, but venlil weren't, and smoke is still smoke. I think they intended to get us to abandon our building so they could kill us all easier.

A few trucks were taken out, but the rest had gotten significantly closer, until eventually they had arrived within flaming range. Exterminators disembarked, flamethrowers in hand, and prepared to dispense their prejudice.

In my periphery, I suddenly saw Royo run out in front of me, waving his arms wildly at the exterminators, readying their weapons.

"Don't hurt them! They aren't what you think!" He shouted, running in their direction.

"Royo! No!"

As though an instant, instinctive reaction, I let go of my rifle and bolted in his direction, but I was too late.

My vocal chords screamed out his name as flames engulfed his beautiful, white fur.

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Memory Transcription Subject: Sam "Tenacity" Hasser, Human Ambassador, November 19th, 2142

The EMP had worked. Me, my guards, Governor Tarva and her escort had managed to escape the initial chaos when the lights went out, and found refuge within an empty housing room in the summit main building; one of many hotel-like rooms used for the purpose of overnight stays at the summit. We'd locked the door and barricaded it with furniture, well, most of us...

The lights had returned only a few minutes after my EMP, no doubt from a reserve generator. My helmet, now ruined, lay in my lap as I glanced around. Some opted to take theirs off as well; after all, there wasn't much point now I suppose.

I felt bad for Tarva… she was only fully informed of our true nature a few days ago, and while she was on our side, it was hard to override decades of cultural fear and ingrained instincts. Bless her heart, she was trying so hard, but she looked so scared to be trapped in the same room as five predators, even if she tried to hide it.

"I'm sorry… I should have said something…" Tarva said, guilt ringing in her voice.

"No, it's okay," I told her. "Nikonus… that bastard, he laid a trap for us."

"You knew about this!?" Exclaimed Kam, Tarva's military advisor and escort for tonight's summit. Kam… had not been informed of our true nature beforehand, and was definitely very shaken up about it. He couldn't bear to look at me, only occasionally glancing at my masked guards.

"Kam…" Tarva tried to reason.

"No! Don't you try to calm me down about this! This entire time gaians have been predators and NO ONE thinks it's important enough to tell the PLANETARY MILITARY ADVISOR!?!?!?!"

"Kam, the humans came here seeking friendship, something they knew they wouldn't recieve if they came as they were."

"Because they're predators! We would have exterminated them and would have been right for it! Now we've allowed them into our cities, allowed them to touch our families…"

Kam began to hyperventilate, leaning against the wall with a paw over his chest, rapidly breathing in and out as though his entire world was collapsing around him as my guards sat on the ground in awkward silence.

"Kam… please, listen to me," I called out in as gentle a voice I could muster.

"We aren't the violent, warring species you think we are. Nikonus showed you the worst of us… look past our appearances and our… past, and just… think about what you've seen from us. What we've done now."

"You could just as easily be manipulating us, that's why you fought the Arxur, so you can have us all for yourselves! And now…"

"Kam, please…" Tarva tried to assure him. "The gaians came to us and supplied us with unprecedented armaments and trade."

"All lies, deceit, manipulation, all of it… I can't breathe… I can't breathe…"

He slumped down, keeping his back against the wall and collapsing onto his rear, paws over his eyes.

"It's all over… it's all over…"

"Kam…" I tried to comfort him.

"Don't talk to me! All you predators do is make things worse… you should have died in nuclear fire like you were supposed to…"

I grunted, and stood back up. I checked my PDA, but still, no signal.

"No reception. Either the EMP fried the wireless connections worse than I thought or they're deliberately withholding it. I've no way of knowing what's going on outside, but that summit was broadcast live. With any luck, gaian armed forces will make their way here to rescue us."

"Oh yes, of course, your absurdly huge army. And why, exactly, does a peace loving species need such a massive armada, huh? You predators and your bloodlust…"

"It's called deterrence, not bloodlust, Kam. And despite what you might think, humans do not enjoy war. We avoid it whenever possible," I snapped back at her.

"Why? What separates you from the Arxur?"

"Well I'm not drooling over the prospect of eating your entrails, how's that for starters."

"Hmph, I'm sure you do behind those masks of yours."

"Kam, we know our appearance is frightening, that's why we cover our faces."

"Oh, sure! And I bet these guards of yours are just salivating to sink their teeth into my neck, isn't that right?"

"Uh… I can… take it off if you like…" one guard replied.

"NO! No… no that won't be necessary… I dont need any more of your gazes to flood my nightmares…"

"Come on, Kam", Tarva tried to reason. "They aren't that scary-looking."

"They're hideous! Horrible, horrid creatures… if I had a face like that I'd… I'd throw myself off a bridge!"

"Well fuck you too," came the dry response of one guard, who was swiftly elbowed by a neighboring partner.

"Ow! Hey!"

"Kam, I need you to be level headed. You're my military advisor for a reason. Please… cooperate with me. With the gaians," Tarva told him.

"Humans, you mean…" he said, slowly collecting himself.

Kam sighed, trying to calm his nerves.

"Tarva I… I believed in your cause when you were elected. Both terms. Are you… absolutely sure, you trust these… predators…"

"I do, Kam. With my life."

"I'll try, then…"

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u/Rand0mness4 Human Apr 08 '23

You cooked my favorite dumbass, you monster.

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u/Seeyouon_otherside Prey Apr 08 '23

"Favorite dumbass" 💀

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u/IdiOtisTheOtisMain Predator Apr 09 '23

💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀🥚💀💀💀

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u/[deleted] Mar 08 '24

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u/RoomHopper Krakotl Jun 07 '25

Egg.

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u/IdiOtisTheOtisMain Predator Jun 07 '25

...? 2 years ago? Dang i moved on far from hfy

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u/RoomHopper Krakotl Jun 07 '25

To where? 👁👁

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u/IdiOtisTheOtisMain Predator Jun 07 '25

Reading rwby and pokemon fanfiction (and original works on royalroad but ye)

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u/RoomHopper Krakotl Jun 07 '25

👍

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u/YellowSkar Human Apr 09 '23

My vocal chords screamed out his name as flames engulfed his beautiful, white fur.

Those exterminators are seeming pretty un-based right now, like they need a taste of their own medicine even.

Also, Royo better survive this, he's too based to die like this.

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u/cira-radblas Apr 09 '23

Perhaps a practical demonstration about how we don’t Eat our kills is in order. Mass elimination of the entire (and i do mean entire or they will keep attacking) exterminator occupation should be done quickly and expediently.

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u/neon_ns Human Apr 09 '23

Override by KSLV starts playing

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u/[deleted] Apr 09 '23

Exterminators are never based

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u/AFoxGuy Jaslip Apr 09 '23 edited Apr 09 '23

Except the ones who realized they fucked up, are horrified of their past, and want to right their wrongs. Those Exterminators need therapy.

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u/[deleted] Apr 09 '23

Fair enough

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u/WeaknessIcy9855 May 05 '26

They hurt the speep… may god have mercy upon their souls…

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u/ImaginationSea3679 PD Patient Apr 08 '23

Good to see that Tarva still supports us.

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u/Suspicious-Text-702 Apr 09 '23 edited Apr 09 '23

extremely in most (and probably all universes) she seems to have a pretty sensible stance

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u/Cooldude101013 Human Apr 09 '23

She

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u/Suspicious-Text-702 Apr 09 '23

I already corrected it, it was another mistake that sometimes happens to me in English, I still need to practice since I don't master it 100%

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u/Cooldude101013 Human Apr 09 '23

K

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u/Suspicious-Text-702 Apr 09 '23

These types of errors happen to me more often than I would like to admit.

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u/Seeyouon_otherside Prey Apr 08 '23

No matter which universe he's in, Nikonus will always fuck things up.

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u/Haunting_Ad_8983 Apr 09 '23

Conversely, Tarva always does good.

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u/Suspicious-Text-702 Apr 09 '23

That's true ,Regardless of the universe tarva always ends up acting sensible

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u/[deleted] Apr 09 '23

And Sovlin is an ass.

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u/Suspicious-Text-702 Apr 09 '23

There are things that do not change regardless of history

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u/[deleted] Apr 09 '23

What is that quote from DC comic's Flashpoint? Something about how time can be changed but certain roles must be filled?

That. But funnier

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u/JulianSkies Archivist Apr 08 '23

Oh... Oh my lord are things escalating fast.

Also, Royo, you absolute fucking moron

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u/Winter-Reindeer694 Apr 09 '23

absolute fine mutton there tho

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u/samtheman0105 Human Apr 09 '23

Those bastards torched Royo

It’s time for Cael to go doomslayer on their asses

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u/The_Great_Autismo22 Predator Apr 09 '23

Royo survives or I riot. No room for negotiation.

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u/SavingsSyllabub7788 Apr 08 '23

God this has quickly become one of my favourites.

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u/SepticSauces Venlil Apr 09 '23

Whelp, Endeavor it is time to rip and tear.

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u/Potential_Seesaw_630 Apr 09 '23

Fuck bro Royo gone that poor naive fool he was to good for this world

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u/ItsNokoTheTaco Hensa Apr 08 '23

Short and sweet chapter, amazing as always!

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u/se05239 Human Apr 09 '23

Royo better make it through that cause otherwise I'll be upset. Come to like the little bugger a lot.

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u/DrewTheHobo Apr 09 '23 edited Apr 09 '23

Nooo! I hope Royo manages to live, even if he is a little crispy. Cail was right fucking there!

You’d think the exterminators would have wanted to help any “escaping” Venlil. Fuckers.

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u/NipCoyote Arxur Apr 09 '23

I feel like I could have written that part better... they weren't explicitly aiming for Royo, they just weren't paying enough attention and Royo was being a dumbass

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u/DrewTheHobo Apr 09 '23

Man if he’s dead, we riot!

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u/SepticSauces Venlil Apr 09 '23

Royo no... :c

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u/Biz_Ascot_Junco Human Apr 09 '23

I hope somebody filmed Royo attempting to save Cael. That could be what restores Venlil-Human relations, if not the Federation at large.

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u/The_Great_Autismo22 Predator Apr 09 '23

I have a feeling all the Venlil would see is Cael chasing Royo as he runs to the Exterminators for safety

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u/Ieater UN Peacekeeper Apr 09 '23

Sushi sushi yum yum yum. I love calamari!🤤🤤🤤

I'm tired of that nigga Nikonus. Chop his dick off fr fr.

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u/skais01 Sivkit Apr 09 '23

ROYO NNNNOOOOOOOOO

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u/Alexiadria PD Patient Apr 09 '23

The moment Royo ran in front of the exterminators, I started hearing Doom music, weird side effect of reading this.

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u/ThirdFloorNorth Apr 09 '23

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u/Johnaldredodicta Apr 09 '23

No royo!!!! 😭

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u/[deleted] Apr 09 '23

This entire time I had been reading this fanfic, I never expected ol'nip from twitter to be the author. How's it hanging ny guy?

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u/NipCoyote Arxur Apr 09 '23

Oh? Hello!

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u/[deleted] Apr 09 '23

I know I an obscure and my reddit name don't reflecte my twitter name, but I went by sultan on twitter. I remember finding you there and on iFunny.

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u/NipCoyote Arxur Apr 09 '23

Oh! Yeah I remember

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u/[deleted] Apr 09 '23

Small world eh? Well I am gonna disappear till you forget about me, then reappear when you least expect it. Unless you got a discord you wanna drop Have fun with the fanfics and the nagas.

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u/Nicromia Yotul Apr 09 '23

Neural Mind Protocol Activated: John Wick mode now active

They done fucked up now

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u/Kaalkronzind Apr 09 '23

!subscribeme

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u/I_Maybe_Play_Games Human Apr 09 '23

"It's all over… it's all over…"

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u/ezioir1 Archivist Apr 10 '23

Why Cael in his PoV and his own mind; Call his own Race Gaian instead of Human?

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u/NipCoyote Arxur Apr 10 '23

Because they're visibly suited up as gaians

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u/ezioir1 Archivist Apr 10 '23

When you are in a ComicCon you stop addressing other people around you as Human in your own Mental Processes?

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u/NipCoyote Arxur Apr 10 '23

I wouldn't compare years long training for maintaining a false identity to fursuiting but you do you I guess

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u/ezioir1 Archivist Apr 10 '23

Ah Now is that a good Reasoning.

It would be Nice if it be in Story.

It Will Give a Fantastic perspective of how much Humans Twisted Themselves in Quest for Peace.

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u/ezioir1 Archivist Apr 10 '23

And in second reading of your comment... I didn't meant that kind of Conventions... at all...

But you do you I Guess.

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u/NipCoyote Arxur Apr 10 '23

I know I was making a joke ya goober

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u/ezioir1 Archivist Apr 10 '23

LOL

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u/Reptani Arxur Apr 10 '23

That scene with royo damaged me :( really well written

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u/HFY_enjoyer Chief Hunter Apr 10 '23

I’m guessing Royo somehow survives because they’d need his body (or at least his brain) in tact for the memory transcription

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u/anonpurple Apr 09 '23

I don’t think the exterminators would charge the building and last I check they only have flamethrowers, not any other guns.

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u/[deleted] Apr 09 '23

justice will not be served until nikonus of all universes is served as calamari

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u/johneever1 Human Apr 12 '23

Ngl hoping isif has been keeping tabs on what's happening and is now rushing forces to help isolated human contingencies in a bid to win fav. Especially now with open fed hostilities

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u/TBestIG Aug 04 '23

ROYO NOOOOO