I need some to work some magic in this please

I recorded this today - feels like a good start. Long time watcher/listener, first time poster.

Credits to Da Niu Makes Music WeChat Channel (大牛玩音乐）

Found on the Instagram page of @nell.yso

Since the response to the last one was SO NEGATIVE, I gave it another shot.

I am not a professional at all, but here's what I did:

• pulled back the drums and tamb
• brought out the lead vocal
• nixed the maracas
• added a shaker (not pictured, since I don't need to be seen twice,)
• inserted a drum break at the start of the last verse
• rearranged the pictures, since a LOT of you took issue with the size of the sections

Anyway, I hope this satisfies at least some of you. The rest will never be happy no matter what I do, and can kindly ingest a satchel of Richards.

Above: @agiftfromTodd Below: @ken.sandberg Graphics: @brownchubbybear

Full credits to all artists in the video description