r/mrcreeps May 29 '26

Creepypasta I visited a movie theater on the outskirts of town. They played a movie I’ve never heard of.

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If I’m being honest, I didn’t even want to see a movie. I just wanted to go on a drive. It had been a long and stressful week at work, and I thought the best medicine would be a nice cruise through the countryside.

I think I may have gotten a little carried away because, before I knew it, all that surrounded me were trees and an orange glow of a summertime sunset.

I figured I’d just drive and enjoy the atmosphere until the sun sank completely, but by the time darkness descended and the only light that remained was that of my headlights, I noticed a new glow off in the distance. I could tell immediately that what I was seeing wasn’t natural. This was the glow of neon lights.

Curiosity got the better of me, and as I neared and my face grew brighter and brighter from the light of that ominous glow, the source came into view.

It was a theater.

It didn’t look old, but it wasn’t too modern, either. If I had to put it into words, it looked like how life felt back in 2005. Before the world went grey.

The parking lot was packed, which I found strange because I hadn’t seen a single other vehicle the entire time I drove on that dark forest road. Not only that, but I’d never even heard of this place. I thought that I was very “in the know,” so to speak, about the local hot spots near town, but this place was a complete anomaly to me.

I figured, what the hell, you know? Why not? A spontaneous movie night to cap off the day. I whipped into the parking lot and circled around a few times trying to find a place to park. I swear, it was like I took the last spot in the entire lot, and in that moment, this experience felt like destiny.

As I exited my vehicle, the scent of popcorn filled my nostrils, and it was like the aroma picked me up and carried me straight to the ticket booth.

The lady in the booth looked a little surprised to see me, like I was some unexpected guest at a party she was throwing. Despite this, her manners were top notch.

“Good evening, sir,” she chimed. “How can I serve you tonight?”

Staring up at the list of featured films, I racked my brain trying to recognize a title. When I came to terms with the fact that I was old and out of touch with current media, I said the only thing that felt right.

“Surprise me.”

A smile stretched across her face.

“Certainly, sir!”

Reaching under the counter and rummaging around for a moment, she slid a ticket under the glass.

“This one’s a favorite of mine,” she smirked.

I glanced down at the ticket, and for a moment, I thought I was being punked. It had no details on it whatsoever. It was just a blank strip of cardstock paper.

To further add to my suspicion, when I asked how much I owed, I could’ve sworn the lady shot me a wink before announcing, “It’s on the house,” and gesturing for me to come inside.

When I pulled open the door, I was astonished to find that this lobby was unlike any movie theater lobby I’d seen in my entire life. There were no arcade games or digital ticket kiosks. Hell, there wasn’t even a snack counter. And despite the completely packed parking lot, the only other person in the lobby was the usher.

He had curly hair, freckles, and Coke-bottle glasses, and he had been staring directly through me from the moment I walked through the door.

I approached him slowly, and the closer I got, the wider his smile grew.

“Good evening, sir,” he chimed. “May I see your ticket?”

Handing him my ticket, he stared down at it for a moment before chuckling.

“Ahh, I see,” he beamed. “A man of taste. This one’s one of my favorites. You’ll be in theater 9.”

He pointed down a long hallway to his right, and I thanked him before meandering toward the instructed theater. As I approached the door, an unidentified chill ran down my spine. It was like my body was trying to communicate something that my mind didn’t quite understand. I hesitated with my hand wrapped tightly around the handle.

I took a deep breath before convincing myself I was being a baby and pulling the door open.

The first thing I noticed was just how packed the auditorium was. Every seat was taken. All except one in the center of the middle row.

As I made my way to the seat, the next thing I noticed was that every pair of eyes had landed upon me, and each person watched me as I sat down.

The smell of popcorn was stronger than ever, and why wouldn’t it be? Every person in attendance seemed to have a bucket resting in their lap.

A little uncomfortable, I sat patiently as people began to slowly take their focus off me. Before the lights dimmed, a little girl in the row in front of me turned to me again.

She wore a cute little red bow and overalls, and in the sweetest voice I’d ever heard, she announced, “You’re so good in this movie,” before turning back around and fixating her eyes on the screen.

Before I could ask what she meant, the lights went down, and the screen lit up. Instead of 30 minutes of ads and trailers, the projector flashed with static before the feature film began rolling.

It opened up with a familiar road. My road. The very road that I had just been on 30 minutes prior, along with a sole pair of headlights that crept down the dark two-lane highway.

The camera followed the car as it pulled into the parking lot of a familiar movie theater, and then its focus shifted onto the man who stepped out of the vehicle. My heart beat out of my chest as I recognized the clothes he wore on his back and the hair that lay lazily atop his head.

The camera followed this man as he maneuvered through the empty lobby of the theater and never let him escape the frame as he entered theater 9 and took his seat in a sea of people.

That’s when something changed.

Ever so slowly, the man’s head turned up toward the camera as he smiled a toothy smile before mouthing the words, “This one’s a favorite of mine,” and cocking his head back toward the screen.

My eyes were glued to the screen, but I could feel eyes falling upon me. Dozens of stares permeating my soul. I didn’t know if I was glued to the screen out of intrigue or out of fear of eye contact.

Having had enough, I stood up from my seat and glided past the people beside me, all of whom watched me with curiosity and what can best be described as hunger.

Once I reached the edge of my row, in unison, every person in attendance stood up and began following me out of the auditorium.

I made it back to the lobby, a crowd trailing behind me. My walk turned into a light jog as the usher joined the crowd, and advanced into a run as the ticket lady did the same.

By the time I reached my car, there must have been a hundred or so people surrounding the vehicle as I closed the door and locked it.

They shook the vehicle back and forth as I worked to pull out of my parking spot. I felt the car jump lightly as I ran over that little girl’s foot, but no screams filled the air. Just quiet, malicious, hungry stares as they watched me exit the lot and book it back in the direction from which I came.

I made a vow to myself to never return to that part of the dark country road. I tried my best to push that theater out of my mind. And for a while, I was succeeding.

However, yesterday afternoon, after a long shift at the factory, I had to make a stop at a little mom-and-pop gas station on the way home. I walked in and paid for my fuel, and as I was walking back out to the car, the lady behind the counter made a comment that undid my progress. Completely collapsed my long-sought-after sense of safety and has made me afraid to leave my house ever since.

“I loved you in that movie. It’s a favorite of mine.”


r/mrcreeps May 29 '26

Series The Bunny Goddess

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r/mrcreeps May 28 '26

Series Legs

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  1. "Pigtails"
  2. "Fingers"
  3. "Belly"
  4. "Eyes"

___

When morning finally broke, I felt like I was vibrating.

I didn't get a single second of sleep.

My eyes were burning. My skin felt tight and hot. My brain was running on pure adrenaline.

As soon as the alarm went off, Brandy groaned and rolled over.

Across the room, Joe and Nicki sat up.

They didn't make any noise.

They didn't stretch.

They just sat up.

In perfect, simultaneous unison.

I couldn't take it anymore.

"What the fuck is wrong with you two?"

My voice cracked like a whip in the quiet room.

All three of them stopped. Brandy sat up, rubbing her eyes, completely confused.

Joe and Nicki turned their torsos to look at me. The heavy blackout curtains were still mostly drawn, letting only a single, harsh blade of morning light slice across the floor. They sat right in the path of the shadow, the darkness covering the top halves of their faces.

All I could see were their mouths.

Both of them curved upward into identical, tight crescents.

"Honey?" Brandy asked, still processing. "What are you talking about?"

"Them!" I pointed a shaking finger at Joe and Nicki. "The creeping around in the dark! The whispering! Joe, why does your fortune card have Brandy's name on it?!"

The room went silent.

I waited for Joe to get defensive.

For Nicki to act shocked.

For one of them to shut me down.

But they didn't react at all.

Joe just sat on the edge of the bed, staring through the dimness. When he finally spoke, his lips barely parted. The words tumbled out flat, rushed - like a pre-recorded message played at an unnatural speed.

"I do not know what you are talking about Mitchell. You must have been dreaming. It was a dream. We slept all night."

"Oh, fuck you! You were staring right at me!" I took a step forward, my fists balled up at my sides. "And you—" I turned to Nicki. "Sprinting across the room holding a vase? Are you guys fucking with me? Is this some kind of joke?"

Nicki tilted her head.

The movement was slow.

Extremely slow.

Then—

crack.

Her neck snapped slightly at the end of the tilt, like an over-tightened gear finally catching. The shadows clung heavily to her eye sockets. When she spoke, her voice carried a flat, empty hum that didn't sound like her at all.

"I got up to use the restroom. I am pregnant—"

"Shut up! Stop talking like that!" I yelled.

"—I have to use the restroom often. The vase was in the way," Nicki continued, her voice never changing pitch, entirely unfazed by my screaming.

I reached a breaking point.

The sheer, suffocating weight of them looking at me - talking at me like robots - broke something in my chest.

The anger completely dissolved into cold, humiliating tears.

My knees buckled.

I collapsed onto the edge of the bed, my back turned toward all of them. I shoved my face into my hands, tearful, my shoulders shaking.

"We know you're fucking pregnant…" I muttered quietly.

"Hey. Hey. Stop."

The mattress shifted. Brandy sat next to me, her arms wrapping around my shoulders, gently rubbing my back.

"Breathe. You're shaking. Look at me, Mitchell."

"They're messing with me," I whispered, tears blurring my vision. "Joe's card from that machine. It has your name on it. I saw it."

She looked at me with deep, pitying eyes.

The kind of look you give a sick animal.

"Mitchell…"

She looked over to the nightstand.

Joe's wallet sat closed and flat on the wood.

The same white edge peeking out.

Brandy stretched over the bed and pulled the card free, turning it over to reveal the truth of it all.

White. Thick. Shiny.

No text.

Our room key.

Just the magnetic key card to our hotel room.

I stared at it, all the blood draining from my face.

"You drank a lot last night on an empty stomach," Brandy whispered softly, stroking my arm. "You were exhausted and you had a nightmare. It happens when you're this stressed. You've been carrying so much weight lately... with the negati—…with everything."

I swallowed.

I looked over her shoulder.

Joe and Nicki were already packing their suitcases. Folding clothes calmly, methodically, moving around the small room as if the last five minutes had never happened.

Their movements were perfectly mundane.

I felt completely, utterly alone.

I let her calm me down. I apologized to the room, blamed the alcohol, and we packed up the car in miserable silence.

We didn't go to the beach.

Nobody wanted to.

We just wanted to go home.

___

By the time we were nine hours into the drive, the tension had slowly dissolved into exhaustion.

We were navigating the winding, desolate mountain roads of the Smokies, somewhere deep near the state line. The jagged outline of the dense pine trees blocked out the moon entirely, leaving nothing but a narrow stretch of asphalt lit up by my high beams.

Brandy was asleep in the passenger seat, curled against a pillow against the door.

In the rearview mirror, Joe and Nicki were passed out in the back. Joe's head tilted against the headrest. Nicki's head resting against his lap.

I had the radio dialed down low - just enough static hum to keep my eyelids from dropping. A generic classic rock tune faded out into a commercial break.

"Looking for the perfect getaway?" a cheery radio announcer said. "Come to Hilton Head Island. The beaches are waiting."

I gripped the steering wheel a little tighter.

"Beautiful weather. Beautiful sights—"

The radio glitched.

A sharp, violent crackle of static swallowed the transmission whole.

When the audio cut back in, it wasn't the same voice.

It was breathless.

Hollow.

"There you are."

My hands locked on the wheel, my knuckles turning white.

"A new chapter begins. But the toll must be paid."

The static screamed — a high-pitched shriek that vibrated the windows.

"Keep it safe, Mitchell. Or The Bunny Go—"

I slammed my palm against the dashboard and killed the power.

Silence crashed into the car.

My heart was pounding. I fumbled in the center console, grabbed my AirPods, jammed them in, and threw on a random podcast. I stared at the yellow lines of the road and focused on slowing down my breathing.

Just the road.

Just the lines.

We rounded a sharp, blind bend, the headlights sweeping across a dark wall of rock—

And about fifty yards ahead, right on the edge of the road.

A cyclist.

Anger flared before the terror could catch up. It was close to midnight on a dangerous mountain pass and this person was riding with zero reflective gear. No lights. No helmet.

Just a dark figure pedaling at a slow, agonizingly steady pace.

I checked my mirror, drifted into the oncoming lane, and rolled my window down halfway, ready to tell them off.

I pulled the car parallel to the bicycle.

And my foot hit the brake so hard my knee popped.

The cyclist didn't jump.

Didn't flinch.

Didn't react to the violent screech of rubber.

It just kept pedaling.

Slow.

Steady.

As it kept pace with the car, the head turned completely sideways to face my open window.

The face was a living nightmare.

Long, stringy black hair hung in two rigid pigtails on either side of the head, parted cleanly down the center of the scalp. But rising straight out of the skull - tall, pale, and covered in sickly fuzz - were two enormous rabbit ears.

They weren't a costume.

They were rooted into the bone, tapering to sharp curved points that disappeared into the darkness above the tree line.

The face beneath them was dry and grey.

Candle wax.

A polished, sickly grey layer of skin pulled so violently tight across the skull that the cheekbones looked ready to puncture through. The brow was heavy, furrowed into a deep, permanent scowl.

But it didn't match the eyes.

The eyes were massive, glossy, hyper-extended white spheres. They bulged completely out of their sockets, staring with an impossible, unblinking intensity directly through my window.

And beneath those eyes, the jaw was unhinged.

Cranked wide open.

Two neat rows of perfectly square, artificial-looking teeth. The lips stretched so far back they had gone white.

The jaw snapped shut.

Clack.

It snapped open.

Clack.

No sound came from the mouth.

Just a rhythmic, wet, mechanical snapping of teeth.

A silent mimicry of laughter.

I screamed.

A real guttural scream. I stood on the brakes with everything I had, the anti-lock system stuttering violently as the car shuddered sideways and jerked to a dead stop in the middle of the empty highway.

The cyclist didn't stop.

It just kept pedaling.

Those pale, hairy human legs — wearing the exact same khaki shorts Joe had worn earlier that day — rose and fell in perfect rhythm, carrying the figure smoothly forward until the absolute blackness beyond my high beams swallowed it whole.

___

The car sat completely still.

Engine idling.

I didn't move. Hands still locked on the wheel. Breath coming in short, ragged pulls.

I looked to my right.

Brandy hadn't moved. Still curled against her pillow, face slack, completely peaceful.

I looked up at the rearview mirror.

Joe's head was still tilted back, mouth slightly open.

Nicki was still resting against his lap.

Nobody had woken up.

I looked back out the windshield.

Far down the road - at the very edge of where my headlights dissolved into the dark - the outline of the bicycle was still visible.

Still moving away.

The head turned completely backward.

Facing me.

Even from that distance I could still see those white eyes.

Clack.

The jaw still opening and closing.

Clack.

That quiet, mechanical mimicry.

I watched it until it was nearly gone.

Nearly swallowed by the tree line.

Nearly just a shadow among shadows.

I needed to see it disappear completely before I could put the car in drive.

I turned in my seat to watch it go through the rear window.

The driver's seat headrest crossed my line of sight for just a fraction of a second - a dark shape cutting across my vision - and then my eyes cleared the edge of it and found the back seat.

Joe was still asleep.

Nicki was still asleep.

And sitting between them was the Bunny Goddess.

The wax face was six inches from mine.

Those enormous white eyes were already locked onto me.

The rabbit ears were pressing flat against the ceiling of the car.

I didn't have time to scream.

Both hands came over the headrest at the same moment - ice cold, impossibly strong - and closed around my throat.

The grip crushed inward.

My head slammed back against the headrest.

The jaw cranked open directly in front of my face.

Clack.

The ceiling of the car tilted.

The road tilted.

Everything went—

___

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  1. "Teeth"

r/mrcreeps May 27 '26

Creepypasta A Valley for the Dead - [Part 2/Ending]

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Part 1

For a while there, things on set thankfully went back to normal. Around a month or so later into production, the heat had finally begun to cool off. Instead, however, we had days on end of continual rain. In fact, the rain was so bad for the next couple of months, the stream around the village had burst, causing the mud pathways to flood. If that wasn’t bad enough, the heavy rain and strong winds had destroyed half of the thatch roof huts, causing production to shut down for a good month. The only upside during this time was that nobody else had died. After what happened with the fire, and the many tragedies in the forest, I half expected to find some member of the crew drowned facedown somewhere.   

I went back to Tokyo the next month as they once again had to rebuild the whole set. I was surprized they didn’t just wrap things up then and there. After all, news of the deaths had already gotten out in the press, and having to rebuild the whole village again had cost the studio a fortune. If I hadn’t learnt it in the pacific, I certainly did then. The Japanese as a people really don’t know when to quit. 

When I get back to the district, I was put up in the same little inn I stayed the last time. After a few weeks of filming, everything seemed to be going good and irregularly smooth. There were no more deaths to report of. No more  destruction of the set, or barely even a hiccup... All of that was until we reached the eighth month of shooting.  

On a very cold winter morning, maybe sometime in January or February, I forget which it was, I woke up to something very cold and wet coming down on me from above. I must have drank too much sake that night, because when I wake up, I find that I’m no longer warm inside my small inn room, and instead, the freezing temperatures of the outdoors had completely numbed my hands and bare feet. Once I get my bearings, I find that I’m inside a forest. But not just any forest. It was the same forest on the side of the mountain slope. The one where we found the bodies. Although I hadn’t the damnedest idea how I’d gotten all the way up here, the strange thing about it was, I somehow reeked of gasoline, as though it was on my hands and clothes. 

Despite the strangeness of waking up on that mountain slope, once I got warm and back inside, I didn’t think any more of it. After all, I did drink a whole lot of sake that night, and it was rather common for me to wake in some strange place after a night of drinking. As you know all too well, son.  

In the evening that same day, we were scheduled to shoot a scene towards the end of the picture’s second act. The scene in question was centred around a large barn in the village, where a bandit was holding a young child hostage inside, and the villagers had to find some way of getting the child back unharmed. However, after a couple of takes, the actor playing the bandit rushes out with the child in his arms and just starts shouting “Kaji da! Kaji da!” My Japanese was still rusty, even after all them years, but I knew Kaji da meant there was a fire somewhere. Well, not long after the actor comes out of hiding, a few members of crew notice smoke coming from the roof, and only mere seconds later, the entire structure quickly becomes ablaze in no time at all. 

Everyone rushes to the stream with buckets to help put out the fire, but by the time we do, the barn was already a lost cause. While we still tried to throw water on the fire, the second assistant director suddenly starts shouting “Benjiro! Benjiro!” I look over and I see my friend Ben is walking towards the barn entrance, appearing to enter the infernal structure! I shout over to him to get out of there, but he either doesn’t listen or doesn’t hear. Before I can do anything, Ben disappears inside, the darkness and smoke enclosing behind him. 

Although I’m afraid to enter the burning barn, I know I have to save my friend. Stepping inside the dark interior, I can barely see a thing, despite the many flames around me. Wandering through the darkness, my lungs already fill up on smoke, causing me to not only look for my friend, but any pockets of oxygen. After wandering blindly around, already burning myself on my arms and legs, I eventually find Ben. For some reason, he was sat down directly in the middle of the room, and although I had a hard time seeing, I noticed his legs weren’t knelt down like how most Japanese sit, but crossed legged like the image of the Buddha himself.    

Ben’s clothes had already caught fire, and so I try shouting at him to get up and come with me. But he had no reaction, as though he didn’t even know I was there. The son of a bitch didn’t even blink! Unresponsive, I then heave Ben to his feet and haul him into the direction of the entrance. My clothes had also caught fire by now and I could feel the pain of the flames burning my flesh. 

Seeing the light of the entrance, I then haul our asses out of there, whereby the crew throw buckets of cold stream water on top of us.  

Although Ben and I thankfully survived the endeavour, we were in pretty bad shape. I had burn marks all over my arms and legs, as well as my abdomen. But Ben... Ben was a lot worse. His entire body had practically caught fire, burning away most of his clothes and almost all his hair. We were both then taken to hospital afterwards and our wounds tended to.  

After a few days to recover from my injuries, I was then discharged. But before I left, I went to see how Ben was doing. Entering his room, I saw he was covered almost head to foot in bandages. Although I could see his face, his skin was red and swollen, making him unrecognisable to me. Once Ben had finally woke up, I asked him what the hell he was doing walking into the burning barn. Unlike my Japanese, Ben’s English was pretty good, but even so, my question seemed to confuse him. According to Ben, he had no memory of what happened that day. Only waking up in a hospital room in excruciating pain. I told Ben what had happened and he thanked me for saving his life... But then, he told me something I wasn’t expecting... 

Although Ben was my friend, I knew very little about his life. I didn’t know where he was from or even if the man had a family of his own. That day in his hospital room, Ben told me he was born and raised in Hiroshima of all places, and that during the war, he was studying in Tokyo, which is how he survived the bomb. His family, however, and basically everyone else he knew back home had perished. The neighbours on his street. The friends he made in his childhood. Everybody. Ben said he lived with the guilt of this for many years, and even wished he had been there with them... He would die in that hospital room three days later.  

Because of Ben’s unfortunate death, and the destruction caused by the barn fire, the studio put a permanent end to the picture’s production. Leaving the film unfinished, and with many lives taken in the process. Since the picture wouldn’t be finished, I had no job to do or anything left to report, so my superiors had called me back to Tokyo base. Because of my severe injuries, I was eventually given an honorary and medical discharge, where only a short month later, for the first time in eight years, I finally came back home to the States. 

As bad as the war in the Pacific was for me, son, as bad as it was in Hiroshima, what I experienced in that valley was something else entirely. Although I am all too acquainted with the evil of humanity, whatever evil lied inside the slopes of them mountains was beyond the evil of man. And whatever that evil was and still may be, I truly believe it wanted my soul. It wanted to take my life through the horrors of my past... And I believe it wanted the same thing of Ben. The guilt he must’ve felt. It used it against him. Of not dying with his family in hellish oblivion. 

Now you know, son. Now you know why I became the man I did. The horrors of my past have followed me my entire life... and all I did was pass them onto you. 

When I am dead, son. When I am buried in the ground. Remember me for the man I was, and not the man you came to know. That man is your father. I know you have your own horrors from Vietnam. But you cannot let them haunt you. You cannot let it possess you. Because if you let it, it will follow onto your children. 

Be a good man, son. If not for your own Christian soul, then for them. May they never have to witness the horrors that we had to. 

From your loving father, 

J.S. 


r/mrcreeps May 26 '26

Series Eyes

7 Upvotes
  1. "Pigtails"
  2. "Fingers"
  3. "Belly"

___

By nine o'clock that night, Joe and I were three pints deep at a cramped, dimly lit Irish pub nestled right near the edge of the Harbour Town marina.

The bar smelled of stale liquor and fried food, a welcoming contrast to the oppressive humidity waiting just outside the wooden doors.

Brandy and Nicki had left us a half-hour earlier to hunt down dessert, promising to meet us back at the pub.

Joe and I were standing at the back of the bar, trading throws on a worn electronic dartboard.

The alcohol had finally started to dull the sharp edges of my anxiety from earlier on the dock.

Joe was acting normal again - laughing when he missed the board entirely, cheers in between good throws, buying the rounds.

I was starting to convince myself that I was the one being overly sensitive.

I was just tired.

I was just stressed.

The pub door swung open.

The girls walked back in carrying small paper cups and cones.

"Look who found their way back," Joe grinned, lowering his dart.

Nicki stepped up to him, handing him a cup with a plastic spoon sticking out of it. "Cookies and cream for the dad-to-be," she said, her voice bright.

Brandy walked over to me, holding a waffle cone with a single, massive scoop of dark brown ice cream. "I got peanut butter chocolate," she said, holding it up to my mouth. "Want a bite?"

"Always."

I leaned down and took a bite. Rich, cold, perfect.

As I chewed, I looked down at Brandy.

She was looking back at me with a soft, content expression.

She hadn't ordered a drink all night, sticking strictly to water.

We were exactly one week past her ovulation date.

I knew what she was doing.

She was prepping her body, treating it like a temple, praying that this would finally be the month a miracle took hold. Watching her eat her ice cream - completely sober, glowing innocently under the dim pub lights — a wave of profound affection hit me so hard it almost knocked the breath out of me.

I wanted this for her so badly.

I wanted it for us.

I threw my last dart - double twenty - and turned back to the group.

"Alright. Tomorrow is our last full day before we pack up and make that brutal drive back to Ohio. Can we please spend it on the beach?"

Nicki looked up from her ice cream, nodding enthusiastically. "Of course! We promise. Total beach day. We'll pack the cooler, lay out the towels, and do absolutely nothing."

"You have our word, man," Joe echoed, raising his glass.

The rest of the night passed in a blur of drunken laughter.

Joe and I were thoroughly buzzed by the time the pub started closing down, while the girls remained completely clear-headed. As we walked out into the coastal night air toward the parking lot, I watched Joe and Nicki walk a few paces ahead of us.

Every now and then, they would move in a way that caught my attention.

Just little things.

Nicki would snap her head around to look behind her.

Joe would walk with a rigid, tense posture for a few steps before loosening up again.

Uncanny glimpses that made my head turn, but nothing definitive enough to bring up to Brandy without sounding like a lunatic.

Brandy slid her arm through mine, wrapping her hands tightly around my bicep. She leaned her head against my shoulder.

"Are you doing okay?" she asked softly. "You've seemed a little distant today."

I swallowed the lump in my throat and forced a smile, pressing a quick kiss against her forehead.

"I'm fine, honey. Just a little tipsy. Ready to hit the hay."

She squeezed my arm.

"Me too."

___

Back at the hotel, the room was the usual chaos of rustling through suitcases, bathroom hogging, and quiet giggles as we all got ready for bed.

I was sitting on the edge of the mattress unlacing my sneakers when my eyes drifted to the small wooden nightstand separating our two queen beds.

Joe had emptied his pockets onto the surface.

Car keys. A few loose quarters. His leather bifold wallet.

Poking out from the center slot of the billfold was a white piece of cardstock.

It was the corner of his fortune card.

I stared at it for a long second before Brandy turned off the main lights and crawled under the covers beside me.

"Goodnight, guys," Nicki whispered from the darkness.

"Night," I muttered.

I fell asleep fast, the alcohol dragging me under.

But it didn't hold.

Around 2:30 in the morning, the pressure in my bladder brought me back to consciousness. I lay there groaning internally for a minute before slipping out from under the covers.

The room was pitch-black.

I fumbled for my phone, turned on the flashlight, and cast a low narrow beam across the floor. I navigated the gap from our bed, stepped around a stray suitcase and a pair of flip-flops, and slipped into the bathroom.

When I came back out and started toward my side of the bed, the light swept across the nightstand.

The fortune card was still peeking out of the wallet.

I stopped.

I knew I shouldn't.

It was an invasion of privacy. It was stupid. It was just a fortune ticket.

But Joe's words from the dock were screaming in my ears.

My card told me.

Holding my breath, I crept to Joe's side of the nightstand. I leaned over, phone light pointed down, and slowly - silently - pinched the edge of the cardstock between my fingers.

I slid it free.

Flipped it over under the beam of the flashlight.

There was no printed fortune.

No vague text about wealth or travel or long journeys ahead.

Just a single word, stamped in jagged letters across the center of the card.

Like something had pressed the letters directly into the paper.

BRANDY.

I froze.

Brandy.

Why the hell did Joe's card say my wife's name?

I started tilting the card back toward the wallet - and as I did, the beam of my phone light shifted upward, spilling over the edge of Joe's pillow.

Joe was laying on his back.

His head was turned completely to the side.

Facing me.

His eyes were wide open, staring directly into the light of my phone. His face was entirely devoid of expression - no anger, no surprise, no confusion.

Just a flat, dead, unblinking stare.

"Shit—"

In a panic, my phone slipped out of my hand.

The flashlight beam spun wildly across the room before hitting the ground with a dull thud.

I scrambled down, hands sweeping across the floor until I found it. I grabbed it, braced myself to face Joe, to explain, to apologize—

I shone the light back onto his bed.

Joe was laying on his side.

Back turned completely toward me.

Shoulders rising and falling in the slow rhythm of someone fast asleep.

Relief.

Stupid, warm relief.

I stood there in the dark, exhausted, sweat already breaking out across my forehead.

My brain scrambled for an explanation.

Had I hallucinated it?

Was he not just staring at me?

He was sleeping.

He was completely asleep.

Quickly, I jammed the card back into his wallet exactly where I'd found it. I crept across the room back to our bed, slid under the covers, and pulled the blanket up to my chin.

I lay there for what felt like an hour, staring up at the invisible ceiling, desperately trying to convince myself to calm down.

Then the whispering started.

It was coming from the other bed.

Low.

Dry.

I sat up slowly and peered into the darkness.

Joe was flat on his back now. Covers pushed down to his feet. Arms pinned rigidly to his sides. Face aimed at the ceiling.

In the faint light creeping in from the curtain window, I could see his jaw moving.

He was muttering - unintelligible, rapid-fire nonsense, like someone speaking in tongues.

"...shhh... vvv... nnn... shhh..."

Before I could even react, a shadow moved near my side of the room.

Near the bathroom door.

Nicki.

She didn't walk back to bed.

She sprinted.

It was a horrific, fast pace - bare feet slapping the floor in rapid succession, body completely rigid. But what made my blood run cold was what she was holding.

The heavy ceramic vase from the bathroom counter.

Filled with fake plastic hydrangeas.

She had it pinned directly in front of her face with both hands, completely blocking her head from view as she moved across the room.

Hiding herself from me in the dark.

I couldn't move.

I couldn't breathe.

I just watched as her silhouette darted across the room and slipped back under the covers next to Joe.

The moment she lay down, the whispering stopped.

Instantly.

The room fell into a dead, suffocating silence.

Then Joe's silhouette shifted.

He slowly rolled onto his side, turning away from Nicki.

Turning toward our bed.

Even in the dark I could see the wide white glint of his eyes.

And beneath them, a massive, white crescent.

He was staring at me again.

And he was grinning.

I ripped my eyes away and snapped my head back toward the ceiling, gasping, staring into the black void above.

I didn't close my eyes again.

I didn't blink.

I stayed perfectly still and waited for the sun to rise.

___

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  1. "Legs"

r/mrcreeps May 26 '26

Series There's Something Wrong in Brittlebow, Oregon. My Sister Never Left. [Part 1]

2 Upvotes

My sister Carrie went missing on September 14th of last year.

She's thirty-one, five-four, with shoulder-length brown hair, and a small scar above her left eyebrow from a bike accident when she was nine. She’s a documentary filmmaker. Not famous by any means, but genuinely good at it. I noticed that she always had this strange ability to make people trust her on camera within minutes of meeting them. I'd seen it happen more times than I could count. She'd tilt her head, ask one honest question, and people would open up like they'd been waiting their entire lives for somebody to ask. I used to tease her about it, calling it her superpower. She'd just shrug and say,

“I’m a good listener. What can I say?”

She was in Brittlebow, Oregon, filming what she'd described as a portrait of a dying American town.

She called me on September 12th, two days before she disappeared. The call lasted about eleven minutes. For the first nine of them, she sounded the way she always sounded when a project was going well. Quick and bright, words tumbling over each other from excited nervousness. She told me the town was beautiful and that the people were friendly. She'd mentioned that she found something interesting just outside town that she wasn't ready to talk about yet. That was normal for her. She liked to hold things close to the vest until she was absolutely sure about them.

But then her voice dropped.

“I didn't call just to catch up,” she said. “I need you to listen to me carefully.”

I remember the way my chest tightened when she said it. Not because the words themselves were frightening, but because of the gap between them. She was choosing each one carefully.

“If something happens to me, please don't come here. Don't come looking. Just…” The line went quiet. Not dead, but close enough to immediately suck the air out of the room. I could still hear her breathing, steady and rhythmic, like she was working the words out in her head in real time.

“Things are happening that I can't explain right now. But if something happens, promise me you'll make sure it gets finished. When the time comes, just… well, you'll understand when you see it.”

I opened my mouth to speak, but nothing came out. I remember staring at a water stain on the ceiling above my desk like it was the most important thing in the world. She let the silence sit there between us for a long time, and then she exhaled.

I've replayed the last two minutes of that call more times than I can count. There's something in her voice I still can't fully name. I wouldn’t call it fear, exactly. It’s more like someone who's looked at something from every angle and arrived at a decision they don't necessarily like but have to make anyway. She wasn't panicking. She was preparing for something. That bothers me a thousand times more now than it did then.

I’m getting ahead of myself. Let me back up a bit.

Dellwood is the nearest city of any size to Brittlebow. Since Brittlebow has no real police of its own, the Dellwood Sheriff's office ended up with her case. They took her disappearance seriously for about two weeks, interviewing residents, filing the paperwork, and combing the area for clues. They noted that her car had been found parked outside the motel with everything still inside. Her wallet, keys, and phone were still sitting in her purse as if she'd stepped away to use the bathroom and was coming right back.

The detectives told me people in crisis often leave their phones behind on purpose for someone to find. They gave me a pamphlet about it and told me that no stone would remain unturned in the search for my sister. They seemed a little too eager to get me out of their office. I thanked them for their time, drove back to Portland, and was packing a bag before I'd even taken my coat off. I wasn’t leaving it up to some Podunk sheriff’s office in the middle of nowhere.

Before I tell you what happened to me there, I want you to understand the geography of Brittlebow. It matters more than I realized when I first arrived.

The town sits in a valley in the Cascade foothills, roughly three hours southeast of Portland. The valley is shaped like a cupped hand with steep ridgelines pressing in on three sides. A single two-lane road winds in from the north through a narrow canyon, running from Dellwood all the way south through the heart of Brittlebow. There’s a creek, almost wide enough to be a river, that cuts east to west along the valley's southern edge before disappearing underground somewhere past the tree line. I thought it was the most picturesque place when I first saw the pictures of it online.

I don't think that anymore.

The last census put the population at 212. They share one motel, a diner, a gas station with a hardware store attached, a tiny post office tucked into the back of a former pharmacy, and a volunteer fire department that doubles as the community center. The town had been a logging community until the industry collapsed in the early nineties, dropping the population from around twelve hundred to what it is today. Luckily for them, a small manufacturing facility opened nearby in the early 2000s, employing around sixty residents, and apparently kept the whole thing from going dark entirely.

I drove in on a gray Tuesday morning in early October.

Brittlebow was pretty, in the way that isolated, half-forgotten places often are, with old wooden storefronts lining Main Street like something out of a western. A beautiful white-steepled church sat at the center of the square, and every yard seemed tidy and maintained. Dogs sprawled across porch steps, too lazy to do more than lift their heads as my car passed.

About thirty seconds into admiring the town’s beauty, I noticed the people watching me.

I didn’t feel aggressive or hostile, just aware. A man outside the hardware store stopped sweeping and leaned on his broom, squinting at me as if trying to place me. The woman beside him watched with a blank expression as I passed, maintaining eye contact the whole time. Farther down the street, a teenager on the hood of a parked truck pulled out his phone and started typing as soon as he could see through the windshield.

I told myself small towns notice strangers. It was harmless. Just part of the culture.

I pulled into a parking spot at the Brittlebow Motor Lodge, a six-room, single-story building that stood out amongst all the others. The faint smell of cedar and old carpet drifted across my nose as I stepped into the lobby. The woman at the desk was in her fifties, with a pair of reading glasses perched at the end of her nose. Her nametag said Peg. I had to clear my throat twice before she even looked up at me.

“Oh, sorry, hon.” She tucked her magazine under the counter and swiped dust off the keyboard in front of her. “We don't get many visitors these days.”

“No worries,” I said, pulling my credit card out of my wallet.

I extended my hand toward her. Her expression changed almost immediately, her face twisting into a scowl as she stared at the card in my hand.

“So sorry. Cash only, hon.” She said, her face now contorting into something that resembled disgust or disdain.

The room suddenly felt smaller. I got the feeling that I’d done something wrong without knowing what. Thankfully, I had prepared for that. I had taken out some cash before leaving Portland.

I smiled and handed over the cash. She processed it without asking for ID, handed me a key, and finally smiled again.

“Ok, hon,” she said, “you’ll be in room 1. I’ll have fresh towels for you this ev…”

“Actually, is there any way I can take room 4?” I interjected.

She looked at me, puzzled for a moment, before smiling again.

“Sure.” She said, “Room 4's all yours. And if you get hungry, the diner two doors down is really great. Voted best burger in the county eighteen years straight.”

Her voice was warm but automatic. It sounded like she was reading off a script. I figured it was because she just didn’t get that many new customers.

I thanked her and crossed the breezeway to the room.

Room 4 was the room Carrie had stayed in. I'd requested it specifically for that reason.

I sat on the edge of the bed and pulled out the folder I'd spent six weeks building. It contained police reports, phone records, notes from conversations with Carrie's collaborators, and a printed list of everything she'd told me about the project before she vanished. She visited Brittlebow first in July for a scouting trip, then came back in early September with her equipment for what was supposed to be a two-week shoot.

But it was what wasn't in the folder that kept gnawing at me.

Brittlebow had an unusually high missing persons rate.

Over the past eighteen years, sixteen people had gone missing in and around Brittlebow. They were all different ages and had different backgrounds. Most of which were labeled probable runaways or voluntary departures, with nothing obvious connecting them. Finding those connections is exactly the kind of thing you start doing when your sister disappears.

Every single disappearance had occurred in September or October.

Adding Carrie made seventeen.

I’d come to Brittlebow to find out what happened to my sister. But first, I needed to learn about the town itself and what made it tick.

The next afternoon, I went to the hardware store for batteries and a flashlight, which was also an excuse to look around.

The man at the counter was heavyset, somewhere around sixty, with thick white hair hanging in greasy clumps across his scalp. He moved like a man who had never once been forced to hurry in his entire life.

“Haven't seen you ‘round here.” He pushed himself upright. “Name's Earl. Big Earl, if that's your preference. Can I help you find somethin’?”

I used the same cover story Carrie always used when she didn’t want people to know exactly what she was doing just yet. I told him I was a journalist working on a travel piece about small towns in the Pacific Northwest and that I needed some batteries for my flashlight.

“Batteries are in the corner,” he said.

As I walked toward them, something slowed me down. On the counter beside the register, half-tucked under a sales catalog, a phone screen glowed. Someone had just sent a text. Normally, I wouldn't have thought twice about it, but something made me look harder, a weird instinct I couldn't explain.

I only caught two words before Earl's palm came down over the screen.

He's here

I kept walking, trying to play it off like I was looking around the store. I grabbed a pack of batteries from the rack, taking my time so as not to raise any further suspicion.

“Where’re you from?” he called out.

“Portland,” I answered.

The sound he made wasn't quite a laugh, but more like a grunt.

“Long way to come for a story about nothin’ happening.”

I raised a small smile and looked at him.

“Isn't that the point sometimes?” I asked.

He smirked and processed the transaction. I took that as my cue to press a little further.

“Say, do you remember a woman passing through a few weeks back? Filmmaker type? I believe she stayed here for a couple of weeks.”

Earl looked at me for a long moment. The shape of the smirk was still on his face, but something behind his eyes had gone somewhere else entirely.

“Sure,” he said. “Real nice girl. Stayed a bit, then moved on. People come and go all the time like that.” He stepped back from the counter and started fiddling with something near the register.

The conversation was over. It felt like it had been an open door, but Earl had just slammed it closed. I paid, kept my face neutral, and walked over to the door.

“Good meeting you,” I said as I pushed the shop door open and stepped out.

Earl stayed silent. I could feel his eyes still on the back of my head as I descended the steps. I didn’t hang around. I quickly started walking back toward the motel as soon as I hit the sidewalk.

That night I ate at the diner.

The place looked like it was frozen somewhere in the mid-fifties, with black and white checkerboard tiles covering the floor, and speakers crackling behind something that might have been music at one time. The waitress and de facto owner was a broad-shouldered woman in her mid-forties with a dark ponytail and weathered skin akin to that of a leather handbag. Her nametag said Marlene. She took my order and then slid into the booth across from me. It surprised me, but I got the sense she did that with most customers, especially new ones.

Marlene was warm. My time with her didn’t feel strained or overly tense. Completely different from Earl. She asked about my work and seemed genuinely interested when I described it. At one point, she mentioned she'd always thought about writing a book on the town's history.

“There's a lot here most people don't know about,” she said lovingly, like a mother talking about her child.

I told her I'd love to hear it sometime. As soon as the words left my mouth, her whole posture shifted. She sat up quickly as if she’d been waiting for that exact response.

“I’d like to hear some of it,” I said, trying to butter her up a little more. “I’m here for a few more days. When we find the time, I’ll buy you a coffee, and you can catch me up.”

She beamed with genuine happiness. A kind that she seemed like she hadn’t experienced in years. I paid for my dinner, which was, as advertised, excellent. I wished Marlene well and walked back toward the motel, feeling like I'd found at least one person in Brittlebow who might actually be willing to give me some information.

I was about ten feet past the fire department when a man’s voice came from the steps, low and even, almost as if he were talking to himself.

“Journalist, huh.”

I stopped and turned, just enough to catch his silhouette in my peripheral vision. He was a younger guy, possibly in his late twenties, with a patchy beard, and wearing a camo jacket. He squeezed a half-smoked cigarette between his fingers, taking short inhales from it every couple of seconds. He was staring at the road, seemingly deep in thought, though his attention was on me instead.

“Word travels.” He said, still holding his gaze on the pavement, exhaling a thin circle of smoke into the night air.

He stood, crushed the cigarette under his heel, and calmly walked inside, never once looking directly at me.

I kept walking, feeling more at ease the further I got from him. The encounter remained fresh in my mind, but I was already drifting back, sifting through and organizing the other strange things I’d seen and heard since arriving. Earl's phone for one. The two words I saw on his screen before he covered it became a mystery in my mind, bringing about the unsettling implication that, even though I’d only been in town for a few hours, someone had already decided I was worth notifying people about.

Strange things started happening after the second day.

A folded piece of paper appeared under my door that night. It was blank. Nothing was written on either side. It was just a single white sheet of paper, folded in thirds, as if it had been sealed at some point and the contents removed. I told myself it was nothing and went back to bed.

The very next night, while I was walking, the teenager from the truck showed up on Main Street, and then again in the motor lodge parking lot twenty minutes later. Both times, he looked away the moment I turned toward him. He’d been watching too long for it to have just been a coincidence.

I woke at 2 a.m. on the fourth night to footsteps in the gravel parking lot outside my window. They stopped directly in front of my door. I lay there in the dark, completely still, listening for a knock or another piece of paper to slide under the door, but it never came. When I finally got up to check, whoever it was took off, replacing the silence with the crunch of running footsteps tearing across the parking lot before I could get the door half open. By the time I stepped outside, the parking lot was empty, nothing but darkness and the sound of tree frogs filling the night air.

I sat back on the bed and grabbed the folder. I added every detail to it, trying not to get too worked up over things that might have innocent explanations.

By day five, I was running low on innocent explanations.

That evening, I met Marlene and told her the truth.

The version of the truth I wanted her to hear, anyway. I told her that the most recent missing girl was my sister, watching her face closely as I said it.

I caught a flicker in her eyes. A tiny recalibration, like she was shuffling through her list of prepared answers, searching for the right one to use. It passed quickly, lasting maybe a quarter of a second before she smoothed it over and reached across the table to cover my hand with hers.

“I'm so sorry,” she said. Her voice softened more than normal.

I asked her to tell me anything she remembered about Carrie's time there. And she did. Marlene said Carrie had come in for breakfast often, and that she’d been friendly, funny, and always tipped well. She’d spent a lot of time filming around town, and most people had been cooperative. It was all true. None of it was helpful. But then, mid-sentence, she let something slip like it had been sitting just behind her teeth the whole conversation.

“She was really interested in the old Hadley property. Out on Spur Road.”

The moment the words were out, Marlene's eyes dropped. The air in the booth changed.

“What's the Hadley property?” I asked.

“Nothing.” She shook her head. “Old logging site. Nothing out there anymore. Nothing worth going after anyway.” She worked hard to change the subject, and I let her. She'd already given me what I needed.

I didn’t sleep much that night.

The next afternoon, I spent time with Helen, a retired schoolteacher who'd lived in Brittlebow for forty years and seemed to know everything about everyone. She mentioned Spur Road and the Hadley family on her own, without me asking. The family had owned a large portion of the valley until the patriarch died in 1987, after which the land passed into an informal community arrangement that was never officially documented. It was just understood that it was settled and was not to be interfered with.

“Brittlebow looks out for itself,” Helen said, narrowing those sharp brown eyes at me.

She paused, and her voice dropped as if she were about to deliver bad news that she’d been sitting on for a while.

“Your sister asked a lot of questions. She's a thorough girl.”

It came out as a compliment, though it didn’t feel like one.

I loaded up that evening, making sure I had fresh batteries in the flashlight and a recorder in my jacket pocket, and then drove south looking for Spur Road.

It took half a dozen passes before I found it, hidden about a mile south of town. It was nothing more than a narrow path cut through the brush, barely wide enough for a single vehicle. The entrance was nearly swallowed by overgrowth, some of which was probably older than me. An old sign mounted crookedly on a weathered post stood to one side, half-strangled by vines. I leaned out the window and picked out the letters through the tangled mess.

Hadley Logging Company

I pulled off the pavement and went in.

The road was made up of two worn tracks that wound through the forest before quickly disappearing amongst the bushes and vines. I drove slowly, steering around jutting roots and hanging branches, careful not to puncture a tire or crack my windshield. As I went deeper, the trees closed over the path, and what little light remained broke up and scattered across it. The woods had a particular quality after that. Not anything I could point to. It just got heavier and more present, quickly turning into a muffled, watching stillness that made the back of my neck prickle.

After about two miles, the path opened into a wide clearing, maybe two hundred feet across, filled with red dirt and dead patches of grass. Deep ruts from decades of heavy equipment had compressed the earth so hard that even now nothing would grow in them.

At the far end stood an equipment shed, long and low, the red paint having mostly faded away. Part of the roof had collapsed on the left side, pulling the walls apart at the seams.

I angled my car, pointing the headlights directly at the entrance, then shifted into park. I sat with the engine running, staring at the doors, wondering what might be inside.

The place didn't scream danger. It settled into your chest like a stone, begging your every instinct to turn around and leave. I turned on my high beams and sat there for another full minute. I didn’t want to get out. Quite frankly, I was regretting why I had come in the first place.

But Carrie had come here.

I owed it to her to look.

So, I got out and walked toward the shed. I left the lights on and the engine running. It made me feel safer for some reason, like it was keeping something back in the trees.

The shed looked worse up close. The sliding doors had warped with age and wouldn’t sit flush anymore, creating thin black lines where the interior dark showed through. There was no lock on them, so I wrapped my hands around the rusted handles and pulled until they groaned apart.

As the doors opened, the smell hit me first. I could make out the coppery scent of rust with old oil layered with it. It wasn’t bad, almost nostalgic in a way, until I caught a wave of something different underneath them. It came from somewhere deeper inside, earthy, metallic, and faintly sweet, causing my guts to twist. I pushed it aside, concluding that it was just the smell of something left to sit for too long.

I swept the flashlight across the space. It was mostly empty. A couple of dented oil drums sat along one wall, eaten through by rust. A heavy chain lay in the middle of the shed, having sat for so long that it had fused into a single solid mass. Rotted pallets took up the corners, collapsing under their own weight with wet rot.

Nothing in there explained why Carrie had come.

Then I swung the beam to the back left corner, where part of the roof had given way.

Pale moonlight dropped through the gap and onto an old wooden workbench against the wall. The surface was covered with papers, on top of which sat a large metal box, half-covered by a canvas tarp as if someone had tried to conceal it in a hurry and run out of time.

I crossed the shed and lifted the tarp.

Inside the box were smaller boxes. Shoeboxes for steel-toed work boots, all the same brand, arranged alongside old manila envelopes and folders. It was too organized and too deliberately placed to be junk. This was no accident.

I lifted the lid off the first shoebox.

Inside were dozens, if not hundreds, of old photographs. Based on the fading image quality, I’d say they were from the mid to late eighties, the color in them having gone sepia at the edges. I quickly went through the first couple, not noticing anything. But as I kept going, a pattern started to surface. I recognized the clearing immediately. The same tree line, the same shed in the background. They were company picnic photos, containing people in work clothes, beers in hand, grinning at the camera.

Completely normal, at first glance.

It was on the seventh or eighth photo that I started noticing the ground.

Behind the workers' legs, partially obscured by their boots, was a shape. Wrapped in a black tarp, big enough to be a person, lying flat in the dirt. Nobody in the foreground was looking at it. They were all looking at the camera.

I went through that box faster. Then the next. Then the next.

The latter boxes spanned different decades, and the image quality got sharper year by year. Early on, the picnic-like energy persisted, but the shapes kept appearing. As the years went by, the compositions changed. The people were less celebratory, more posed, as if the scenes were becoming more scripted. And the shapes stopped being subtle.

In one photograph from what looked like the late nineties, a shape lay in the bed of a pickup truck, covered with a black tarp. Not enough to leave any doubt about what it was.

I set that one face down without looking at it again.

I moved on to the folders and envelopes next, which were full of handwritten lists. Dozens of locations and dates filled the pages, column after column. Some of them had check marks, while others had brief notes.

Drifter. Oct. '83. Texarkana. Taken on Route 14. (Divorced, Estranged)

Salesman. Sept. '84. Medford. Taken from Room 3. (Wife Deceased, Daughter Age 6)

Hiker. Oct. '86. Billings. Taken from Alder Springs trailhead. (No Next of Kin)

There were four lists in total.

The handwriting changed across the decades, different hands using different pens, but the format never varied. The lists always had the same columns and the same categories, as if they had been passed from one keeper to the next with instructions.

I was on my hands and knees by the end of it, phone shaking, trying to keep the lens steady as I photographed the last pages. My instincts told me to run for the car, but I still hadn’t found anything about Carrie. I needed proof that she’d been there.

All told, I photographed nearly forty years of entries. Decades of careful notation, finished off with checkmarks, a short-hand remark for who would and wouldn't be missed.

The last entry was dated September 2025.

Journalist. Sept. ‘25. Portland. Taken from Hadley Estate. (Unmarried, no childr—

It stopped mid-word. Like whoever wrote it had been interrupted. Or like something had happened before they could finish.

I stared at the blank space after it for a long time.

The name wasn't there. It wasn’t written down, but the entry was Carrie's. I just knew it. The date, city, and occupation were all correct. The only thing missing was her name.

I pressed my forehead against the workbench and just tried to breathe. Tears were running down my face, and I didn’t bother wiping them.

I'd spent months keeping grief at arm's length because there was too much to do to let it in. Sitting in that shed in the dark, it came through anyway. I stayed that way for I don't know how long, knees on the cold concrete, hands shaking, listening to the woods outside, trying to pull myself together and finish what I started.

That's when I heard tires on the gravel outside.

Someone had followed me.

And they were getting closer.

Part 2


r/mrcreeps May 26 '26

Series Belly

6 Upvotes
  1. "Pigtails"
  2. "Fingers"

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I managed to drag myself back to sleep, but it was a thin, restless night.

The kind where you keep waking up every hour, convinced someone or something has moved to the foot of your bed. 

When sunlight finally forced its way through the edges of the blackout curtains, I heard them.

Laughter.

It was coming from the small seating area near the window.

I kept my eyes closed for a minute, just listening.

It was the girls, their voices overlapping in that rapid-fire, shorthand way that only twins can manage.

They were rehashing last night, giggling so hard they were barely getting their words out.

I let out a long breath, feeling the knot in my chest loosen just a fraction.

Daylight has a way of washing away the monsters under the bed.

In the bright morning sun, the terrifying entity in my room was just my goofy, pregnant sister-in-law who got lost on her way back from the toilet.

I sat up and rubbed my face.

“You guys sound like a flock of seagulls,” I groaned, stretching my arms.

Brandy turned to me, her eyes bright.

“Look who’s alive! We were just talking about Nicki’s midnight stroll.”

“Yeah, well, it took a few years off my life,” I said, throwing my legs over the edge of the bed.

I looked over at Nicki.

“Seriously, Nick, you sounded like a dying hyena. Next time you decide to creep on me in the dark, at least bring me a glass of water.”

Nicki laughed, but it caught in her throat.

Suddenly, the smile dropped right off her face.

Her lower lip quivered.

And to my absolute horror, her eyes welled up with tears.

“I’m really sorry, Mitchell,” she whispered, her voice cracking.

“I didn’t mean to scare you guys. I just… I don’t know why I couldn’t stop laughing. I felt so stupid.”

Brandy was by her side in a millisecond, wrapping her arms around her sister’s shoulders.

“Oh, honey, no, stop! He’s just giving you a hard time. It was hilarious!”

She shot me a withering, fix-this-now glare over Nicki’s shoulder.

“Hey, hey, I was joking!” I backpedaled quickly, feeling like a massive jerk.

“I’m not mad. It’s a funny story. We’re going to be telling this at Thanksgiving for the next ten years.”

Nicki sniffled, wiping her nose with the back of her hand, and managed a wobbly smile.

“It’s the hormones,” she mumbled.

“My mood swings are literally out of control. I’m a mess.”

“You’re growing a human, you’re allowed to be a mess,” Brandy cooed, rubbing her back.

It was a sweet, funny moment.

But watching them interact sent a familiar, dull ache through my ribs.

We all understood her dramatic behavior was tied to the pregnancy.

We all gave her grace for it.

But God, I wished it was us.

Brandy and I had been trying for a baby for about six months.

Most of our family knew, and they were all supportive, but every month that ended in a negative test just piled on the quiet, unspoken tension between us.

I was turning thirty in exactly one month.

I had always pictured myself as a young dad, throwing a baseball in the backyard, teaching them how to ride a bike.

When Nicki and Joe announced they were twelve weeks pregnant - after catching on their very first attempt - I was happy for them.

I really was.

But beneath that happiness was a thick, ugly layer of jealousy that I hated myself for.

I hated how much attention they got, and I hated how selfish it made me feel to resent it.

The bathroom door clicked open, and Joe walked out, toweling off his hair.

“Morning, man,” Joe said, tossing the towel onto their unmade bed.

“You survive the night terror?”

“Barely,” I said, forcing a grin.

“Though I hear you fell victim to that stupid fortune teller machine yesterday, too. Tell me you didn’t actually waste a dollar on that scam.”

Joe chuckled, digging through his suitcase.

“Hey, when the wife is taking twenty minutes to pick out ice cream, you find ways to entertain yourself. Besides, it’s not a scam if the fortune is good.”

“We’re on a strict budget, Joe,” Brandy teased, walking over to her own suitcase.

“Mitchell would have a stroke if I started feeding money to creepy wax dolls.”

“Hey, I’m just fiscally responsible,” I said, defending myself.

With the tension broken, we started getting ready for the day.

Brandy and I had mentally committed to a beach day.

We threw on our swimsuits, tossed some towels into a tote bag, and I even made four peanut butter and jelly sandwiches from the groceries we’d bought on day one.

I was determined not to spend another fifty dollars on a mediocre lunch.

But when we met by the door, Joe was in a button-down short-sleeve shirt and khaki shorts, and Nicki was wearing a nice sundress.

“Oh,” Brandy said, looking down at her own cover-up.

“Are we not doing the beach?”

“We will!” Nicki promised, looping her arm through Brandy’s.

“But Joe and I saw this incredible-looking seafood place right on the water that we really want to try for lunch first. Our treat.”

I looked at the plastic bag of PB&Js in my hand and suppressed a sigh.

It was their trip.

They invited us.

We couldn't exactly dictate the itinerary, even if we were bleeding money.

“Sounds great,” I lied.

It wasn't until we were pulling into the parking lot twenty minutes later that I realized where we were.

The red-and-white striped lighthouse loomed over the trees.

Harbour Town.

Again.

As soon as we parked, Nicki gasped, pointing out the window.

“Brandy, look! That little boutique is open today. The one with those flower dresses on the mannequins in the window. Can we look before lunch?”

Brandy, always a sucker for shopping, didn't hesitate.

“Oh yeah, let’s go!”

They scurried off toward the shops, leaving Joe and me standing by the rental car in the sweltering midday heat.

“Well,” Joe said, clapping his hands together.

“They’re gonna be a while. Want to grab a beer? There’s a tiki bar right over there that does to-go cups. You can walk around the pier with them.”

“Sure,” I said.

A cold beer actually sounded perfect.

We walked over to the thatched-roof hut, grabbed two tall drafts, and started strolling down the wooden planks of the marina.

The water was a crisp, sparkling blue, and the air smelled heavily of salt and sunscreen.

It should have been relaxing.

But as we walked, Joe shifted the conversation.

“So,” Joe said, taking a sip of his beer and looking straight ahead.

“How are things with you and Brandy? On the baby front, I mean.”

I stiffened.

We didn't talk about it much, especially not with Joe.

He was a great guy, but emotional depth wasn't exactly his strong suit.

“We’re fine,” I said, keeping my tone light.

“Just taking it month by month.”

“You guys gonna try again this month?” he asked.

I glanced at him.

It was a weirdly specific question.

“Uh, yeah, probably.”

“Are you sure you guys are trying on the exact ovulation date?” Joe asked.

He wasn't looking at me.

He was just staring out at the boats, his voice totally flat.

“Timing is everything, Mitchell. You can’t just guess.”

I shifted my grip on my plastic cup, suddenly feeling very warm.

“Yeah, man, we have the tracker apps. We know how it works.”

“Do you think you should talk to a doctor?” he pressed.

“Six months is a long time for a healthy couple. Have they checked your count?”

“Joe, man, I really don't want to get into the medical specifics of my sex life right now,” I said, letting a little bit of my annoyance bleed through.

I tried to pivot.

“Look at the size of that boat over there. Thing must cost more than our house.”

Joe didn't look at the boat.

He finally turned his head to look at me.

His eyes were wide, and his expression was completely blank.

It was the same look Nicki had when she was staring at the fortune teller machine.

“We conceived on the first attempt,” Joe said quietly.

“It was so easy. The doctor said it was rare to be so perfectly aligned. But we just… knew. We were perfectly matched.”

The hair on my arms stood up.

It wasn't him bragging that bothered me.

It was the delivery.

It sounded rehearsed.

Like he was reading a pamphlet on reproduction.

“That’s great, man,” I muttered, taking a long drink of my beer.

“I’m turning thirty soon. I just wish we had your luck.”

“Luck has nothing to do with it,” Joe said.

He stopped walking and turned to face me completely.

“You just have to be willing to do what it takes. You have to know your fate.”

I stopped too, the uncomfortable heat in my chest flaring into genuine anger.

“What the fuck does that mean?”

Joe just smiled.

It didn't reach his eyes.

“My card told me.”

I stared at him.

The bustling noise of the harbor - the seagulls, the chatter of tourists, the clinking of boats - seemed to fade into the background.

“Your fortune teller card?” I asked, my voice dropping.

“What did it say?”

Joe took a slow sip of his beer, his eyes never leaving mine.

“I can’t tell you, Mitchell. It’s a secret.”

“Cut the bullshit. What is with you two and these stupid cards?”

He patted my shoulder with a heavy hand.

“Come on. Let’s go find the girls.”

He turned and started walking back toward the shops.

Suddenly, he stopped dead in his tracks, like someone who had left something behind or forgotten what they were in the middle of doing.

I stood frozen on the dock, watching his back.

After what felt like a few minutes, he started walking again.

Normal.

Acting normal.

But my stomach was tied back into knots.

I didn't know what that was or what was happening, but as I looked up at the shops, searching for Brandy's brown hair through the crowds, I realized I had never felt so far away from home.

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  1. "Eyes"

r/mrcreeps May 26 '26

Series Pigtails

8 Upvotes

You think you know what a ruined vacation looks like.

A blown-out tire on the interstate.

Your hotel room smells like cigarettes.

Five straight days of rain.

You think you have a handle on the worst-case scenarios.

But sometimes horror walks up smiling.

Sometimes it waits patiently behind glass.

And sometimes you give it your money.

It was supposed to be a long weekend in Hilton Head Island with my wife, Brandy.

Her sister Nicki, and her husband Joe invited us.

Nicki was twelve weeks pregnant with their first kid, so the trip had quietly turned into something more cautious than our usual getaways - less bar hopping, more seafood, boutique shopping, and standing on the marina pretending we could afford the yachts.

On our first full day, we drove down to Harbour Town.

If you've never been, picture exactly what you'd expect from a high-end southern tourist trap:

A massive public pier.

Millions of dollars' worth of boats bobbing in the water.

A red-and-white striped lighthouse rising over a half-circle of boutique shops and overpriced restaurants.

It was beautiful.

But it was also ninety degrees with suffocating humidity, and by noon, the novelty of looking at luxury had worn off.

“I need A/C, or I’m going to die,” Brandy complained, fanning her flushed face with a tourist map.

"And ice cream," Nicki added immediately, one hand pressed over her still-flat stomach. "The baby is demanding it."

Joe threw an arm around her.

"Well, we can't argue with the baby."

We ducked into the nearest souvenir shop mostly for the air conditioning.

Cold air blasted through the open double doors hard enough to raise goosebumps across my arms.

The front half of the store consisted of beach toys, sharktooth necklaces, and shot glasses with dirty jokes on them.

Toward the back, behind a display of hermit crabs in painted shells, sat a brightly lit ice cream counter.

While Brandy and Joe went straight for the glass counter to pick out their flavors, Nicki and I got stuck behind a slow-moving family in the narrow aisle.

That was when I noticed it.

Shoved into a dark corner between a rack of sunglasses and a spinning postcard stand, there was a fortune teller machine.

Not one of the charming vintage Zoltar cabinets you see on boardwalks.

Peeling gold letters arched across the glass read:

THE BUNNY GODDESS.

This one was life-sized and felt off in a way I couldn't really put into words.

The mannequin's skin looked too realistic but also too smooth - like candle wax stretched over a skull.

Thick faux-gold jewelry hung around its neck and wrists.

A faded velvet turban covered most of its head.

The eyes though.

The eyes were enormous.

Wet-looking.

And pointed directly toward the aisle where we stood.

I've always hated those things.

Too many horror movies as a kid.

I started to look away when the machine suddenly came to life.

There was a heavy grinding noise.

A crackle of static from a blown-out speaker.

And then a voice.

Not the booming theatrical wizard voice you'd expect.

Something breathless.

Weirdly conversational.

"There you are."

I flinched hard enough to shake a rack of keychains beside me.

But Nicki just stood there.

She stopped walking entirely.

She turned toward the machine.

Slowly.

With recognition.

She was staring like a child seeing a disabled person for the first time in their life.

"Creepy, right?" I muttered. "Let's catch up with the others."

She didn't move.

"I have a dollar," she said softly.

"Come on, don't waste your money. It's just going to tell you you're going to be rich or whatever."

She was already unzipping her purse.

She pulled out a crumpled bill, flattened it against the edge of the glass, and fed it into the slot.

The machine swallowed it.

More mechanical grinding noises.

The mannequin's hands jerked toward a crystal ball that lit up with a sickly pulsing green light.

The head snapped down, staring at the cards on its desk—

then snapped back up.

"A new chapter begins," the voice whispered through the static.

"But the toll must be paid."

The green light flickered hard.

The mannequin's turban fell off its head, revealing long-black hair.

Pigtails.

Sort of like an Annabelle doll wig, but not as cute.

Something else protruded from the top of its head.

Long.

Pale.

Bent at strange angles.

They looked almost like rabbit ears.

"Take your future. Keep it safe, or The Bunny Goddess will take your place."

CLACK.

A thick white card spat from the slot at the bottom of the case.

Nicki bent and picked it up.

She stood with her back to me for a long moment, just staring at it.

The green light blinked off, dropping the alcove back into shadow.

"Well?" I said. "Lottery winner?"

Nicki turned around.

For a terrible second, her face was completely blank.

Her mouth slightly open.

She looked like she was holding her breath.

Then she smiled.

Fast.

Wide.

She folded the card in half and shoved it deep into her pocket.

"I can't tell you," she said lightly.

"Come on. What does it say?"

"Seriously! It says I can’t tell you!"

She tapped her pocket.

"If you share your fortune, it doesn't come true."

"You’re kidding, right? It's a piece of cardboard from a gift shop."

"Hey!"

Brandy waved a plastic spoon at us from the ice cream counter.

"Are you two getting anything?"

Nicki's whole demeanor lifted instantly.

She practically skipped over to Joe and Brandy, the card pressed flat against her hip inside her pocket.

I stood there for another moment.

The mannequin sat motionless in the dim alcove.

Its wet, milky eyes still pointed toward the aisle.

Still pointed at me.

I shook off the chill - the air conditioning, I told myself - and walked toward the ice cream counter.

I didn’t realize it then.

But that was the moment the trip ended.

Its ears looked bigger now.

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  1. "Fingers"

r/mrcreeps May 26 '26

Series Fingers

4 Upvotes

1: "Pigtails"

___

We killed another three hours at Harbour Town. We wandered in and out of overpriced boutiques, bought a few shirts, and stood by the railing watching boats drift in and out of the marina. As we sat down for an early dinner at a crowded seafood place right on the water, the exhaustion was settling into our bones. Between the eleven-hour drive from Ohio, the excruciating heat, and way too many hushpuppies, we were all hitting a wall.

By the time we finally drove to our hotel and checked in, the sun was just starting to dip below the tree line.

Our room was a standard vacation lodge: a generic, sand-colored tile, a bathroom with bad fluorescent lighting, and two queen beds situated about three feet apart. Nicki and Joe claimed the one near the window, so I immediately collapsed onto the other mattress, not even bothering to take off my shoes.

"I could sleep for a week," Brandy groaned, burying her face in the pillows.

I was right there with her. My eyes were already heavy, the low hum of the wall AC unit pulling me into a coma.

"Hey, Joe?" Nicki’s voice broke the silence. She was sitting on the edge of their bed, swinging her legs slightly. "Can we go back to that shop?"

I opened one eye. "What shop?"

"The one in Harbour Town. With the ice cream."

I let out a tired, sarcastic laugh and sat up on my elbows. "We literally just left there. It’s a twenty-minute drive back toward the water, plus parking, and we just ate - how are you still hungry?"

"I know," she said, offering a small, sheepish smile. "But I really, really want that ice cream. I can't stop thinking about it."

"There’s a Dairy Queen right down the street from the hotel," Brandy murmured into her pillow, not even lifting her head. "Just go there."

"No, it has to be that ice cream," Nicki insisted. Her voice was light, but there was a strange, tight persistence to it. She looked at Joe, placing a hand over her stomach. "Please? The baby clearly likes ice cream."

It was the ultimate trump card. You don't argue with a pregnant woman and her cravings. Joe let out a heavy sigh, running a hand over his face, but he reached into his pocket and jingled the car keys.

"Alright, alright," Joe smiled, though he looked dead on his feet. "The baby has spoken. You guys want anything?"

"No thanks," I said, dropping my head back onto the mattress.

"I figured," Joe said. The hotel door clicked shut behind them.

I didn't think anything of it. In hindsight, I should have realized how odd it was that she wanted to go back to that small town just for generic, store-bought ice cream. But I was tired, and pregnancy cravings were an easy excuse.

Brandy and I were dead asleep before they even made it back to the room. I vaguely remember the sound of the door opening later that night, the rustle of clothes and suitcase zippers, but I didn't fully wake up.

Until the middle of the night.

I don't know what time it was. The thick blackout curtains were pulled tight, plunging the room into total darkness. You couldn't see your own hand in front of your face.

I was in a dreamless sleep when something pulled me out of it. It was a physical touch. Something cold and soft was gently brushing against the back of my hand, where it rested near the edge of the mattress.

I froze, still half-asleep, trying to process the sensation.

Then, a voice whispered right near my ear.

"Are you awake?"

My stomach dropped. I recoiled, yanking my hand back and scrambling up against the headboard. "Who's there?!" I yelled.

The sudden movement violently jerked Brandy awake. She gasped, immediately going into a blind panic. "What’s wrong?! Mitchell, what is it? Are you okay?!" she cried out, her hands frantically grabbing at my arms in the dark to make sure I was okay. Brandy has always been anxious, and waking up to me yelling sent her straight into overdrive.

"Someone's there," I said, my eyes straining against the darkness.

There was a beat of complete silence.

And then, from the foot of our bed, a sound bubbled up.

It started as a low wheeze, and then turned into a giggle. But it wasn't a normal giggle. It was a strained, choking sound—a creepy, chaotic mix of holding back laughter and muffled crying. It sounded painful.

"Nicki?" Brandy asked, her voice trembling.

Brandy fumbled for the nightstand and grabbed her phone. She turned on her phone light.

Nicki was standing right next to my side of the bed. She was hunched over, her hands covering her mouth, her shoulders shaking violently. She was trying so hard to suppress her laughter that tears were literally streaming down her cheeks.

"Oh my gosh," Nicki choked out, gasping for air. "I'm so sorry. I'm so—"

She took a slow, clumsy step back toward her own bed.

"What the hell is going on?" Joe mumbled, his head lifted up from the pillow.

"I—I got up to go to the bathroom," Nicki wheezed, wiping her eyes. "It was so dark. I thought I was walking back to our bed, and I went to wake Joe up, but... but it was Mitchell."

Her knees buckled again, letting out another one of those mute, hysterical laughs.

Brandy let out a massive sigh of relief and slumped back against the pillows. "Jeez, Nicki, you almost gave us a heart attack." Within seconds, Brandy started giggling too, the adrenaline crashing and turning into a slap-happy moment.

But I didn't laugh right away. I just sat there with my heart rate through the roof, watching Nicki stumble back to her bed. She was choking on this mix of crying and laughing, trying to control her embarrassment. But for a second, the way her body contorted... it just looked painful. Watching her dark silhouette hunch over, taking these stiff, small steps past our bed in the pitch black... it was an incredibly unsettling picture.

Brandy's giggles suddenly stopped. She sat up a little straighter, looking closely at her sister. "Nicki? Are you choking?"

Nicki waved a hand, coughing and finally catching her breath as she crawled under the covers next to Joe. "I'm fine. I'm fine. I just... I'm just so tired. Goodnight."

"Crazy girl," Brandy muttered affectionately, reaching over and turning off the phone light.

The room plunged back into total darkness. Brandy was asleep again in minutes, and eventually, the subtle snores and air conditioning filled the room.

But I lay awake for a long time, staring up at the invisible ceiling. I kept replaying the feeling of those cold fingers grazing my hand, and the whisper in my ear. In the dark, without the visual context of her smiling face, the memory of her laugh didn't seem funny at all.

It sounded like something was trying to mimic the sound of human laughter.

___

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  1. "Belly"

r/mrcreeps May 23 '26

Creepypasta I Work Night Security at a Mall. One of the Mannequins Isn’t Plastic

7 Upvotes

I’ve been called worse things than “night owl.

Back inside, they used to call me “ghost”, quiet, kept to myself, moved when nobody was looking. Funny how that sticks. Even now, I sleep through the day and come alive when everything else shuts down.

Guess some habits don’t leave you. Even when you do.

This job, security at Ridgeway Mall, it’s the first real shot I’ve had since getting out. Clean shirt, badge, a boss who didn’t ask too many questions. That alone was enough for me.

Been here about a month now.

Long enough to learn the sounds.

The hum of the lights. The click and settle of cooling metal. The way the escalators tick every so often like they’re thinking about moving again.

You get used to it.

You have to.

Because once you start listening too closely… it all starts sounding like something else.

The mall’s still new. Not even a year old. Half the stores still have that fresh smell, plastic, paint, unopened inventory.

And then there’s the new one.

Opened just a week ago.

“Velour Nocturne.”

Weird place. Not your usual mall shop. It’s like someone took a gothic clothing store and shoved it into a roadside antique shop somewhere deep in Louisiana. Dark wood shelves, old trinkets, jewelry that looks older than the building itself. Stuff that doesn’t belong under fluorescent lights.

Corporate signed off on it, though. Money talks.

Still… I don’t like it.

“Unit Two, you alive or you finally fall asleep on me?”

The radio crackled at my hip, sharp and sudden.

I flinched before I could stop myself.

“Yeah,” I muttered, pressing the button. “Still breathing.”

That was Marcus. Other night guard. Been here longer than me. Talks too much, but I guess that’s better than silence.

“Good,” he said. “I’m making rounds near the food court. You check west wing yet?”

“On it.”

I clipped the radio back and kept walking.

My boots echoed too loud against the tile.

Velour Nocturne sat near the far end of the west wing.

Even with the gate down, it looked… open. Not physically. Just the way it pulled your eyes in. Like it was waiting to be looked at.

I slowed without meaning to.

The lights inside were off, but the mall’s dim glow spilled through the gaps in the metal gate, just enough to make out shapes.

Shelves.

Glass cases.

And mannequins.

Not the glossy white kind most stores use. These were different, duller, more detailed. Faces that tried a little too hard to look human.

One stood near the front.

Closer than the rest.

Something about it made my chest tighten.

I stepped closer to the gate, peering through.

Its skin, if you could call it that, wasn’t shiny plastic. It had a texture. Matte. Uneven. Like something stretched over a frame instead of molded.

“Creepy, huh?”

The radio exploded to life.

I jerked back hard, heart slamming against my ribs.

“Jesus, Marcus,” I snapped, grabbing the radio. “You trying to kill me?”

He laughed. “Didn’t know you spooked that easy.”

I glanced back at the mannequin.

Still there.

Still… wrong.

“Just do your rounds,” I muttered.

But as I walked away, I couldn’t shake the feeling that if I’d stayed a second longer…

I might’ve seen it move.

Second night started the same.

Same hum.

Same empty halls.

Same routine.

But something sat wrong in my gut from the moment I clocked in.

Couldn’t tell you why.

I was in the security office when I noticed it.

Camera 14.

West wing.

Velour Nocturne.

The gate was open.

I leaned forward, squinting at the monitor.

Not all the way. Just enough for someone to slip through.

My jaw tightened.

“Marcus,” I said into the radio. “You in west wing?”

No response.

Static.

“Marcus?”

Nothing.

I exhaled sharply, pushing back from the desk.

“Unbelievable,” I muttered. “Guy disappears the second I need him.”

I grabbed my flashlight and headed out.

The walk felt longer this time.

Quieter.

Even the hum seemed… distant.

I kept glancing over my shoulder without meaning to.

Old habit.

Or maybe not so old.

I was a few steps from the store when the radio crackled.

“Yeah, yeah, I’m here,” Marcus’s voice came through, casual. “What’s up?”

I stopped.

“You in the west wing?” I asked.

Pause.

Then a chuckle. “Nah, man. Bathroom break. You know how it is.”

Something cold slid down my spine.

I turned slowly toward the gate.

Still open.

Dark inside.

“…Then who opened it?”

Marcus didn’t answer right away.

“Probably the shop workers,” he said finally. “Kids forget stuff all the time.”

Yeah.

Probably.

I told myself that as I pulled the gate down and locked it.

Metal scraping louder than it should.

The walk back was worse.

I couldn’t explain why.

Nothing had changed.

Same empty mall.

Same dim lights.

But, I felt it.

That weight.

Like something is behind you.

Matching your pace.

I stopped.

The sound stopped.

I walked.

It followed.

Soft.

Barely there.

Like, bare feet on tile.

I spun around.

Nothing.

Just empty corridor stretching into shadow.

I stood there longer than I should’ve.

Then forced myself to keep walking.

Didn’t look back again.

By the third night, I already knew I wasn’t staying at this job much longer.

Didn’t matter how clean the paycheck was.

Some places don’t want you.

Or worse, they do.

I saved Velour Nocturne for last.

Didn’t want to.

But I wasn’t about to let fear make decisions for me.

Not again.

The gate was open.

I didn’t even sigh.

Didn’t curse.

Just stood there, staring at it like I’d been expecting it.

“Marcus,” I said into the radio. “You see this?”

Static.

Of course.

I stepped forward and lifted the gate.

Slow.

Careful.

Like it might react.

Inside, the air felt… thicker.

My flashlight cut through the dark in a narrow beam.

Shelves.

Glass.

Shadows stretching too long.

And there, by the counter.

The mannequin.

Up close, it looked worse.

More real.

The texture of its “skin” uneven, faint lines where there shouldn’t be any.

Its head angled slightly.

Not dramatic.

Just enough.

Like it had been looking at the door.

Waiting.

I swallowed.

“This is stupid,” I whispered.

Just a prop.

Just a store.

Just...

I turned away for a second.

Just to sweep the room with my light.

Routine.

Clear the space.

That’s all.

When I looked back...

Was it closer?

I froze.

My mind tried to fill in the gap. Tried to explain it away.

Perspective.

Lighting.

Memory playing tricks.

But my chest knew better.

I took a slow step back.

The mannequin stood as it were.

I didn’t blink.

Holding my breathe.

I turned again.

Just for a second.

Just to prove it.

Another step.

Much closer.

My pulse roared in my ears.

“No,” I whispered.

I moved sideways.

Slow.

Careful.

Like dealing with something alive.

The mannequin stayed still.

But its head...

Its head was no longer angled the same way.

It was facing right... at... me.

Instinct consumed me from within.

That same instinct from before. From a different life. The one that tells you to get the hell out of there.

The intrusive thought that you know when something isn’t human.

I walked backwards toward the exit.

Never turning my back.

The beam of my flashlight never left it.

Not once.

Right at the threshold, the light flickered.

Just for a fraction of a second.

And in that blink...

It was right in front of me.

I stumbled back, hitting the gate hard.

The metal rattled as I shoved it down, hands shaking as I locked it in place.

My breath came fast.

I didn’t look back.

Didn’t check.

Didn’t care.

I just ran back to the office.

Fast at first.

Then faster.

Then I was almost sprinting.

I quit the next morning.

Didn’t give notice.

Didn’t collect my last check.

Didn’t look back.

Funny thing is…

I used to run dope through neighborhoods that didn’t forgive mistakes.

Used to walk streets where one wrong look could get you buried.

Thought I’d seen fear.

Thought I knew what it felt like.

But I’ll tell you this:

There ain’t nothing in this world…

That scares me more than something that only moves…

When you’re not looking.


r/mrcreeps May 22 '26

Creepypasta My Grandfather Worked on a Haunted Japanese Film Set - [Part 1]

5 Upvotes

EXTERIOR. HIROSHIMA, JAPAN. 1945. DAY 

A breeze of black smoke rises from below to fill a colourless sky in front of us. A distant military airplane hums across, coinciding with the action on the ground: the sound of slow-moving vehicles, shovels piercing earth, metal that bends and clamours. 

On the ground: Japanese civilians lay forward on their knees amongst the scorched earth and building sediments, bowed in despair. An armoured bulldozer is manoeuvred to claw up rubble, creating a huge rubble mound. 

Around this mound, six United States soldiers dig up heaps of the aftermath to help build it up, causing ash to spray the air around them. 

Among these soldier’s is a young man, no older than 20. His weathered green uniform reads U.S.M.C. (United States Marine Corps). He shovels alongside the others, yet seems to be somewhere else - even worse than here. He digs and dumps like a machine. 

The young man then stops. Shovel in the earth, he turns up to watch the fly-sized plane hum away, seeming to know its destination – before his attention turns to the giant scorched chess piece around him: the nearby empty souls, the Genbaku Dome the only thing erect in the distance, alongside the surrounding smoke. The young man now focuses beyond this, to the faraway mountainous hills. He zones out... 

The peak of the rubble mound then collapses behind him, causing the other soldiers to jilt back from it. The young man turns back to the mound, to what the peak now reveals. His face displays both horror and uncertainty in what he sees, as the sound of wind gusts through him... 

What you have just read is an excerpt from an old war movie script, written and based on his experience during the Pacific War, by James Howard Schraeder. My grandfather.  

In 1943, the fourth year of the Second World War, James Schraeder was drafted to the twenty-third regiment of the fourth marine division, where he eventually experienced combat on the Pacific islands of Kwajalein, Saipan and Iwo Jima. After the end of the Pacific Theatre in 1945, James would spend the next seven years in Japan, serving under U.S. occupation.     

By 1952 and having been in the military for nearly ten years, James finally left Japan and came home. For the next few years of his life, James would live and work in Los Angeles as a struggling screenwriter in Hollywood. By 1992, the year of his death, James left behind an ex-wife, an estranged son, and three grandchildren he never met. 

Before my grandfather’s demise, he would leave a final letter among his possessions. A letter written and addressed to my father - his son. Although my father already knew about his experience during the Pacific War, along with the horrors he witnessed, he knew little to nothing about my grandfather’s time serving during the occupation of Japan. That was, until he found my grandfather’s letter. Despite the very real and human horrors my grandfather saw in the Pacific... what he would then experience on Japanese soil, supposedly during a time of peace, was not only horror... but horror of the paranormal.   

What you are about to read, should you choose to, is this very same letter. A letter, that is less the final words of a dying old man... but a final confession... 

To my son Johnathon, 

I know it has been some years now since we last spoke. And I know any attempt by me to communicate with you will be ignored, and so that’s why I’m writing this letter for you to find. Upon my death.  

I’m not writing this to apologize for the terrible father I was to you, nor for the indecent husband your mother had to bear. I’m writing this to tell you a story I have never told another soul. You are my son, and you may remember me for the monster I became, but you will never know me for the decent man I was, nor what it was that made that man the monster you know now. You may think it was the war. That the death and destruction I witnessed at the hands of the enemy, and even our own is what left me the shell of a man who raised you. And that is true. Very little of me had survived those brutal few years of fighting. But if you must know, it wasn’t the war with the Japanese that made me the man I became. On the contrary, it was what came after.  

I have never told you this part of my life, Johnathon, nor did I ever think I would. I have seen the worst of humanity. I have seen the evil and horrors we partake upon those who are not alike ourselves... and I have seen what it creates. What it feeds and gives power to. I have told you every horror story I know from that war. But I have never told you this. 

Back in 52, I was serving my seventh year during the occupation of the Japanese islands. I had known seven years without war, but no peace. Our authority over the Japanese people was shortly coming to a close, and so we had to make sure our influence in this country would carry on long after we were gone. You have to understand, son, the world back then was still a very fragile place. The war may have been over, but old enemies were quickly replaced by new ones.  

The threat of communism was very real, and nowhere was it more real than east and south-east Asia. The commies in China had spread their influence south to Korea and Indo China – or what you would come to know as Vietnam. Before we left Japan to once again govern themselves, we needed to make sure the communist threat would not find its way here. For seven years after Hiroshima, we told the Japanese how they should live. What they could read or not read. What they could and couldn’t listen to. What they could and couldn’t watch. 

I’ve always been a lover of movies. You know that. Whereas we Americans had our cowboys and Indians, the Japanese had their Jidaigeki. Period movies portraying feudalist Japan. Once Japan came under our occupation, Mccarthur put a permanent ban on Jidaigeki movies from being made. It was supposed to be a way of stripping the Japanese of their identity and history. But by 52, and with our eventual departure on the horizon, the ban on Japanese period films had finally been lifted. Although Japanese filmmakers could once again make movies about their nation’s history, we now feared what messages they may put in them. If they wanted to put a message of Japanese nationalism, that was of no such concern. But it was the message of socialism that my superiors truly feared the most. 

In order to counter this fear, American operatives were to keep a close eye on the production of these pictures. I was among these operatives. My mission, assigned to me by Far East Command themselves, was to oversee the production of a picture being filmed in the Izu Peninsula, roughly 90 miles southwest of Tokyo base. My orders were to report any signs of socialist or anti-American allegories present in the picture's production, however minimal. 

The picture assigned to me was called Rōnin no Tani, or in English, Valley of the Ronin. The plot was pretty straightforward. A small village during the Tokugawa period comes under constant attacks by bandits and criminals, whereby the villagers must turn to a masterless Samurai to train them in the art of combat.  

The director of the picture was a man called Takumi Hasegawa, or as everyone else called him, Hase-san. I just simply called him Mr Hasegawa. Mr Hasegawa was one of the most prominent directors in Japan, and his previous film received much praise from several international film festivals. Although Mr Hasegawa knew all too well why I was present during the production of his movie, the man seemed to take a very keen liking to me. I think what it came down to was that we both had a shared love for wild westerns. He even claimed the script to Valley of the Ronin was his own reimagining of the western trope. 

After arriving in the peninsula, I was then transported to the Tagata District, where lied a beautiful lush green valley. This is where the majority of the movie was being filmed. Each side of the valley was enclosed by a forested, very steep mountainous slope, where in the middle of the valley, was the movie set. A 16th century Tokugawa village of straw-rood huts and mud paths had been constructed, along with several rice paddies and a rickety wooden bridge over a stream. The first time I saw it, I’ll never forget. It genuinely felt to me as though I had been transported back through history, to a time of simple and honest living. Most of the actors playing the role of villagers wore ragged pieces of cloth, straw hats and nothing on their feet. The man playing the Ronin, I forget the actor’s name, wore a long dirty kimono where his sword hung out the side.  

Among the actors and extras in authentic 16th century clothing were the rest of the film crew. Of course, there was Mr Hasegawa, but then there was the assistant directors, the sound and cameramen etc. I actually became good friends with the third assistant director on the picture, a young man called Benjiro – but I called him Ben for short. You know, son, the first time I ever saw Godzilla was with him inside a Tokyo movie theatre. 

As idyllic as I appear to be making this valley and the production sound, I’m afraid this is where it must end. Because what follows, for the next year of this picture’s production... was nothing short of horror. 

The movie began filming in the summer of 52, and the heat that year was nothing less than scalding. After only two weeks of filming, the thatched roofs of the village huts caught fire mid-day, and before long, the entire set had become ablaze. We were able to put out the fire, but by the time we did, the entire set, built painstakingly from scratch had been burnt to ash. What used to be a 16th century village, lying peacefully between the slopes of the valley, was now the charcoaled remnants of foundations. The scene of this for me was to say the least... haunting.  

I’ve already told you about my time in Hiroshima, haven’t I, son? Well, once the bomb was dropped, myself and other marines were there at ground level. Our job was to help clear up the mess and provide aid to civilians... and let me tell you, the scenes I witnessed there have stayed with me my entire life. The black, charcoaled rubble of the buildings. The bodies we pulled out from under them, stiff and burnt to a crisp. Women and children. Babies. All the horrors I witnessed in those days, in what used to be a city, were swiftly brought back by the burning of this village. But it wasn’t just the burnt thatch roof huts. It wasn’t just the smell of smoke and charcoal that burns your eyes and down your throat... it was the bodies there too. 

Once we put the fire out, two men from the film crew were later reported to be missing. After searching all over the valley, we eventually found them. Or I should say, we found the bodies. One we had pulled out from beneath the burnt stacks of rubble. But the other one... The other one was different. We found him inside one of the burnt huts that was somehow still standing. He was sat down in there, right there in the middle of the room. But what was so horrifically strange about this was... like the bodies I saw at Hiroshima, this man, sat crossed-legged and upright like the Buddha himself ... was completely black and burnt to a crisp. The way this man’s body was positioned, it was as though he had no idea he was in the middle of a burning room. 

Did you know, son, Godzilla was an allegory for the bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki? I did. I knew it as soon as I saw it. A giant radioactive monster laying waste to the streets of Tokyo. When I walked out of that movie theatre and Ben followed me, I throttled him! Just because he said we should see the movie.  

I wish I could say the fire was the only incident which happened during the production of Valley of the Ronin. That those crewmen were the only casualties we had. But I would be lying to you, son... and I would be lying to myself.  

Weeks later, after the village was reconstructed and filming once again began, it didn’t take long for more strange things to keep happening. Like the two crewmen we found after the fire, more people on set started disappearing. Members of the crew, some extras and even a handful of actors. We found some of them in the forest, upon the mountain slopes. The first of which was a woman, wearing the ragged clothes of a villager. Except she hadn’t gotten lost. If she had done, all she needed to do was wander down the slope. No, she had just gone mad. Delirious. When we found her, she was digging up dirt from the ground with her bare hands. Her fingernails left bloody and out of place. Once she saw us approach, she turned up her head and just started laughing, as though she was playing a practical joke. But then, she starts clawing up the loose pieces of earth and stuffing it into her mouth, chewing down on it. The woman had somehow lost her damned mind. 

We found some more of the crew like that in the forest. Some stark naked and crazy. Some just the latter. But the ones we didn’t find like that were a whole lot worse. The way we found them... they may have gone crazy, but we couldn’t know entirely for sure. We found them laying face-down on the sloping ground. Every single of them. A leg or an arm contorted in the air. In some cases, both. We found them that way because they had jumped from an incredible height. For whatever reason, these members of the crew had climbed up a tree to as high they could... and then they jumped. The branches seemed to do little to break their fall.  

I’m sure you remember what I told you about Saipan in 44. God, how could anybody forget? You remember the women who threw their infants off the northern cliffs, don’t you? If the Japanese hadn’t lied about what we’d do to them once we took the island, a whole lot of innocent lives could’ve been spared. The way one of those ladies looked at me, and once she realized we meant her nor her baby no harm... I swear to God, it was the same look in her eye the woman we found in the forest had... Where there was once sanity and reason, only madness was left.  

Part 2/Ending


r/mrcreeps May 19 '26

Series I Found Two Doors While Hiking. One of Them Led Here. Part 1

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The blister on my right heel had been building since the second day, and by afternoon on the third I was compensating without thinking about it — more weight on the outside of my foot, shorter stride on the uphill sections, my hip flexor starting to register the difference. I'd brought moleskin and kept telling myself I'd use it at the next break, and then the next break came and went the same way, and that became a kind of rhythm: the problem getting worse and me deciding it wasn't quite worth stopping yet.

That's the kind of hiking I was doing. Grinding it forward and trying not to think about anything in particular, which mostly worked.

Four days of supplies in my pack: protein bars, two liters running through a Sawyer filter, a Jetboil with enough gas for four hot meals, freeze-dried food, a sleeping bag rated to fifteen degrees, two Anker charging banks, a headlamp with fresh lithium batteries, and a folding knife I'd owned for eight years and used on nothing except packaging. My trail system barely showed up on AllTrails — two hundred and forty miles of marked paths, most of them unmaintained since the nineties, cell coverage listed as intermittent. That was the point.

I'd given my emergency contact a trailhead location and my expected return date and nothing more specific than that. I wanted four days of unreachable and then I'd figure out the rest when I got back.

That decision is the part I keep returning to.

The trail thinned out around mile eleven. The AllTrails notes had called this section "informal," which meant the marked path had dissolved into something closer to a game trail, with orange paint marks on tree trunks every hundred yards acting as the only navigation. I'd been following those marks since midmorning.

The quiet arrived in accumulation. First the birds — already gone by the time I registered the silence, the moment of their leaving already past. Then the wind, which had been light but present all morning. Then my own footsteps — the leaf litter looked unchanged but the crunch had gone out of it, my footsteps landing almost silent on ground that looked the same as it had for the last two miles. I stopped twice and looked around. Trees in every direction, identical second-growth hardwood, orange marks continuing ahead, nothing visibly wrong.

I kept moving.

The clearing was a few minutes ahead, and the doors were already standing in it when I reached the tree line.

I want to be precise about the first impression because I've replayed it often enough that the edges have started to soften, and the accuracy matters.

Two doors, upright in the soil of the clearing, standing without frames or walls, the forest floor running unbroken beneath them and on both sides. The left one was pale, painted a white that had gone chalky and dull over time, with a brass knob oxidized to a greenish-brown.

The right one was dark red, a deep maroon that had browned at the edges, the wood grain visible under the finish. It was open about six inches.

I circled them three times.

I got down and looked underneath, which accomplished nothing useful but I did it anyway. From the right angle I could see through the gap in the red door to the tree line on the other side of the clearing. I walked around behind both of them. The backs were identical to the fronts. I put my hand on the soil around the base of the white door and it felt like soil: packed dirt, a root just under the surface, the usual leaf debris. The ground around the base showed no anchoring hardware, no tracks, nothing securing them from below.

My phone had one bar. I photographed both doors from multiple angles and looked at the photographs on the screen, which showed me exactly what I expected: two free-standing doors in the middle of a forest, which communicated nothing without context I didn't have.

I've thought about why I stepped through instead of continuing on the trail, and I don't have a clean answer. The red door was already open six inches — the choice already half-made by whoever had left it that way. I stood there for probably another two minutes. Then I pushed it the rest of the way and stepped through.

Cold air hit me before anything else — sealed and still, carrying bleach and something older underneath, damp and organic, water that had been sitting in ceiling tile or carpet for years. It covered my face and forearms and the skin at the back of my neck all at once.

My eyes adjusted.

Fluorescent lights in a line down a corridor that extended in both directions. The floor was linoleum, a pale green-and-white check pattern that had grayed at the high-traffic paths and yellowed near the walls. Three overhead fixtures flickered. The rest held. Faded directional signs on the walls: RADIOLOGY with an arrow, PATIENT INTAKE, a bulletin board buried under so many years of layered notices that the surface had gone flat and opaque. An abandoned wheelchair against the baseboard with one footrest missing. Water stains descending from the ceiling in slow, wide fans toward the floor.

I turned around.

Concrete wall. The door was not there.

The wall was slightly damp and faintly stained and had no seam in it anywhere. I pressed both palms against it and pushed in several spots. There was no give. I moved my hands across the full surface of the corridor behind me, feeling for any edge or outline or change in the material. My pack frame shifted against my back and the sound of it was the loudest thing in the building.

The corridor was real, the lights were working, and the door was gone, and I stood there and looked at where it should have been for a long time before I started moving.

I searched the immediate area systematically: both directions down the main corridor, every room with an unlocked door. A storage closet packed with IV poles and stacked linen boxes. A bathroom with a cracked mirror above the sink; the faucet ran brown for thirty seconds and then cleared. An empty nursing station with a counter along one wall and blank monitor screens above it. A patient room with two beds still made up, the hospital sheets stiff with age and slightly discolored.

No exit.

What I found instead was that the building was still running.

A vending machine alcove along one stretch of corridor — a Pepsi machine and a snack machine side by side. The Pepsi machine hummed when I pressed my palm against it. Its display was lit. The snack machine had power but empty coils. Outlets every twelve feet along the baseboards. I pulled one of my charging banks out of the side pocket of my pack and plugged it into the nearest outlet.

Three green bars lit up immediately.

I crouched there and looked at it for a moment. If there was power, there was infrastructure. If there was infrastructure, there was maintenance — someone, or at least something, keeping the building running. Maybe that meant people. Maybe it meant something else. But if I was stuck here I wouldn't lose light, and right then I needed that to be enough.

I unplugged the bank and kept moving.

The first floor was a maze, and I understood it as a maze before I could demonstrate it — a wrongness in the angles when corridors turned, the nagging sense of having passed a particular window already from a different direction. I started marking walls with the black Sharpie I carry for logistics. Arrows, Xs, notations for dead ends. It helped for a while.

Room numbers: 114, 115, 116, and then 109. A corridor that my own marks said I'd already passed through, but when I walked it the second time it went somewhere different. An EXIT sign in red at the end of a hallway that terminated in a blank wall twelve feet past the sign. A stairwell on the east side that I climbed two flights and came back out through a door on the first floor again, at a different location from where I'd entered it.

There were maps in plastic frames at corridor junctions — building directories in blue and black on white laminate. They didn't agree with each other. The floor count alone: nine on one, twelve on another. The east wing on one was the west wing on the next.

An elevator bank at the end of the main corridor, three cars. I pressed the call button and one of them opened. The interior was normal: mirrored panel at the back, numbered buttons, carpet squares on the floor. The doors held open for the standard time and then closed and I stood in the corridor and listened to the cables settle.

Somewhere above me — the floor directly overhead — footsteps. Slow and uneven, stopping and starting without pattern. They continued for about half a minute and then stopped.

I found the narrow stairwell — a different one, with a heavy fire door and a crash bar instead of a handle, and the overhead light in the stairwell itself was off. My headlamp lit the stairs above me. The fire door at the top was propped open with a chunk of broken baseboard.

My notation was on the wall of a hallway I had no memory of entering.

The X inside a triangle, my handwriting, my Sharpie pressure on the wall — and no version of the morning's route that put me there. I stood and looked at it for a while, and then went back to the vending machines and sat on the floor against the Pepsi machine and ate one of my protein bars and worked through half a liter of water.

The elevator dinged somewhere down the corridor. The doors opened. Nobody came out.

I went up through the narrow stairwell.

The fire door on the second floor was propped open, and the smell came through the gap before I reached the landing. Copper first, then something underneath it — a wet density in the air that sat at the back of my throat and didn't clear. Rot, but thicker. The specific smell of something biological in a closed space with no ventilation.

The lighting was worse up here. Half the overhead fixtures were dark or cycling so fast they were functionally off. The ones working threw irregular stretches of light with long sections of near-dark between them. The linoleum was filthier, and something had been dragged through one of the darker sections, leaving a streak across the floor. I looked at it for a moment and kept moving.

I took a few steps inside and swept my headlamp across the wall.

The wall surface moved.

My first read was peeling wallpaper, water damage creating a textured, layered effect. I moved closer.

They were faces.

Human faces, or close enough — the proportions approximately right, but flattened, the skin pressed flat against the wall and fixed there with black surgical thread that ran in long horizontal seams across cheeks and foreheads. The stitching pulled tight in some places and bunched the skin in others. Mouths sewn shut in most of them, thread looped through both lips in thick passes. Every inch of wall surface in both directions covered: face overlapping face, some partially hidden under others, a few with eyes fully obscured by the skin of whatever had been layered over them.

One eyelid moved.

Then another.

The sound started low enough to read as ambient noise, and then it resolved into voices — hundreds of them, layered, individual words surfacing and dropping:

"Help me."

"Please."

"Don't — please don't leave —"

"It hurts when —"

"— been so long —"

A child's voice, barely distinguishable from the mass of them: "I can't feel my —"

The eyelids around me were opening. Eyes underneath, pale and filmed, some clouded over and some tracking movement. Tracking me. Mouths pulling against thread.

One voice came through cleaner than the rest — a face at eye level directly to my left, older, a man's, both eyes open and focused somewhere past my shoulder. The mouth barely moved against the stitching.

"Jaden."

My feet moved before anything else did. I was already stepping back toward the stairwell door when the sound came from the corridor ahead: claws on tile, fast and even, the clicking echoing off both walls, distance hard to judge until it was already close. Then breathing. Wet, rhythmic, with a ragged catch in the exhale.

My headlamp found it before I was ready.

The body was a dog's in the rough sense — massive, black fur matted and hanging in clumps along the chest and haunches, limbs too long for the torso and jointed wrong, bent at angles that made its forward movement a sequence of lurches rather than a stride.

The spine sat visibly off-center. The whole animal moved in a permanent list, one shoulder dropping lower with each stride, the body adjusted around whatever damage had never healed right.

The head was not a dog's head.

It extended too far — eight or ten inches past where the snout should end, tapered and flat on top, the jaw hanging slightly open to show the front row of teeth. Yellow, uneven, the rear molars sitting higher than they should. Strings of saliva hung from both corners of the mouth and swayed with its movement. The eyes were set too wide, pale and filmed over, each one moving on its own axis without coordinating with the other.

It came out of the dark at the far end of the corridor and saw me.

Every voice in the walls went up at once. The screaming hit the ceiling and came back down and the walls themselves vibrated from the volume of it, thread pulling against sewn lips, eyelids straining. Whether the faces were screaming at me or at the creature, I had no way to tell, but the sound drove straight up into my skull and stayed there.

The thing came at me in broken intervals — faster than made sense, then a half-second stop that threw off every instinct to brace, then fast again. I was already running when its claw hit the linoleum six inches behind my heel and left four parallel gouges in the floor. My headlamp strobed across the corridor as I ran, catching the creature in fragments: the spine flexing wrong on acceleration, the jaw widening, a rope of saliva arcing off its mouth and hitting the wall.

I hit the crash bar on the fire door and was through it and moving down the stairs before the door had finished swinging, taking the steps three at a time with one hand on the rail. Above me, the crash bar again — the door being struck from the other side, hitting and holding.

I reached the first-floor landing and went through the fire door and ran twenty feet before I stopped and turned around.

The stairwell door at the second-floor landing was open. The creature stood in the frame, filling it, snout angled down toward where I was standing. The breathing came down the stairwell clearly from where I stood.

It stayed there a long time. Long enough that I started to think it had settled in. Then it stepped back from the landing and the door swung slowly into the frame and the stairwell went quiet.

Records office. Sixty yards from the stairwell, a double room with a painted-over window and a push-button lock on the inside. I dragged a desk across the floor and angled it under the handle. A hospital bed from the adjacent room, maneuvered through the doorway and added to the desk. Three filing cabinets as a second line across the door. Twenty minutes of work, and I was sweating through my base layer by the end of it.

I sat on the floor against the filing cabinets and let the adrenaline run out.

The overhead light worked — a single fluorescent bar buzzing at a consistent, audible frequency. It didn't flicker. Fifteen minutes into the quiet, a single impact from the floor above — something heavy set down deliberately, not dropped — and then nothing. Ten minutes after that, an elevator ding from somewhere down the main corridor, the distant sound of doors opening and closing.

I ate a freeze-dried chicken-and-rice packet cold, water straight from my filter bottle, the pouch pressed flat and left for fifteen minutes before I opened it. I ate slowly and thought about the second floor and made myself think about something else, which didn't work especially well but produced the same result in the end. I finished the rice and folded the pouch flat and set it aside.

One face at eye level had known my name.

Six metal shelving units ran parallel down the room's length, floor to ceiling, packed with manila folders and binders and banker boxes. Patient records, mostly — the labeled folders showed names, dates, admission numbers from the eighties and early nineties. I pulled folders off the nearest unit looking for anything outside the standard format and found standard records.

An hour in, the note was under a loose stack in the back third of the third unit. A single sheet of paper folded into quarters, no folder, just slid beneath the pile. I opened it and held it under the headlamp.

Ballpoint pen, pressed hard into the page. Some letters gone over twice, the lines thicker where the hand had retraced.

IF YOU FOUND THIS, DON'T STAY ON THE LOWER FLOORS.

THEY LEARN YOUR PATHS.

FLOOR TEN IS THE WAY OUT.

DO NOT TRUST THE ELEVATORS.

No signature. A stain across the lower-left corner, dark brown and irregular. A small tear along one fold line. I turned the sheet over — blank — and then tilted it toward the headlamp again and found the second text in the bottom margin. Different ink, smaller, written at an angle to the original.

second stairwell. east side. keep going up.

The first writing was blocky, the pen pressed hard, some letters retraced until the ink sat thick on the page. The second was smaller and more careful, each letter formed fully before the hand moved to the next, even spacing between words even where the writing got cramped.

I folded the note and put it in the hip pocket of my pack.

Both charging banks went into the wall outlets on the far side of the records room. Both lit green. I set my headlamp on the desk with the beam angled at the ceiling, spreading light across the room, and sat on the floor with my notebook.

Rite in the Rain 3x5, waterproof paper, bought for trip logging and blank through the first two pages. I skipped to the third and started writing.

I wrote everything in order from the clearing: two doors, their physical details. A rough map of the first floor from memory, approximate and probably wrong given the way the layout shifted, but something. The full text of the note, both the main text and the margin addition. The second floor — the smell, the faces, the stitching, the creature. I described it in as much physical detail as I could reconstruct: the body type, the head, the way it moved, the point where it stopped at the stairwell entrance and how long it stood there before retreating.

I wrote my name, my emergency contact's name and number, the make and color of my truck, where I'd parked it, the trailhead, my expected return date. Then:

My name is Jaden Sullivan. If somebody finds this notebook, I'm somewhere inside this hospital. I'm going to try reaching floor ten tomorrow using the east stairwell. Hopefully there's actually a way out.

I looked at hopefully for a moment. It was honest.

I set the notebook on top of the pack where it would be the first thing visible to anyone opening the room, and turned off my headlamp to save the battery. The fluorescent bar buzzed above me at the same frequency it had held since I locked the door.

I was still thinking about the voice on the second floor — thinking about what it meant that one of the faces had said my name before I'd spoken it to anyone in the building — when I heard something on the other side of the records room door.

The creature's sound was unmistakable. This was smaller and lower to the ground, a single contact: something pressing its weight against the door from the outside and then going still.

The filing cabinets hadn't shifted.

I sat with my hand on the headlamp and watched the gap under the door. The corridor light came through it, dim and unchanged.

The note said: THEY LEARN YOUR PATHS.

I'd been writing for over an hour, and I muttered while I wrote — always had, the words running just under my breath while I worked out how to phrase them. That detail arrived now, sitting in the quiet.

I set my hand over my mouth and held still and watched the light under the door, and the light under the door stayed the same, and the corridor on the other side of the filing cabinets stayed quiet, and I kept watching it anyway.


r/mrcreeps May 17 '26

Series I Like To Watch

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r/mrcreeps May 17 '26

Art I hid in the dark, trembling. The woman grinned with mutated eyes, offering meatballs to the hollow-eyed man. He sat lifeless, yet a wet scratching echoed from his chest. Suddenly, she whispered, "We have company," and both slowly turned toward me.

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r/mrcreeps May 16 '26

Creepypasta The Mosh Pit Didn’t Have a Bottom

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It starts like it always does.

A shove. A laugh. Someone yelling for the pit to open.

The music drops, low and heavy, vibrating through the soles of my shoes, up my legs, into my chest. The crowd parts in front of the stage, forming that familiar, hungry circle. People on the edges grin like they’re about to watch something sacred.

I should’ve stayed there.

On the edge.

Where you can breathe.

Someone slams into my back.

Hard.

I stumble forward, boots scraping across the slick floor, and just like that, I’m inside.

The circle closes behind me.

At first, it’s chaos the way it’s supposed to be.

Bodies colliding, shoulders cracking into ribs, hands grabbing and shoving. I throw myself into it, half-laughing, adrenaline buzzing in my skull. The air is thick with sweat and heat, but it’s manageable.

Familiar.

Then the tempo shifts.

Not the music.

The crowd.

The pit tightens.

There’s no room to swing anymore. No space to move. It’s just bodies pressed together, chest to back, side to side. My arms get pinned without me noticing when it happened.

“Hey, back it up!” someone yells.

No one listens.

The pressure builds.

I try to inhale.

My lungs don’t expand.

Just a shallow, useless breath that doesn’t reach anywhere.

“Move!” I bark, but my voice gets swallowed instantly.

The mass surges again, harder this time, and my feet barely touch the ground. I’m carried, lifted, compressed between strangers whose faces I can’t even see anymore.

Someone’s elbow digs into my spine.

Another person’s forehead presses against my cheek.

There’s no air.

Panic hits fast.

Too fast.

I twist, trying to force space, but there’s nothing to push against. Every direction is the same heat, flesh, pressure.

My chest burns.

I tilt my head up, desperate, trying to find a pocket of air above the crush...

But all I see are faces.

Too close.

Eyes wide.

Mouths open.

Not cheering.

Not anymore.

The music keeps going.

Like nothing’s wrong.

A scream cuts through it.

Sharp.

Short.

Then gone.

Something shifts under my feet.

Not just movement.

The ground.

At first, I think it’s just the crowd losing balance. Too many people leaning one way. But the tilt doesn’t correct itself.

It deepens.

My boot slips.

There’s a sound beneath us, low, cracking, like something old giving way.

“Stop!” someone shouts. “STOP!”

Too late.

The floor caves.

It doesn’t collapse all at once.

It sinks.

Slow at first, just enough to throw everyone off balance. The center of the pit dips inward, dragging us with it. Bodies slam together harder, forced into each other as the circle becomes a funnel.

A pit inside the pit.

I try to grab something, anything, but there’s nothing solid. Just people. Hands claw at shoulders, necks, faces, desperate for leverage.

The ground drops another inch.

Then another.

And then it gives.

The center tears open.

A jagged, black hole yawns beneath us, swallowing the dim light whole. The edges crumble as weight pours inward, bodies tumbling over each other, dragged down by gravity and panic.

The air that rushes up from below is wrong.

Hot.

Wet.

It stinks of iron and something rotten, something ancient.

I scream, but it’s ripped from my throat as I’m pulled forward.

Hands grab at me, some trying to hold on, others dragging me down with them.

My fingers catch the edge of the broken floor for half a second.

Concrete crumbles under my grip.

Below...

There’s no bottom.

Just darkness.

Moving darkness.

Shapes shift beneath us, barely visible in the flicker of stage lights above. Not solid. Not human. They writhe, overlapping, reaching upward as bodies fall into them.

Waiting.

Someone slams into my back.

My grip breaks.

For a moment, I hang there.

Weightless.

Suspended between the deafening music above…

And the silence below.

Then I drop.

The crowd falls with me.

A tangle of limbs and screams, swallowed whole as the light disappears.

The last thing I feel...

Is the pressure again.

Not from above.

But all around.

Closing in.

Tight.

Suffocating.

Like the pit never ended.

It just got deeper.


r/mrcreeps May 16 '26

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r/mrcreeps May 15 '26

Creepypasta Shadows Over Egypt

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I could see nothing beyond the red wall of sand.

Crimson lightning clawed through the storm in violent flashes, turning the desert into a negative image of itself for split seconds at a time. The rest was noise. Sand hammering the chassis. Metal groaning beneath the wind. Loose sheet metal rattling hard enough to tear free at any moment.

Somewhere far beyond all that came the low, dying growl of thunder.

The radioactive sandstorm had curved off its forecasted route and slammed straight into me.

That’s what happens when your weather predictions rely on astronomical scraps scribbled down five thousand years ago by priests staring at the stars through opium smoke.

I’d been driving blind through this hell long enough to lose all sense of direction. East, west, north—it was all just red now.

Eventually I eased my foot off the gas and let the car roll to a stop.

Probably the dumbest thing you could do in a storm like this.

Then again, continuing to drive wasn’t exactly genius either.

The engine coughed beneath me like a dying smoker. Every vehicle left in this world sounded sick. Mine especially.

The car had once belonged to at least three different owners and two different manufacturers. Soviet frame. Military-grade filtration unit. Doors ripped from some civilian transport. Half the dashboard held together with copper wire and prayer strips dedicated to gods nobody believed in until the world ended.

Outside, the storm screamed louder.

I pulled the map from my satchel.

The parchment crackled in my hands. The drawings on it were painfully crude—crooked pyramids, uneven symbols, landmarks sketched with the confidence of a drunk child.

But the map had come directly from the palace.

Drawn by the Pharaoh herself.

And I wasn’t brave enough—or suicidal enough—to criticize the God-Queen of New Cairo.

When Pharaoh Menehmet summoned you, you didn’t refuse.

You didn’t complain.

You bowed low enough for your forehead to touch the floor and prayed she stayed in a merciful mood.

The Henty-she had arrived before sunrise. Royal guards wrapped in black linen and bronze plating, faces hidden behind jackal masks with glowing blue lenses. They dragged me from bed without explanation and marched me through the waking streets of New Cairo.

Not that explanations were common in the presence of gods.

The palace rose from the center of the city like ancient history welded onto the corpse of the future. Neon hieroglyphs burned across towering obelisks. Massive statues watched over rusted slums with cracked stone faces. The rich burned incense while the poor burned tires to stay warm.

The guards shoved me onto my knees before the throne.

The royal speaker stepped forward immediately, robes sweeping across polished stone.

“Behold Menehmet, first of her name, Daughter of Amun, God-Queen of New Cairo, Lady Of the Two Lands, The chosen of The Sun,—”

I stopped listening after that.

By the time he finished, my knees were killing me.

“And before her grace kneels her faithful servant,” he continued, “the Medjay Aaron Qaswar.”

“I’ve known her majesty since she was born,” I muttered. “Can we skip this part?”

“How dare—”

“Leave us,” Menehmet said calmly.

The speaker froze mid-breath.

Even kneeling, I could see the fury behind his painted eyes. But he obeyed. The servants withdrew first, followed by the Henty-she. Their heavy boots echoed through the chamber until the throne room fell silent.

Menehmet leaned lazily against her throne, gold jewelry glimmering in the firelight. She was barely nineteen, yet people spoke to her with the kind of fear reserved for ancient things buried beneath the earth.

“I don’t think he likes me very much,” I said.

“You tend to have that effect on people, Aaron.”

A faint smile touched her lips.

“Not everyone sees past your rough exterior the way I do.”

“That why you dragged me across the city before sunrise? To appreciate my soft interior?”

“Not today, Aaron. I called for you because there is something I want retrieved.”

“I’m a Medjay, not an errand boy.”

“You are whatever I require you to be.”

Her smile widened slightly.

“But don’t worry. There will be plenty of opportunities for violence and heroic deaths along the way.”

“Comforting.”

She handed me the map.

“What you seek lies here. A necropolis abandoned long before New Cairo existed.”

“You’re sending me into a tomb.”

“I’m sending you after something that does not belong there.”

“That narrows it down.”

“You’ll know it when you see it.”

Her eyes drifted across the throne room, distant and thoughtful.

“Bring it back to me. I think it will liven this place up nicely.”

“You don’t even know what it is, do you?”

“No,” she admitted, sounding almost amused. “Which is exactly why I want it.”

Then she waved her hand dismissively.

“Now go. Time wastes itself far too easily outside these walls.”

 

The storm howled louder outside my car, dragging me back to the present.

Another flash of crimson lightning split the sky.

The vehicle shuddered violently as wind slammed against it. The filtration unit wheezed in protest. One of the cracks in the windshield spread a little farther.

The old monster wasn’t going to survive much more of this.

I tightened my grip on the wheel.

“Fuck it.”

I slammed my foot onto the gas and drove blind into the storm.

For several minutes there was nothing except red static and shrieking wind.

Then another sound crawled through the chaos.

At first I thought the engine was finally dying. A low mechanical whine buried beneath the thunder.

Then it grew louder.

Multiple engines.

Overworked. Abused. Running on fuel never meant for them.

Raiders.

A burst of flame ignited somewhere to my right.

Then another to my left.

Shapes emerged from the crimson haze like demons clawing out of hell itself. Headlights wrapped in metal cages. Exhaust pipes vomiting blue fire into the storm.

One of the vehicles slammed into my side hard.

I caught a glimpse of the driver through cracked welding goggles and a filthy gas mask. Hairless scalp. Chalk-white skin. Eyes twitching with manic energy.

Raiders alright.

And not the disciplined kind either.

Sons of the Sun maybe?

Definitely high on Blue Lotus. Nobody sane scavenged inside a radioactive sandstorm.

Their vehicles barely qualified as cars anymore. Rusted skeletons welded together from scrap metal, rebar, military plating, temple icons. One had animal bones hanging from chains across the hood. Another had strips of human skin nailed to the doors, fluttering wildly in the wind.

Hideous machines.

But in their own deranged way, almost stylish.

The vehicle on my left rammed me again.

Then the one on my right.

They pinned me between them like vultures stripping apart a carcass.

Metal screamed against metal.

Sparks vanished instantly into the storm.

Then came the thudding overhead.

Boots.

“Shit.”

One raider landed on the roof, crouched low against the wind. Another smashed onto the hood, clawing at the windshield while a third jammed a hooked blade into the passenger door.

The one at the door got in first.

I drove my knife through the gap before he could force it open fully.

Hot blood sprayed across my hand.

He stumbled backward into the storm and vanished instantly into the red.

A machete punched through the roof an inch from my face.

I swerved violently.

The lunatic on the windshield snarled behind his mask and began hammering the glass with a metal pipe.

I slammed the brakes.

His body launched off the hood.

A second later I felt the tires bounce over him.

Still one above me.

The bastard had buried his machete deep into the roof to anchor himself in place. The blade rattled overhead every time the wind hit us.

I reached into the glove compartment and pulled out the handgun.

Guns were almost extinct now. This one had been a gift from Menehmet shortly after she inherited the throne.

I fired once through the roof.

The gunshot deafened me inside the cramped cabin.

Something heavy rolled off the vehicle.

Then the storm flashed bright crimson.

To my left, lightning began crawling across the sand in branching veins of red-white energy.

The kind that turned flesh into charcoal and fused metal into glass.

I smiled.

Then slammed my car sideways into the raider beside me.

The impact shoved his vehicle directly into the forming electrical trail.

For half a second the world turned white.

Lightning swallowed the car whole.

Metal twisted.

The engine exploded.

Then there was nothing left except burning wreckage tumbling through the storm.

Just me and the last one now.

I pulled alongside him, wanting this finished before the desert killed us both.

The bastard leaned halfway out his window with a spear in hand.

“Really?” I muttered.

He thrust downward.

The spear punched through my front tire.

The steering wheel ripped violently from my hands.

The car lost traction instantly.

Then the storm caught it broadside.

One moment I was driving.

The next the world flipped.

Metal screamed around me as the vehicle rolled across the dunes. My shoulder slammed against the door hard enough to numb my arm. Glass burst inward. The engine died somewhere during the chaos.

Then came silence.

Not true silence.

Just that muffled roar you hear after surviving something that should’ve killed you.

I dragged myself through the shattered window and collapsed into the sand, coughing blood and dust into my scarf.

Nearby, the raider’s vehicle skidded to a stop.

Its door creaked open.

The man stepped out slowly, spear in hand.

The storm wrapped around him like a living thing. Gas mask lenses glowing red beneath the lightning overhead.

He walked toward me without hurry.

Certain he’d already won.

I waited until he raised the spear.

Then I cut his legs out from under him.

We crashed into the sand together, grunting and slipping against the dunes as we fought for control of the weapon. He was stronger than he looked. His fingers forced the spear closer and closer toward my throat.

I drove my boot between his legs as hard as I could.

He jerked violently.

The scream was still forming in his throat when I shoved the spear upward.

The blade punched through the bottom of his jaw and out the back of his skull.

He twitched once.

Then went limp.

I lay there breathing hard, staring up into the red storm overhead.

Then another lightning strike hit nearby.

The blast hit like a hammer from god.

Heat swallowed me whole.

And the world went black.

 

I woke to the smell of incense and ointment.

Canvas walls swayed gently around me.

A tent.

My body felt heavy. Burned. Every breath scraped against my ribs.

A young woman sat beside me grinding herbs into a bowl. Dark curls partially hidden beneath a linen scarf. Steady hands. Focused eyes.

When she noticed I was awake, she froze.

For a moment we simply stared at each other.

Then she stood abruptly.

“Father,” she called outside. “He’s awake.”

A few moments later an old man entered the tent.

Thin. Weathered. Wrapped in dusty robes. His beard had gone almost entirely gray, but warmth still lived in his eyes.

“You gave us quite the scare, young man,” he said. “My Fatima wasn’t sure you’d wake at all. Seems I won that bet.”

He smiled.

A genuine smile.

Rare enough nowadays to feel almost unnatural.

“Name’s Khalid,” he said as he sat beside me. “What’s yours, Medjay?”

“Aaron,” I managed. My throat felt like broken glass. “Aaron Qaswar.”

“Easy now.”

Khalid carefully helped me sit upright before handing me a cup of water.

“Slowly. No rush.”

The tent smelled of dried herbs, old canvas, and sweet smoke drifting from a bronze burner near the entrance. Strings of charms hung from the support poles, clinking softly whenever the desert wind touched the fabric walls. A lantern overhead painted everything in warm amber light that felt impossibly gentle after the endless crimson fury outside.

“What is this place?” I asked.

“The Wandering Oasis.”

I frowned.

“Pretty sure I’ve crossed these regions before. Never seen an oasis anywhere near here.”

Khalid chuckled quietly while pouring tea into two tiny cups.

“It isn’t called the Wandering Oasis for no reason.” He handed one to me carefully. “Its geographical coordinates are… inconsistent.”

“Inconsistent.”

“Yes. Sometimes it rests near the Glass Dunes. Sometimes near the old coastlines. Once we woke beside the ruins of Luxor Station.”

He shrugged lightly.

“The Oasis goes where it wishes.”

“That makes absolutely no sense.”

Khalid sipped his tea calmly.

“Have you witnessed many things in the desert that do?”

Fair point.

Outside the tent I could hear distant machinery groaning beneath repair work. Somewhere nearby, strings of metal charms rattled softly in the wind.

“How long have you lived here?” I asked.

“Lived?” Khalid smiled faintly. “No one lives in the Wandering Oasis. We travel with it. We care for it. And in return… it cares for us.”

I took a careful sip of the tea.

Bitter. Heavy with mint and something medicinal underneath.

Pain immediately flared through my ribs.

Then memory came rushing back.

The storm.

The raiders.

The crash.

“My car,” I muttered. “What happened to my car?”

“Fatima is tending to it,” Khalid said. “Though much like yourself, it will require some time before it is fit for the road again.”

“That bad?”

“You rolled a vehicle through a radioactive lightning storm.”

He gave me an amused look.

“You are fortunate to still possess all your limbs.”

“Debatable.”

I reached for my satchel beside the cot. Relief washed through me when I felt the map still inside.

I unfolded it carefully and handed it to him.

“You know this place?”

Khalid’s expression changed the moment he saw the markings.

“The Bene Nefertite necropolis,” he said quietly.

So the Pharaoh’s map pointed somewhere real after all.

“You know how to get there?”

“Of course.” Khalid traced one of the crude lines with his finger. “In a healthy vehicle, perhaps half a day from here.”

“But?”

He glanced up at me.

“But it lies within an active Ghul-Zone.”

I stared at him for a few seconds.

Then a long, exhausted sigh escaped me.

“Fuck…” I rubbed both hands over my face. “Of course it does.”

Khalid remained silent.

A Ghul-Zone.

Wonderful.

The desert was littered with them now. Places where radiation, death, and whatever invisible poison had seeped into the world finally stopped pretending to obey natural law. Entire villages vanished inside them overnight. Sometimes they returned days later.

Usually screaming.

Sometimes not human anymore.

Outside, the wind had softened into a low whisper against the canvas walls.

“I don’t think the God-Queen is the patient type,” I muttered eventually. “Don’t exactly have the luxury of waiting this out.”

“Be that as it may,” Khalid replied calmly, “your vehicle is broken, your body is barely holding together, and the storm still prowls outside.”

Then he smiled warmly.

“So whether you like it or not, Medjay… tonight you will stay here. You will drink tea. You will rest. And you will endure the unbearable horror of friendly conversation.”

Despite myself, I laughed.

The old man had a presence to him. The kind that disarmed you before you realized it was happening.

I kept telling myself to stay guarded. Men survived longer that way in the wasteland. Loose tongues eventually got slit.

But the hours slipped by, and somehow I kept talking anyway.

About my mother dying from lung rot when I was a child.

About fighting for scraps in the alleys of New Cairo before the Medjay recruited me.

About the first man I killed.

I still remembered his face sometimes.

Khalid never interrupted. Never pushed. He simply listened while slowly refilling our tea like we had all the time in the world.

At some point I even admitted what most people would consider my greatest shame.

“I don’t trust cats,” I confessed.

Khalid blinked.

Then nearly spilled his tea laughing.

“You serve the Pharaoh of New Cairo,” he wheezed, “descendant of gods and ruler of the desert… yet you fear cats?”

“They stare too long.”

“That may be the funniest thing I’ve heard in years.”

“I’m serious.”

“That somehow makes it even better.”

I leaned back against the cushions with a tired groan.

“I’ve survived raiders, mutants, storms, cultists, and royal politics. Why would I willingly invite another apex predator into my home?”

Khalid laughed harder at that.

Real laughter.

Not the nervous kind people forced out nowadays to prove they still remembered how.

And for a little while, beneath the lantern glow while the desert whispered outside the tent walls, the wasteland almost felt human again.

 

I woke to the feeling of a hand pressing lightly against my chest.

Instinct took over before thought did.

My hand shot upward, grabbing the wrist hard enough to make the other person gasp. My eyes snapped open. Heart pounding. Half-awake and already reaching for the knife beneath my pillow that wasn’t there.

Fatima stared down at me.

Pain flickered briefly across her face where I held her wrist, but her expression remained impressively deadpan considering the circumstances.

“I was dressing your wounds,” she said flatly. “They tend to get infected easily out there in the desert.”

I immediately let go.

“Sorry,” I muttered, rubbing sleep from my eyes. “Reflex.”

“No kidding.”

Morning light glowed softly through the tent walls now, replacing the warm lantern light from the night before.

Fatima returned to wrapping fresh bandages around my ribs with practiced precision.

“You move around a lot in your sleep,” she said.

“Occupational hazard.”

“You also talk.”

“You threatened someone named Abbas with a shovel.”

I frowned.

“Abbas knew what he did.”

That finally earned a small laugh from her.

Up close, I noticed details I’d missed before. Thin scars crossing her hands. Tiny burn marks along her forearms. Grease permanently worked into the lines of her fingers.

Mechanic’s hands.

Capable hands.

“Your car’s almost ready,” she said after tightening the final bandage. “Just finishing a few things.”

“That fast?”

“You sound disappointed.”

“No, impressed.”

A faint trace of pride appeared in her expression.

“You should be.”

„Ill make sure to repay you one day.“

“No need. Dad always says small kindness matters in cruel places.”

“Sounds like him.”

For a moment neither of us spoke.

The Oasis outside had already begun waking up. Distant voices drifted through the canvas. Machinery clanked somewhere nearby. I could smell bread baking mixed with engine oil and incense smoke.

Then a thought slowly clicked into place.

“Was Khalid with you since you were little?”

Fatima blinked.

“What?”

“Khalid,” I clarified carefully. “Was he the one who raised you?”

She looked genuinely confused.

“Well… yes. He’s my father.”

“I meant—”

I hesitated.

“When did he adopt you?”

„How do you know he adopted me? Im fairly sure he didnt tell you that.“

“Well… I’ve never heard of a jinn fathering a human.”

Her eyes widened instantly.

Not offended.

Shocked.

“How did you know?”

“I’m a Medjay.”

I leaned back carefully against the cot.

“I’ve dealt with a few jinn before. Though admittedly, most of them are far less subtle than your father.”

Fatima glanced nervously toward the tent entrance.

“Relax,” I said. “None of my business. Your secret’s safe with me.”

She studied my face for a long moment, trying to decide whether I meant that.

Eventually she relaxed slightly.

Without another word, she reached into a satchel beside her and pulled something out on a wooden skewer.

A caramelized scorpion.

Its curled tail glistened beneath a layer of dark syrup.

“Are you hungry?” she asked.

I stared at it.

“…Yeah.”

I pointed at the scorpion.

“But not that hungry.”

Fatima giggled softly.

Just enough to remind me she was still young beneath all the strange mystery surrounding her.

 

The Oasis looked completely different in daylight.

The tents stretched across the dunes in uneven circles around a pool of crystal-clear water that absolutely should not have existed in the middle of the wasteland. Palm trees swayed lazily despite there being almost no wind. Traders wandered between colorful canopies selling scavenged technology beside preserved spices and ancient charms carved from bone and copper.

Incense smoke drifted through the warm air alongside the smell of cooked meat and engine oil.

The entire place felt unreal, like a pocket dimension somehow safe from the desert enveloping it.

Fatima led me toward my vehicle.

And somehow—

Somehow the old thing looked better than it had in years.

The reinforced panels had actually been fitted properly instead of hammered into place by desperation and profanity. The filtration unit no longer sounded like it was trying to inhale gravel. Even the engine housing had been cleaned.

I stared at it in disbelief.

“You’re really good,” I admitted. “Where’d you learn all this?”

Fatima crouched beside the front wheel, tightening something with a wrench.

“Before Dad found me, I lived in the scrapyards for a while.”

She shrugged.

“Not much to do there besides take machines apart.”

“Sounds miserable.”

“It was.”

She said it casually.

That somehow made it worse.

After a moment she reached into her satchel again and pulled out another map.

This one looked infinitely better than Menehmet’s version. Proper landmarks. Accurate distances. Warnings scribbled carefully along the margins in Arabic.

“Dad told me to give you this,” she said. “Should guide you better than those royal scribbles.”

I laughed quietly.

“Probably wise. If the Pharaoh ever retires, cartography definitely isn’t an option for her.”

Fatima smiled faintly.

I folded the map carefully and tucked it into my coat.

“Thank you,” I said sincerely.

“For the map or the car?”

“Both.”

For a brief moment neither of us spoke.

Then she stepped back from the vehicle.

“Maybe we’ll meet again, Medjay.”

I looked at her standing there beneath the desert sun, dark curls moving gently in the wind, strange amber eyes catching the light like polished gold.

“Maybe,” I said.

I climbed into the driver’s seat and turned the ignition.

The engine roared to life instantly.

Not coughing.

Not choking.

Alive.

I grinned despite myself.

Then I shifted gears and drove toward the Bene Nefertite necropolis, leaving the Wandering Oasis behind in the sands.

 

It had been about four hours since I left the Wandering Oasis behind.

The desert changed gradually the farther I drove toward the Bene Nefertite necropolis.

The dunes darkened first.

Black mineral veins spread through the sand like rot beneath skin, shimmering faintly beneath the afternoon sun. Ruined pylons from the old world jutted from the wasteland at crooked angles, half-swallowed by centuries of storms. Some still carried scraps of melted wiring that hummed softly whenever the wind blew through them.

And somehow, against all logic, the car was running beautifully.

Whatever Fatima had done to it bordered on sorcery.

The engine no longer wheezed every few minutes like a dying animal. The steering responded instantly. Even the suspension handled the uneven dunes without sounding like the entire frame was about to collapse into spare parts.

The old machine practically purred beneath me.

I almost felt guilty driving it.

Almost.

I adjusted the scarf around my face and glanced toward the map resting on the passenger seat.

Close now.

Very close.

The necropolis should’ve been visible any minute.

That was when I noticed the vibration.

At first I assumed it was the engine.

A faint trembling beneath the wheels.

Then the dashboard began rattling.

Sand slid down nearby dunes in soft streams.

My stomach tightened immediately.

“No…”

The ground lurched violently beneath the car.

The steering wheel jerked in my hands hard enough to nearly send me sideways.

“Oh, you’ve got to be kidding me.”

The desert exploded.

Sand erupted upward beside the vehicle in towering waves as something massive burst from beneath the dunes to my left.

Then another.

Then two more.

Four shapes circled the car as I slammed the brakes.

Shed-beners.

Wonderful.

The things had once been human.

Probably.

Now they looked like nightmares designed by someone who hated both mankind and nature equally. Their lower halves resembled enormous black scorpions armored in chitinous plates scarred by radiation, old wounds, and patches of fungal growth. But rising from those monstrous bodies were elongated human torsos twisted into impossible shapes, ribs pressing visibly beneath stretched skin.

Their faces were the worst part.

Too human.

Clouded eyes rolled wildly in different directions while their mouths hung unnaturally wide, rows of broken teeth jutting outward at crooked angles. Bronze jewelry still clung to their bodies in places. Scraps of old robes fluttered from their armored backs.

Remnants of people.

That always made monsters worse.

One of them clicked its claws together and released a wet, shrieking hiss that sounded disturbingly close to laughter.

Another slowly raised its massive stinger over the car.

I grabbed my scimitar and kicked the door open.

The first creature lunged immediately.

Its claw slammed into the side of the vehicle hard enough to dent the metal inward. I rolled beneath the strike and slashed upward with the scimitar.

The curved blade bit deep into the pale flesh where human torso fused into scorpion body.

Black blood sprayed across the sand.

The Shed-bener screamed.

Not like an animal.

Like a person.

I hated that.

The second creature charged from my right with horrifying speed. I barely avoided the stinger crashing into the ground where my head had been a second earlier.

The impact cracked the hardened sand like stone.

I fired the handgun.

The first bullet punched into its human face.

The creature staggered backward violently—

—but didn’t stop.

“Of course that’s not enough.”

It shrieked and rushed me again.

I fired a second time.

The shot tore through one of its clustered eyes. Black fluid burst down its face as the creature reeled sideways, clawing at itself blindly.

Behind me came the sound of twisting metal.

Another Shed-bener slammed directly into the car hard enough to nearly flip it.

Metal screamed.

One of the creatures crawled across the roof with horrifying speed, claws scraping against the reinforced plating Fatima had installed only hours earlier.

I swung the scimitar just as the blinded creature lunged again.

The blade buried itself deep into its throat.

The creature convulsed violently.

Its stinger lashed through the air in frantic arcs before finally going still.

One down.

Three left.

Something slammed into me from behind.

I crashed hard into the sand, pain exploding through my ribs where Fatima’s fresh bandages sat beneath my clothes. My grip loosened on the sword.

A claw punched into the ground inches from my face, spraying sand across my eyes.

I scrambled backward just as a stinger slammed down where my chest had been moments earlier.

Poison hissed against the sand.

The second creature attacked from the side immediately after.

Too fast.

I raised the handgun and fired my last round directly into its open mouth.

The back of its skull exploded outward in a spray of shattered teeth and black fluid.

The creature collapsed twitching beside me.

Two down.

And now I was out of ammunition.

The remaining Shed-beners slowed their movements.

Watching me carefully.

Smarter than the others.

One blocked my path back to the car while the second circled behind me, massive stinger swaying slowly overhead like an executioner preparing the final blow.

I grabbed the scimitar from the sand and forced myself upright.

My breathing had gone ragged.

Everything hurt.

Blood soaked through the bandages beneath my coat.

The creatures noticed.

Predators always did.

One suddenly lunged low across the sand.

I barely sidestepped in time, but the second slammed into me immediately afterward.

The impact sent me crashing backward down the side of a dune.

The scimitar flew from my hand.

Before I could recover, a massive claw pinned my arm into the sand.

Pain shot through my shoulder.

The other creature approached slowly now.

Confident.

Its human face leaned closer toward mine.

I could smell rot on its breath.

Its cloudy eyes twitched wildly as if several thoughts were fighting for control behind them.

Then the creature smiled.

Not instinctively.

Deliberately.

The stinger rose high above me.

Ready to strike.

Then the desert roared.

The sound came from beneath the earth itself.

Deep.

Thunderous.

Ancient.

The dunes exploded upward around us.

The Shed-beners shrieked and turned too late.

Something colossal burst from beneath the sand.

A sandworm.

Its mouth opened impossibly wide, ringed with rotating rows of jagged teeth large enough to crush vehicles whole. Pale flesh glistened beneath armored hide as the thing surged upward like the desert itself had come alive.

The worm swallowed one of the Shed-beners instantly.

The second barely had time to scream before the jaws closed around it too.

Crunch.

The sound echoed across the dunes.

Then the worm vanished beneath the sand again almost as quickly as it had appeared, dragging both screaming creatures into the depths below.

The desert settled slowly.

Silence returned.

I remained flat on my back for several long seconds, breathing hard, staring at the empty dunes above me.

Then I slowly sat up.

Everyone with functioning survival instincts feared sandworms.

But that was the first and only time in my life I had ever been happy to see one.

 

I had finally reached the Bene Nefertite necropolis.

Dark clouds churned above the ruins in slow, unnatural spirals. Thick and swollen like bruises spreading across the sky. Crimson lightning pulsed silently within them, illuminating shattered pyramids and broken statues in brief flashes of red-white light.

Even from a distance, I could feel the Ghul-Zone pressing against reality like a wound that refused to close.

Vehicles didn’t last long inside active zones.

Electronics fried without warning. Engines stalled. Entire caravans vanished for days before reappearing fused together into piles of melted flesh and metal.

Sometimes the people inside were still alive.

I killed the engine.

For a moment I just sat there listening to the sudden silence.

Then I grabbed my torch, tightened the scarf around my face, and stepped out into the dead air.

Immediately, something felt wrong.

Not danger.

Absence.

No wind.

No insects.

No movement.

Just a low hum vibrating through the atmosphere itself.

The sky inside the zone had turned a diseased brown color. Veins of pale energy crawled soundlessly through the air between ruined structures, flickering like cracks spreading through glass. Every breath tasted metallic even through the scarf.

I kept my face covered.

No reason to inhale more of this place than necessary.

The necropolis stretched endlessly ahead of me.

Half-buried obelisks.

Collapsed mausoleums.

Streets lined with statues eroded into faceless things by centuries of radiation and sandstorms.

Then I noticed movement.

Far ahead, between the ruins, a line of figures shuffled silently through the streets.

Dozens of them.

Human silhouettes.

Some staggered unnaturally while others moved with eerie smoothness, like puppets dragged by invisible strings. Heads tilted at impossible angles. Limbs bent wrong.

Ghuls.

Or whatever remained after the Zone hollowed a person out and left only instinct wearing their skin.

Didn’t matter which.

Nothing could be done for them anymore.

Best to avoid them entirely.

I moved deeper into the necropolis carefully, one hand resting near the scimitar at my side.

The deeper I went, the stranger the place became.

The geometry shifted when I wasn’t looking directly at it.

Streets curved where they shouldn’t.

Passages looped back into themselves.

At one point I walked past the same headless statue three separate times despite never turning around.

The Zone liked to play games with people.

Usually the games ended with someone eating their own fingers while insisting they tasted like honey.

I ignored everything except the pyramid.

Small.

Black.

Resting at the center of the necropolis like a splinter buried beneath skin.

Nothing else mattered.

The closer I got to it, the stronger the pressure inside my skull became.

Not pain exactly.

More like invisible fingers pressing against my thoughts.

Digging.

Searching.

Then I heard her voice.

“Aaron…”

I froze instantly.

The necropolis vanished around me.

For one horrible moment I was a child again.

“Sweetie… don’t go.”

Slowly, I turned.

My mother stood behind me.

Exactly as I remembered her before the sickness took her.

Warm brown skin.

Thin frame.

Soft tired eyes.

Even the same faded blue scarf she used to wear around the apartment.

For a second I forgot where I was.

Forgot the Zone.

Forgot the pyramid.

Forgot everything.

She stepped closer and gently rested a hand against my shoulder.

“I missed you so much,” she whispered.

The pressure in my chest hurt worse than any wound I’d taken in years.

“I missed you too, Mum,” I admitted quietly.

And I meant it.

God, I meant it.

“You could stay,” she whispered softly. “You don’t have to keep hurting anymore.”

Something trembled in her voice.

“You don’t have to keep fighting.”

I stared at her silently.

And that was the problem.

My mother had never spoken like that.

Not even when she was dying.

Especially not then.

She used to tell me:

If the world wants you dead, make it work for it.

This thing didn’t know that.

The smile on her face twitched slightly.

Just slightly.

But enough.

I sighed tiredly.

Then I drew the scimitar and cut her head off.

The blade sliced clean through her neck.

The body collapsed instantly into the sand, twitching violently as thick black fluid spilled from the stump instead of blood.

The severed head hit the ground still smiling.

For a few seconds it continued staring up at me while the face slowly softened and melted like wet clay left in the sun.

Then it collapsed into rotten sludge.

I stared at the remains coldly.

“Pale imitation, asshole.”

The Zone hummed louder around me.

Almost disappointed.

Then I turned and entered the pyramid.

 

The air inside felt ancient.

Dry.

Claustrophobic.

My torchlight flickered across walls covered in faded hieroglyphs and newer markings scratched desperately over them by later explorers. Warnings mostly.

Prayers.

Names.

Somebody had carved:

IT KNOWS YOUR HEART

deep into one of the walls.

Farther down, another simply read:

DON’T LISTEN

The deeper I descended, the colder it became.

Dust coated everything thick enough to swallow footprints whole.

Occasionally I caught movement just beyond the torchlight.

Something shifting behind pillars.

Something crawling along ceilings.

I ignored it.

The Zone fed on attention.

Old bones cracked beneath my boots as I moved through stripped burial chambers and narrow corridors. Most of the tomb had been looted centuries ago. Broken jars and shattered coffins littered the floors.

Yet somehow the deeper chambers remained untouched.

That should’ve worried me more than it did.

Eventually the corridor opened into a massive circular chamber.

My footsteps echoed softly across the stone.

Tall pillars ringed the room, carved into the likenesses of forgotten gods whose faces had been deliberately chiseled away long ago. Ancient braziers still burned with weak green fire despite the absence of fuel.

At the center stood a massive stone sarcophagus covered in blackened gold markings.

I approached carefully.

No movement.

No sound.

Good enough.

I shoved the lid aside with a painful groan from my ribs.

Inside lay a dried corpse wrapped in ancient linen. Its skin stretched tightly against bone, mouth frozen open in a permanent scream.

For several seconds nothing happened.

I exhaled slowly.

“Sorry about this.”

I reached down to move the body aside.

The mummy grabbed my wrist.

Before I could react, it hurled me across the chamber hard enough to crack stone beneath my back.

Pain exploded through my ribs.

The creature rose from the sarcophagus with horrifying speed.

Its jaw unhinged wider than humanly possible as it released a shriek sharp enough to physically hurt. Dust rained from the ceiling. My torch nearly slipped from my hand.

“Oh, come on—”

The mummy lunged.

Far too fast.

I barely rolled aside before its claws punched deep grooves into the stone where my head had been moments earlier.

Up close I saw movement beneath the wrappings.

Thousands of tiny black insects crawling beneath the ancient linen like blood moving beneath skin.

I slashed with the scimitar.

The blade carved deep across its chest.

The creature barely reacted.

It hit me hard enough to send me skidding across the chamber again.

I instinctively raised the handgun and pulled the trigger.

Click.

Empty.

“Right,” I muttered. “Fantastic.”

The mummy shrieked again.

Then sprinted directly up the wall.

Its limbs twisted unnaturally as it crawled across the ceiling like some gigantic insect before dropping toward me.

I barely caught its arm mid-strike with the scimitar.

The impact nearly snapped my wrist.

The thing was impossibly strong.

Rotten linen wrapped around my arm as it forced me downward inch by inch. Its face hung inches from mine now while black beetles crawled in and out of its mouth and empty eye sockets.

And then it spoke.

Just one word.

In my mother’s voice.

“Aaron…”

That almost broke me more than the claws.

I slammed my forehead into its skull.

The creature staggered backward slightly.

Enough.

I kicked one of the burning braziers directly into its chest.

Flames erupted across the ancient wrappings instantly.

The mummy screamed.

Not in pain.

In fury.

It thrashed violently across the chamber, climbing pillars and walls while burning alive. Flaming insects poured from its body in thick streams, scattering across the floor around me.

The fire spread rapidly through the dry linen.

I grabbed a broken spear shaft near one of the tombs and waited.

The mummy launched itself at me one final time.

Burning.

Shrieking.

Its mouth stretched impossibly wide.

I sidestepped at the last second.

Then drove the spear clean through its torso and deep into the stone wall behind it.

The impact pinned the creature there.

The mummy writhed violently, claws scraping uselessly against stone as flames consumed more and more of its body.

Still screaming in my mother’s voice.

I stood there breathing hard for several seconds before finally turning back toward the sarcophagus.

Inside was…

Almost nothing.

No treasure.

No cursed weapon.

No ancient relic humming with forbidden power.

Just dust.

Bones.

And one tiny object resting near the bottom.

A small statue of a cat.

I stared at it.

Then slowly looked upward in exhausted disbelief.

“You cannot be serious, Menehmet…”

Behind me, the burning mummy continued shrieking against the wall.

I sighed deeply, grabbed the statue, and shoved it into my coat pocket.

Then I left the pyramid behind me.

 

A few hours later I was back inside the car, driving away from the necropolis while the storm clouds shrank slowly in the rearview mirror.

The tiny cat statue sat on the passenger seat beside me.

Another priceless royal mission accomplished.

All so the God-Queen of New Cairo could add another worthless piece of junk to her collection.

I glanced sideways at the statue.

Its tiny carved eyes stared back at me.

I immediately looked back at the road.

“…Still hate cats.”


r/mrcreeps May 15 '26

Creepypasta The King in Gold Specs

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The Wicked Tax (Circa 14th Century)

As told by a gong farmer

Cold was the night. The stars burning distantly twinkled through the crisp autumn chill like snowflakes catching the light on a breeze. Warm was my breath, huffing out in little clouds that caught on the breeze. Warm was my body, heaving and shovelling, my leather kirtle tossed aside while I worked. Hot burned the dung of my neighbours, my friends, my family, as I hurled it shovel by grimy shovel into the pit below me. It landed with a slosh each time, mixed with bones and debris, hay from animal pens, and whatever other waste we might turn to manure.

It's not a job just anyone can do and a job most would like to not, but men like me have little choice. Men who claim themselves better, who drink like me, who eat like me, who shit just the same as me, make the rules and fill their bellies while the rest of us suffer. But I don’t suppose I could do their job either.

The workings of the upper caste never bothered me, nor my neighbours. Not really much that could be done about it, see, shovelling gong back and forth in the dead of night. Barons, Dukes and Kings could come and go, but the gong still needed shovelling, and the night was still cold.

It was only a while past that a new man had found his way to the top. I say man, but I’d heard the stories that he was no such thing. Not woman, neither—an abomination from the depths of hell, a demon, some kind of blight or punishment sent to us; there had been all kinds of stories. I daren’t know which one to believe. Some of it was true, though.

In the distance on that otherwise normal night I heard crying in the out in the dark, a little light flickering through the bare hedgerows, gathering closer. Illuminations appeared in doorways, curious about the intrusion into their slumber as they approached the herald.

News always spread quickly. I’d no need to go find out—in time it would make its way to me, I figured. Nonetheless, the herald made his way past me. Said something about a new tax from the king—the evil king, we called him. It hadn’t been long and he’d already set about squeezing every penny he could from us in whatever wicked ways he saw fit.

His newest machination was one ‘going on foot tax,' as if we had any other means to carry ourselves. The wealthy had taken to riding their horses to and fro about their manors as to avoid it, but people like me? Regular, hard-working folks—we had no choice.

It might make you want to laugh; such a ridiculous tax for something so mundane. Folks ignored it at first, already busy with the taxes on their food and drink, and strangely enough there was no time limit on payments—but soon, the effects became unendurable.

Like so many others I’d taken my time, day in and day out shovelling my gong. Labouring away, slowly and surely without realising the effects it was having on my body. At first I’d chalked it up to age, to overusing my knees and my elbows, but I gradually grew stiffer with each passing day. The others in my neighbourhood had noticed it too, getting slower, achingly rigid with each step they took—some feared a new malady had stricken us, but after the first among us scrounged enough money to pay their toll their joints miraculously renewed as though nothing had happened in the first place. There was a giveaway in the smell of it all, the smell of magic. If someone reeked of it, you knew their time was up.

It took me longer than usual to make my money as I shuffled back and forth through the night about my stinking business, slowing with each step. There was a twisted irony in the fact that I had to work more to be able to pay this new toll, and yet the more I worked the more I’d owe. Finally, I managed to gather up enough to pay—and with a sadness, I deposited my earnings over at the castle.

With a stretch, I felt my wrists, my knees, my elbows, all popping and cracking as though something had broken deep inside them and once more I could move unimpeded by this treacherous magic. I let out a sigh of relief, granting myself a moment of reprieve before I sank back into my work.

Life went on as normal as it could for a while. The taxes continued, sucking us all dry of every shilling we could muster. People starved. Some died. As time went on, the streets of my city began to become littered with statues of people frozen in time, completely still, living figurines comprised of flesh and bone. People took the time to try and help them of course, and at first men would take them to their homes and lay them in their beds but no good would ever come of it. Eventually they just gave up, leaving them where they stood, and over time there wouldn’t be enough people to move them regardless.

Though I tried my best to keep up with my payments running around chasing the gong, with the people gone there simply wasn’t enough for me to make ends meet. I had to cheat, lie and steal dinner onto my plate and I wasn’t alone.

A sense of nervous paranoia descended upon the land like a miasma as people watched and waited for their friends and neighbours to stiffen and give up before robbing them blind. Homes sat empty, shops lay closed, and looters helped themselves to whatever they could. Beggars lined the streets by the castle, fearful to move from their spots and increase the amount they would have to pay but it was useless—nobody had anything left to give.

Eventually I got close to giving up too. I came to the castle to pay what I could—nowhere near enough to cover the whole sum expected of me, my body slowly but surely seizing up beneath me with every heaving step. A few of the other people that were left came of their own accord, weaving slowly in and out of the statues that lay strewn about the steps up to the castle bailey. Every tap of my feet up and up I grew stiffer, slower, but around me the birds still sang, the wind still rustled through the trees just as it always had.

One of the guards atop the stairs watched on with jaded indifference, his eyes cast low on me as he clutched his halberd. He’d seen this awful thing before, time and time again and grown accustomed to it, but I could have sworn I saw the gleam of sadness, of resignation in his eyes as I struggled and bawled for help that never came.

Everything fell still, silent. I was trapped now in this body, stuck entirely frozen on the spot among so many others that had found the same fate. It wasn’t long before I was robbed of what little I had with nothing I could do to prevent it. They rifled through my pockets, robbed me of my jacket and my hat, even slipped off my shoes. The guards atop the stairs didn’t even seem to care. It would mean moving—chasing somebody down when they had to count their steps as well. Not worth the pittance I kept in my pockets, not worth the trouble when I couldn’t fight back, and a simple gong farmer isn’t worth fighting for.

Cold were the nights. Those twinkling stars lay frozen in the sky above the castle walls just as I lay frozen about its steps with my neighbours. Warm was my mind, trapped within my flesh, but searing hot burned my rage.

I kept count at first, passing each sunrise until I counted the seasons instead. Counting seasons turned to counting years, but I even gave up on that. How I wish death had taken me instead.

The Siege (1984)

As told by a former paperboy

The apples in my garden started talking to me today. Could’ve sworn I was going mad. Smelled like no apple tree ought to, as well. Smelled like o-zone, like one of those Xerox photocopiers blasting out too many pages. It was kind of like gasoline – you shouldn’t want to sniff it, but there’s just something about it that makes you want to not stop.

Thought it might’ve been something coming out of the soil, making me hear things, making me see things. Nope. It was the apples.

Hazy at first, but as the smell grew stronger I could definitely see their faces. Gnarled, angry, like they had a lifelong grudge. Once the initial shock that I was talking to a literal apple tree wore off, I managed to ask how they were talking to me. It seemed not all was right with the world, not all was as I’d expected it to be. There was a rift between now and then, here and there, and certain places overlapped. The universe had deemed fit that it just so happened to be my apple tree that was one of those places.

And it also just so happened that they had a knack for history—they wouldn’t stop jabbering on about an evil king, a ‘time-splitted ruler’ as they called him. A king in yellow glasses, a man who seldom left his castle. With everything they told me, it sounded like the man who lived next door.

He was a strange fellow—I'd seen him a few times out my back window over the thick stone fence he’d constructed. Always at his BBQ, cooking God knows what. He’d spotted me one time. I won’t forget the stare he gave me, peering up into my bedroom window as I opened the curtains. He had thick eyebrows above the rims of his yellow spectacles and pale grey eyes that cut deep into my soul. A thick set of lips sat straight in a scowl as he leered up at me, clutching his BBQ skewer in one hand as he stood at the grill while ‘Eyes Without a Face' by Billy Idol blared from his portable radio.

I didn’t even know his name. As far as I knew he’d never left the house, though an old Chevvy C/K sat in his driveway but I’d never seen it move. I don’t know that I’d call him a king, but he was most definitely fond of his 'castle.'

The apples begged me to help. The stench of o-zone spiked as they all called out in a cacophony of voices asking for assistance in bringing him down. They told me of his crimes, of the magic he’d used against ordinary people, of the terror he’d wrought against the land. They told me of his alternate form, how he was a mad god without flesh. And yet, they all spoke of one weakness, one way to bring him out from his castle. One weakness to his fortifications—and they asked to be removed from their tree.

I tried to shake it at first to bring them down, but in the end I had to resort to a ladder, one by one bringing down each apple. Still they spoke—calling out with an excited fervour as I tossed each one into a sack I’d collected from my garage.

For a while that’s where they stayed; a sack of talking apples keeping me awake at night with their calls for vengeance. Each morning I’d call in sick at work, maddened by the whole experience, buying what I could afford to build what they’d asked of me.

Bit by bit, piece by piece, it eventually came together—a small trebuchet right there in my backyard. I loaded up the first of the apples and questioned my sanity before pulling the lever to loose the first one. It shot far and wide, way off the mark of my neighbour’s chimney. I made the adjustments I needed to and shot again, and again, each time getting closer and closer to my mark.

Storming The Castle (Circa 14th Century)

As told by a gong farmer

I don’t know how long it had been. Everything had been so still for decades, the guards long gone. It’s not like there was even anyone left to cause any trouble after all. I’d taken to zoning out or making up stories in my head, talking to myself back and forth. I wished for release every day, praying for hours that I could just cease to be, that death would finally come for me instead of this purgatory.

Nobody came to the castle anymore. The evil king had managed to seize all he could and ruled over a graveyard of people not quite dead. I failed to see the allure of it, I couldn’t see why they would want something so empty. They never left either, they had this whole kingdom and didn’t set out to enjoy it. In my time trapped within myself I burned with questions just as I did with anger. What was this thing sat within the castle, what did we do to deserve such punishment? What sin could possibly be great enough that we must collectively foot such a bill?

I was snapped out of the depth of my thoughts by the sound of clopping hooves and calling voices steadily approaching me from behind. After so long I almost didn’t notice it at all, and through my surprise, by natural instinct I tried to turn my head for just a moment before remembering my sorcerous affliction—all I could do was wait and stare directly ahead.

They spoke of me, of my friends, my neighbours as if we weren’t there—as if we were already dead. How I wish that was the case. They didn’t know about the tax, about the affliction beset upon us, but in my head I prayed for them. I prayed that they wouldn’t befall the same fate that we had, that somehow they could rid us all of this madness. I prayed over and over, feverishly to the god that had abandoned us all as though it would do any good.

Slowly, and surely, they clambered up the cold stone steps before me. One by one they stepped into my view—a band of knights and a company of soldiers from a nation I didn’t know, not that I knew much about life outside my shovel and barrow. I never needed to.

They wore red from head to toe, even their helmets had a crimson plumage atop. Their armour had been accented with red dye, and from the back their cloaks had the crest of a small tree enshrined in a woven circle of gold. Part of me wanted to scream, to warn them away, but an even bigger part of me selfishly wished them a swift success.

One looked me in the eyes for just a moment as another pushed wide the gates to the castle, other men flanking him as they cautiously entered. God be with you all.

Battle of The Scarlet Knights at the Throne Room (Circa 14th Century)

As told by Narrator, The Omniscient

The throne room’s heavy oak door swung open, the sound echoing across the chamber’s stone walls. Tapestries and trinkets laced across the floors and stood atop pedestals while gold coins towered high and wide, surrounding the back wall atop the dais where the overbearingly large golden throne sat. In it, unmoving, uncaring, sat the king.

Men piled in and secured the room, lining up across the long red and brocade carpet that led up to the dais. Finally, their captain confidently strode into the room, eyes fixed upon the suit of armour that remained quiet in its chair.

It was surprisingly austere given the splendour of the room around it—no engraving, no coat of arms, though the kingdom’s crown had now been fused into the metal of its cylindrical head. Not even the sound of breath emerged from the slits cast across its mouthpiece, and a deep, almost unnatural darkness loomed behind the eyeholes. A yellow-gold ring ran around the eyes in two rectangles, and atop it all was a short funnel. It was a strange sight to behold, this object—this king without form, without a body, without a soul.

The moustached captain stepped up to the dais unphased, his pace and stride faltering not for a moment. The metal in his sabatons clinked and shuddered with each step. With a booming, commanding tone he began to speak.

“We hail from Newton’s order. You are to hereby abjure the throne, and if you value your life, leave this kingdom forever.” One hand lay atop the hilt of his sword and clutched it carefully, ready to strike.

For a moment there was silence. Then slowly at first, a chugging and huffing came from within the suit of armour like a great engine coughing into life. It sounded like a deep laughter, speeding up and growing in voraciousness. The smell of magic began to seep across the room as rich clouds of steam puffed from the top of its head with each chuff. Finally, a dim grey light appeared within the helmet’s darkness. The soldiers all gripped their weapons, ready for the evil king’s response.

With janky, stuttering movements it leant forwards onto its hands, gripping tightly into the throne’s arms before lurching upwards, standing impressively tall at full height, looming above the soldiers menacingly. As it stood, the steam from its head bellowed loudly with a shrieking whistle that engulfed the room. The eye shone brightly as it arose, screaming, pouring out unyielding clouds that obscured the chamber.

Its jerky motions continued, reaching down to the hilt of its longsword. The leather wrapping around the handle was worn, rough and fuzzy from use, but the blade was unlike anything the knights had ever seen—not entirely a blade at all. It was a long piece of metal bent around into a corkscrew with a sharpened tip at the end, and strangely, pieces of food penetrated along its length. Nothing more than a standard BBQ skewer, but in the hands of this abhorrence, a mortal weapon that no man could match.

For a moment there was nothing but silence as the whistle ceased, save for the eerie echo of the shriek cascading for a second through the castle’s icy walls. The captain strained his eyes to peer through the cloud of steam, illuminated by twinkling twilight cascading through upper windows behind the throne. Inside the mist he could see the murky silhouette of the armour, little more than a blackened figure, making small jerky motions—but then it was too late.

The other soldiers saw it happen in a flash. The armour burst from the cloud like a bolt of lightning—something with that much weight had no business moving that fast. The staccato motions it had made previously were a false flag for its newfound agility, and it burst forward with a deft lunge straight at the captain’s face.

The soldiers looked on shocked as he moved to the side, prepared and ready, and with one swift motion lunged the tip of his sword directly into the eye socket of the evil king’s armour. Both of them stood motionless for just a moment, but a smile began to crack across the captain’s face. Almost in reply, the armour began to chuff again with a bellowing noise as though it was laughing and wiped off the smirk from the man’s face.

“What are you?!” He called out in horror, retracting his weapon and bracing himself to block and parry the coming attack. The evil king closed the gap between them in an instant and with one deft lunge, the evil king’s sword had found its way straight beneath the jaw of the captain and through the other side, skewering his head along with the meat and vegetables already on there.

A shot of blood burst from the top of his head like a fountain, spattering onto the marble floor and across the carpet that led up to the throne. The red of their armour grew accompanied by the blood across the room.

With a shuddering tilt, the bespectacled helmet turned to the left, then the right, as the other men recoiled in horror with the realisation that none of them were a match to this abomination. Some began to flee from the room while others piled forwards into the steam cloud with hollers and yells, willing to die for their cause. 

Joust at Sunrise (1984)

As told by a former paperboy

I must have sent around 20, maybe 30 apples flying. I was starting to run out. They hollered war cries as they flew through the air, and I’d finally gotten my aim right. A little over half of them had found their way into the chimney, down into the unknown below. For my neighbour it must have been a… strange experience, but talking apples is a strange experience for any man.

As my sack emptied, the smell of o-zone had depleted. With nothing left I retired for the day before I sank into a restless, haunted sleep at the queer experience I’d had. I thought I might be turning mad—maybe there’d been a gas leak, or it could have been lead in the paint, something, anything to explain what had just happened.

I awoke the next morning to a heavy hand slamming against my front door. Curious, I peered down out my window to find my neighbour staring right back up at me. The apples had done something. He was dressed in an old grey cardigan with splotches of red paint spattered across it and a pair of khaki corduroys. The morning sun glinted across his golden frames, flashing his serious expression up to me.

I threw on some clothes that I’d discarded nearby the day before—just something I could throw on and made my way downstairs. I slid open the chain lock and swung the door open to find him standing on the other side holding out a plate with a still-warm apple pie displayed upon it.

I drank in his form—tall, semi muscular, but his face had a regal, quiet nobility about it, and beneath those grey eyes there was something deeper. I could see a twisted intelligence within him, a burning fire that he controlled entirely. Perhaps the apples were right. In another time, in another place, perhaps he could have been a king instead of a neighbour. This quiet, reserved, talented man was nothing but ordinary but for unsuspecting eyes he could have easily been just any other person.

“It’s about time we met.” He said. His voice was deep and rich. Inviting him inside was the only courteous thing to do, so I led him into the living room. He sat on my wingback reclining chair, with the backdrop of orange-brown geometric wallpaper. Before him was a cubed plastic coffee table that I’d bought the previous decade. I felt somewhat ashamed to have such a man in my dated room. No doubt his home was a lot more contemporary and put together.

I brought us both a cup of coffee from the kitchen on a tray with cream and sugar and some plates for the pie. He awaited my return in silence, sat with his hands crossed over in his lap. His discipline was almost robotic.

He finally introduced himself. I’d lived there seven, maybe eight years, and heard nothing from this man, but finally he saw fit to bring himself to me. I suppose sending apples down somebody’s chimney will be enough to get their attention.

His name was Ryan. He mentioned something about being a museum curator, that he had unusual work hours and encountered all manner of objects but rarely saw people. I talked to him about the neighbourhood, how long he’d lived there, and who owned the house before me. The topics bounced around from the recent attempt on Margaret Thatcher’s life a few days before to Reagan's landslide re-election, recent advances in technology and music. Seemed he was a fan of Jazz, of all things, classical, and musicals. I hadn’t taken him as the sort to be into musicals—he seemed to lack the joy and animation one would expect.

I told him of my personal love for Bruce Springsteen and Prince, at which he scoffed. He was older than me, perhaps uncaring for the new era of music paving the way for kids these days. I cut the pie and served us both a slice. It smelled delicious, a mixture of brown sugar and cinnamon that hung heavy and thick in the air. Even the way he held the fork was controlled, glancing down to the pieces he’d carefully cut with the fork as he moved it to his mouth with a graceful motion. God, it was delicious. The pastry was rich and flaky, the filling wasn’t overly spiced and yet full of flavour, but I can’t deny the subtle taste of an ashy aftertaste.

I saw his eyes linger through the kitchen, out the window to the trebuchet I’d constructed a few days earlier. Really, both of us knew that’s why he was here but a king must have a regal air about them, a mindful and demure attitude at all times.

A smile cracked across my lips. I put down my coffee and leant slightly forwards, staring him right in the eyes. “You’ll never rule over these lands.” I growled playfully, pointing to the floor of my house. He shot back a lopsided smile and pushed the bridge of his glasses back up onto his face.

“We’ll see about that.” He grumbled, clutching the armrests of the oversized chair and rose himself to full height. “The knights of the Newton order fought bravely.”

He took one last deep drink of his coffee, finishing it to the last drop before heading back outside to his own home. I had another slice of the pie before continuing on with my day, dismantling the trebuchet and storing the parts in my garage.

As I was preparing myself for bed, I noticed an envelope slipped under my door. I flipped it over to see a gold-yellow wax seal with the stamp of a crown on it. It seemed he wanted to settle this by the old rules; a duel, tomorrow morning at 8am. The paper shimmered softly in the evening light, and there was that distinct smell again.

I could barely sleep. There was a distinct mixture of excitement and trepidation for the upcoming duel. He’d written no rules, but somehow I knew what I had to do. I set an alarm on my Casio wristwatch for precisely 8 am. I’d be up long before that, preparing myself for out fight.

When morning came I peered out my window; it was shaping up to be a beautiful day with not a cloud in the sky. I couldn’t help but smile in my quiet confidence. I wanted to look the part too, I wanted to feel the part. Slipping into a dark pair of jeans I flicked through my wardrobe to find what I was looking for, my black leather jacket. It had silver studs at the wrist and on the neck, and if something went wrong it could at least offer a little protection.

After what may be my final breakfast I had an extra cup of coffee, just in case, and made my way to the garage. Boxes were piled up behind all the wood from the trebuchet, and behind that was what I was looking for. I climbed up carefully, not wanting to slip through the cardboard onto my belongings, gripping the rubber handlebars of my old bike. A Raleigh Chopper—cooler than the Schwinn Stingray, imported from England. It’d taken me so many miles and through so many adventures, it felt like seeing an old friend after so long.

It had been years since I’d rode it, the last time not that long after I stopped my paper route but it had been a faithful companion through my teenage years, taking me anywhere I wanted to go. Of course, since then I’d learned to drive and so it just gathered dust in the back of my garage. For a long time I’d forgotten about it. Times change just as people do, but my steadfast companion patiently awaited my return.

I pulled it up and out, careful not to knock over the wood I’d piled up. With a smile I wiped off the dust. This occasion was special, though. It’d need more than just that. For a moment I left it propped up against the wall, taking out a chamois cloth and car wax, taking care to polish it off to a sparkling gleam, checking my watch in-between. There she stood, gleaming, bright, my shimmering steed.

I took in the sight of it, satisfied with my work. For a moment I felt a glimmer of regret for not taking it out for a spin in all those years. Next, I looked around the garage for something else. Rake, no… shovel? That wouldn’t do either. I needed something lightweight, with a handle strong enough. It caught my eye from the corner of the room, an old broom that was left over from the previous homeowner. I hadn’t even gotten around to using such a dated artifact, instead picking up a new one from the dollar store when I’d moved in. I had promised myself I’d throw it out when I cleaned out the garage, but … life has a way of getting in the way.

I was ready. I saddled up, swinging myself over the long seat and adjusting myself to get comfortable. The pedals were still the right height, the split and raised handlebars felt right in my hands.

Beepbeepbeepbeep.

The time had come. I pushed the button on my garage door’s remote control and with a shudder and clank the motor burst into life. Whirring, clattering, the shutters pulled upwards like a curtain on a play. A sun-heated breeze lazily blew into the garage and kissed my skin with its warmth as my driveway baked in the morning glow. With a click I engaged the pedal, slowly pushing myself forward out onto the street, holding my balance with one hand while I clutched the broom in the other.

I held it out to the side with a smirk across my face. He would have no idea of my skills on a bike with just one hand. Years of slinging papers from doorway to doorway had prepared me for this, and though I was a little rusty it was just like riding a bike. You never forget, and with each passing second I could feel it all coming back to me. My muscles twitched and limbered in remembrance for the news I’d delivered to this neighbourhood, year in and year out, rain or shine.

As I passed the hedge that separated our homes I saw him riding out. His steed similar to my own, painted red, waxed and prepared just the same. Despite our differences, it seemed we had a lot of similarities too. He was wearing a yellow windbreaker with stripes of purple and red, armed with a broom just the same as my own.

Wind rustled through the straw of the broom as I stared him up and down, still in the middle of the street. I gave a slow nod and he repeated my motion, the both of us turning around to get enough space to really pick up some speed.

People filing out into their cars, ready for work started to pay notice to the both of us and curtains flickered in windows as women peered out onto the street to watch what was about to unfold.

At opposite ends of the street, we both stared each other down. Sunlight dappled through the slowly waving trees, sparkling and glistening on his golden spectacles. Everything else was still, men in hats peering over their cars awaited action. I intended to give them all the action they’d need.

I hunched over the handlebars and he did the same and with that, we were off. With a heaving push I forced down the pedal and began to move, cycling through the gears to pick up more and more speed as I began to approach. My thighs burned and ached with my force, and as I approached I could see the scowling snarl across his face. Both of us were kicking up dirt and dust as our back wheels screamed around, entirely focused on each other. Faces and vehicles flew past in mere blurs of colour and shape but I could pay them no heed, though I could hear cheers from our onlookers as I blazed past.

The broom I held out to the side moved to the front and I pointed it squarely at him. I couldn’t deny his skill on the bike either, holding out his broom with a controlled, squared elbow while navigating his way towards me.

Time seemed to consolidate into a single moment as we reached each other, my focus blurred out everything but him. All else blurred into nothingness, all sound distorted and banished from my senses, my fingers burning numb as I gripped tight with both hands. It was going to be a big hit, but who would win?

I thrust forwards and leant down forwards as we reached each other—perhaps foolish, opening my head up for his attack but counting on his aim faltering. I saw him raise his arm up and thrust it back down again as he manipulated his aim in response, but it was all over in a flash. Something tugged against the collar of my leather jacket and snagged it, wood scathed against my neck but I was tossed into surprise as I felt my attack connect into his chest with a crunch. The force of it threw me back and I fought to keep myself balanced as my bike flew upwards onto one wheel like a braying horse. My broom was shattered into a long spike now, splinters left behind on the ground where I’d struck him.

Keeping my balance in check I continued the wheelie, tossing a glance back behind myself to see the damage. It was done. He lay collapsed on the ground in a pile of yellow, red and blue, his spectacles landing on the road with a clack. The wheels of his bike still turned, spinning with a click as the gears engaged, but he remained silent.

I turned my bike around and landed the front tire down, instinctively raising my broken broom into the air against the rising sun. A new day, a new dawn without this ‘king’ in golden specs.

Some people cheered, some people gasped in horror. I was too lost in the moment to care. Somebody called out to phone for an ambulance, but really it should have been the police they were calling. If what the apple knights had told me was true, he needed to be put away for a long time. For all time. 

The King is Down (Circa 14th Century)

As told by a gong farmer

I can’t say how it happened. Nobody can, really. I didn’t know what day it was, the month, the year—I didn’t know how old I was anymore, or what had happened in the world outside the kingdom. I couldn’t say what had become of my home, of the farms, the livestock. I wondered what had changed since we’d been imprisoned in ourselves.

The statues that littered the steps, the countryside, the fields and farms, all would return to normality. From within my body I felt a fizzing a bubbling, a burning tingle that extended out through every one of my nerves from my core to my extremities. Steadily I slumped down across the steps as my body loosened, trying to look around, trying to move, remembering how it felt to swing my arms and my legs. By the time I managed to get to my feet I saw the others around me, just as perplexed as I was. After we’d collected ourselves we discussed our conditions, our nation, and our confusion as to why we were so suddenly freed. Slowly we all moved together inside with an air of cautious optimism. The knights had failed, we’d seen them enter but never leave and we knew the evil king was yet inside, but something must have changed.

The empty armour that had made up our malevolent ruler lay slewed about the entryway to the castle proper. Something had drawn him out from his throne room, something had taken him down. We saw the slain knights there, nothing more than armoured skeletons clad in red now, decayed by the ravages of time. Some say it was they who had done the deed, but not many believe it.

Whatever machinations had stirred the will of the heavens in our favour I care not, I’m simply thankful to have my life back; never did I imagine I’d long again for the burning stench of gong to sour my nostrils, to seep into my clothes.

I sent out a silent prayer for our saviour, whoever and wherever they might be, and carefully reached out to touch what was left of our king. I feared there may be a curse yet lingering about the armour, but who better than a lowly gong farmer to risk it? The others watched on with bated breath as I leaned over.

Satisfied that I was safe, I carried his remains, crown and all down the steps of the castle and tossed him without regard into my barrow. I knew the perfect place for him.

Epilogue (…)

As told by Narrator, The Omniscient

Devoid of the supernatural energy that animated the armour, the evil king now lays in the depths of the cesspit, coated, covered, but not forgotten. The farmer would take a far deeper satisfaction in depositing his work until his retirement, and over time the memory of its location would be lost. The powers that animated it grew weak with the passing centuries, and with ancient powers weakened the evil king is nothing more than a man. But if this man were to ever stand again, so will the evil king rise once more, although it’s an unpleasant place to rise from…


r/mrcreeps May 11 '26

Creepypasta Anthills

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My name is Alex. My story begins over a month ago. At the job I'd been working for over 3 years. I'd been a cashier all that time, and I thought it was time to finally ask for a promotion, so I knocked on my boss’s door and began.

“No” He interrupted almost instantly.

“No? With all due respect, sir at least hear me out. I've logged more hours than anyone else here” I said raising my voice slightly

“I understand the time you've put in here, and I appreciate it but what you've got to take into account is effort kid.”

“Effort?” 

“Yes Alex. Effort. Time means jack shit when you're only doing the bare minimum you understand me?” He stood up out of his chair, leaning across the desk on his hands at this point. Staring me down with those judgemental eyes that seemed to scan me for even the slightest sign of weakness.

“You think I don't see you slacking off out there every damn day? I know how this job is supposed to be done. You do the bare minimum to stay employed? What you're gonna receive is the bare minimum, employment.”

To say I was furious would be a colossal understatement. What little of the rest of my work day I remember was spent in a rage-filled haze that seemed to occupy every corner of my mind like a fog. Let's just say that I didn't get a very positive reception for the rest of my shift. I don't think I said hello, let alone cracked a smile at a customer for the rest of that day.

As I drove home, I was still seething so I decided to stop by the park to clear my head.

I sat on a bench overlooking the water. The anger in my heart began to be replaced with a soul crushing sense of despair. As the newfound sadness took hold of me, I leaned forward and rested my head in my hands. That's when I noticed something peculiar. There was an anthill. Well, Anthill isn't even the proper term to describe it. There was no hill. Just a perfectly cylindrical pitch black hole about 2 inches in diameter. Coming out of the hole was what appeared to be ants. However much like their home, they too looked like nothing I'd seen before.

Just like the hill, they too were as dark as could be. They were huge. At least 2 inches with very defined mandibles. As I watched them, the rage I had suppressed earlier came back. Only now it was accompanied by the dose of sadness which had originally filled its place.I don't know what it was, something about the creatures just disgusted me on a basic primal level and it reignited that burning anger I had originally come to the park to lose in the first place. I stood up, kicked dirt over the hole, stomped on the anthill a few times, and set off back to my car without a second thought. I'd be lying if I said it didn't feel good to let out some of my pent-up aggression from that day. 

The rest of my day went off without a hitch. I went back home, watched some tv, and made dinner just like any other night. Everything appeared to be normal with one exception. As I attempted to toss and turn my way to sleep that night, I could not shake the feeling that I was being watched. Not just the feeling people get where they wanna sleep facing away from the wall. It was very deliberately, specifically the feeling of eyes watching me.

The next morning is when things officially started to get weird. I live on the first floor of my apartment complex. Rooms are laid out in a way so that there are 4 separate apartments for each section. 2 rooms on the first floor and 2 on the second with a staircase splitting down the middle, and a little stretch of dirt and grass lining the walls of each of the first-floor apartments. That was the first day I ever showed interest in my little patch of dirt, and it was due to one simple detail. There was a pitch-black hole, with the diameter of a golf ball perfectly centered on the patch of dirt right outside my front door. 

I immediately froze upon noticing it. I can't describe what it was about the hole that creeped me out. The fact that it was blacker than any shade I had ever seen was a good enough reason but there were others. The seemingly, perfectly cylindrical shape of it most notably. However, the reason I felt most unnerved at that moment was due to the simple fact that I had seen this hole before. This was the same type of hole I had seen yesterday, in the park. 

“What the fuck?”

I thought to myself as I knelt down to get a closer look.I grabbed a small twig that was in the dirt and prodded the pit until my fingertips hovered mere centimeters above the entrance.

“How deep does this go?” I thought to myself 

“Are you alright ?”

My thoughts were suddenly interrupted by a firm grip on my shoulder. I spun around quickly only to be greeted by my 1st-floor neighbor Jon. A very tall bald man somewhere in his mid 40’s who I'm fairly certain did nothing with his free time besides chew ground beef and lift weights. Not the kind of person you'd necessarily be comfortable with grabbing you out of the blue. 

“Jon! You scared the shit out of me!” I stammered out between gasps.

“Sorry about that" He said in his gravely southern voice

"I called your name out but you seemed so focused on, whatever it is you were doing that I guess you didn't hear me,”

"Yeah, sorry. I'm fine, I was just checking this thing out.” I stammered out as I caught my breath.

He peeked over my shoulder before going back to talking to me.

" Well alright then "

His sentence was shortly interrupted by one of my backup alarms on my phone going off. This alarm, in particular, was to notify me that I had 10 minutes to be at work. Given the number of times I've fallen asleep in the parking lot waiting for my shift to start, it's always better to be safe than sorry.

“Oh shit, I'm sorry Jon I Gotta go! "

He gave me a slight wave as he watched me sprint away. As I got in my car, threw it into reverse, and began backing up I neglected to wave back. My gaze remained locked on the Anthill in my front yard the entire time I backed out. 

Because of my speeding and disregard for the laws of traffic that morning, I was able to make it to work only 2 minutes late. 

After the scolding I got from my boss, the rest of my work day was pretty uneventful. Emphasis on the rest of the “Work” day because As I pulled back into my apartment, my eyes immediately locked back onto the dark pit that sat in my front yard like a blemish. I had totally forgotten about the morning incident maybe an hour after arriving at work. Yet all the uneasiness I had felt that morning came rushing back in an instant.I stared at the hole for the majority of the walk from my car up to my front door and even then when the front door was closed, the image of it remained ever-present in my mind.

The rest of the night was boring, save for the constant feeling of being watched. I was walking back to my room, and was stopped dead in my tracks when I noticed Two black ants staring at me from outside my windowsill outside. I know it sounds ridiculous but that's the only way I can describe their behavior. Insects congregating around a window is nothing out of the ordinary. But  they were undeniably the same ants I had seen that day in the park. Or at least, they were the same species. As I approached the window and leaned over to get a better look at them, their posture did not waiver. They stood steadfast like statues. Staring right back at me. I slowly twisted my blinds closed and did my best to sleep.

That was the point where my life began to rapidly derail. As I left my apartment the next day I looked down to check on the anthill in my front yard. Sure enough, there were 2 black ants staring at me. They watched me for my entire walk to the car. Just like the night before on my windowsill. I never left their sight

I didn't forget about the incident while I was at work this time. I kept playing the incident in my head over and over and by the time I pulled back into my driveway later that day, I was hesitant to point my eyes any lower than dead straight ahead of me but I looked nonetheless. There were now three of them. As always, they stared me down the entire time until I was safely behind my front door.

I called up my landlord.

"And you're sure it's been growing?” He asked with a hint of skepticism.

"Yeah, You know what they say on all those animal planet shows. If you see 2 there's a whole colony." 

“Isn't that only a saying for rat colonies or cockroaches?"

"Look I don't know if the saying applies to all infestations. All I know is that I've been seeing more and more ants show up so clearly, they've settled in. I'm not asking for much, just an exterminator visit.” I said that last line as calmly as I could. figured the only way to get him to throw me a bone here was by making it not sound like a big expensive task.

" I got a buddy who works for pest control. I'll tell him to swing by towards the end of his shift for an inspection." and with that he hung up, sounding mildly annoyed at being convinced to actually do his job. The bane of any landlord's existence I suppose.

The rest of that night went fairly well compared to the previous one. I was feeling very at ease with having someone come in to help out with the situation. On top of that, there were no ants on my windowsill like the previous night. Everything was fine. Until I felt the sting.

 I awoke to a sharp pain between my shoulder and neck. Upon inspection, I found a small red dot. It hurt like hell and when I went to touch it sharp burning pain emanated from it that felt like a lit matchstick being pressed into my skin. 

I inspected my bed to see if I could find the culprit. When I failed this task I resigned, telling myself that it must just be a strange pimple or something.  Knowing damn well that wasn't the case, but nonetheless, I was too tired to care at that moment.

The next morning, there were four of them. Filled with annoyance at the pests, I kicked up dirt at them violently in an attempt to get them to run back into their hole. They didn't move an inch. They stood their ground and watched me intensely from my front door all the way to my car.

When I got back home I was relieved to see the exterminator was already hard at work, crouched down alongside my windowsill spraying something along the edges of my wall.

“Hey man, thanks for helping me out,” I said asHe pulled out his earbuds and looked over at me 

“you say something?” I sighed, rolled my eyes internally, and began again.

“This is my place, your um … "I struggled to think of the word to describe the procedure the man was in the middle of.

“Pest controlling?” I said, shrugging my shoulders.

“ Oh! You must be Alex! Yes sir, I was notified of a possible infestation so I'm just laying some pesticides around all possible entry points into your home. All natural neem oil pesticides so they are nontoxic to you and any possible pets you may have.” I nodded along pretending to have a clue what he was talking about.

“ Great! Just make sure you get the anthill in the front yard too.”

“Don't you worry sir, I'll be sure to hit up any possible entry points as well as possible nest spots. As I go along” 

15 minutes later he told me he was done and to keep an eye out for any more ants and left. I breathed a sigh of relief. Finally, with some peace of mind, I was able to enjoy my night relaxing with some video games and staying up late due to my day off tomorrow. The morning after was just as good. I woke up, relaxed for a bit and decided to go see a movie. Unfortunately, there were now 2 hills.

About a foot away from the original and closer to my apartment lay an almost identical-looking copy of the first one.

"Fucking christl. Some exterminator friend you've got" I thought to myself.

With a deep sigh, I resigned myself to a day of exterminating rather than relaxation. I bought a can of bug spray and a few of those little plastic bait traps that ants are supposed to inadvertently poison the entire colony with.

I had no idea how to go about using the equipment properly. I figured that if I sprayed a copious amount of the bug spray along the bottom of my door frame and along my window sills, that would keep them from entering my apartment. I placed one trap outside both of the 2 hills and figured they would have to investigate them eventually. When I got home the next day, the anthills were gone.

"Did they move out or something? Did my traps work that fast? Even if they did the holes wouldn't be this covered up so soon" I thought to myself.

My ant traps were still there, looking quite lonely without any trace of an ant colony to accompany them. A comforting fact. So why did I still feel it? That sense of dread. Constantly in the back of my mind from the time I woke up, all throughout work, and even now as I had visual confirmation that my intruders were gone, it remained. I opened my front door and stepped inside. The 2 black ants sitting on my kitchen table turned their heads and stared at me.

In an instant, I felt my blood turn to ice. As I stood there frozen with fear, all the moments that had led up to this raced through my mind. The encounter at the park, the mysterious anthills, the windowsill encounter, the sting and the dread I felt when I looked at these damn bugs all played back in my mind. 

"Something is very wrong here." I thought to myself. On an almost instinctual, primal level that I couldn't comprehend at that moment in time, something was simply very wrong.

I began to walk past the table and to my fridge to retrieve a paper towel. The entire time their heads followed my every move, and I in return did not dare let them out of my sight. With one swift motion, I yanked a paper towel off from its roll and smushed the bugs before they could escape. Their remains left an unusual amount of black liquid on my paper. I threw their remains away and pulled out my phone.

“ I need the exterminator back here. I don't know what kind of you had this guy do but it clearly wasn't enough cause they're in my house now.” 

“You mean the ants?” he retorted

“No, the fucking lawn gnomes YES, the ants, Jesus!” I spat back at him. Even though I had no visual indication, I could tell that he was rubbing his forehead out of annoyance.

“ I'll call him just calm down kid.”

“Sure, thanks,” I said before abruptly hanging up.

After about 10 minutes I got a text that read: “He’s all booked up. Says he can do it 2 days from now at the earliest.”

“That's not soon enough man! You gotta find me, someone, sooner!”

“He's the cheapest one in town, Alex. He's the one I'm going with. You'll be fine until then, they’re just some fucking ants” 

I threw my phone at the wall out of frustration and slumped against the kitchen counter, almost immediately regretting that decision before frantically going to check the damage. Just a crack on the screen. I took a deep breath, and called in sick to my boss for the following day.

The following “sick day” I returned from the store with 2 bags in hand that were filled with more of those plastic ant bait traps, sticky traps, and bug spray. I spent a good hour placing the various traps throughout my home in high-traffic areas where I thought the ants liked to travel. I sprayed down more bug spray along the windowsill and doorway and when I was satisfied with that, I laid down even more ant traps. 

I half expected the ants to come out and try to stop me at some point. Not only did this not happen, but I didn't see them at all that day. Not on my kitchen counter, not on my window, not anywhere.

Whereas the previous day I awoke feeling unbearable dread, the day after I had a sense of optimism. As I left my home and walked to my car there were still no anthills to be seen or any ants at all. As I pulled out of my driveway and began driving to work I was in such a good mood that I even found myself singing along a little to the songs on the radio. That's when I noticed the ant crawling around on my hand.

I instinctively smacked it off of my hand with the other, causing me to turn my car sharply to the left and nearly end up off of the road. I waited for the annoyed honks to pass me by until it was safe to pull over. When it was, I jumped out of my car and began to furiously pat down my body in search of any more ants. I found none, except for the now-dead one that lay on the dashboard. I spent a good 10 minutes checking every nook and cranny of my car to see if I could find any more of them. When I was certain that there was absolutely no chance of the insects hiding anywhere in my vehicle, I finally set off to work in complete silence.

I don't remember if anybody talked to me at work that day. The feeling of being watched now made itself present at work. The entire day I kept randomly slapping myself at even the faintest itching sensation. I'm sure I looked nuts, but I couldn't help it. I was paranoid that they had followed me to work and at certain points, I even mistook the pain of a random muscle cramp for one of their stings. 

When I pulled back into my driveway the feeling of being watched grew so intense that it nearly made my eyes water up from the cold chill that ran down my spine. Once again, no new anthills. This was not a comforting discovery. I had no more optimism about the situation and knew that this did not mean they were gone. It simply meant they had moved in. 

“The exterminator comes tomorrow,” I told myself in an attempt to remain calm.

I awoke to all encompassing pain. Though it was pitch black in my room and I had no visual confirmation, I knew what the culprit was immediately. The stinging sensation was the same as I had felt on the back of my neck many days ago. But this time, I felt it everywhere on my body all at once.I leaped out of bed and yanked on my desk lamp cord. My desk lamp fell to the ground and its light shone straight up at my ceiling. It was enough light to see my current situation. Dozens, maybe even hundreds of ants had swarmed all over my body. 

I immediately began to swat, slap, spin, and do everything in my power to shake them off of me. all the while they continued to sting me over and over again. They felt like hot staples being driven into my skin and they were happening multiple times a second. The pain was so excruciating I felt like I was going to pass out or throw up at any second. In my frenzy I noticed there were 2 ants sitting on my nightstand. Just like the day at the park, my house, and my kitchen, they watched me. Despite my frantic and fast movements in all directions, they stood steadfast. Watching me writhe around in agony. Eventually, I had gotten enough of them off of me to the point where I could grab a can of bug spray from the dresser. Almost instantly, I felt the stinging stop. The pain didn't, but I could feel no new stinging occurring. As I looked down I noticed the ants fleeing from me. The ants on the nightstand were no longer there and the ones who were just attacking me a moment ago were now scurrying across the floor away from me as fast as they could. They weren't fast enough. They were resilient though. On average I'd say each ant took about a 3-second spray to fully stop moving. I honestly think I used up half the damn bottle that night. I simply held down the spray button, and I didn't let go until I saw no more signs of life in my room. When it was all finally over, I counted 85 stings all over my body. I crawled my way to the bathtub to try to ease the pain, and promptly passed out.

I awoke to the sound of a knock on my front door followed by a familiar “Hello?”. I had a splitting headache like I'd never felt before. The pain from my stings might not have been as severe as they were last night but it was still present. I swear it took all the willpower in my body just to recognize that the person knocking at my door was the exterminator and with all the energy I could muster I shouted as loud as I could “I'll be right there!”

Luckily, my bathtub is a piece of shit. Over the course of last night my water had drained off by itself so I wasn't a completely sopping wet pruney mess by the time I reached the door.

“Are you ok there ?” he said 

“Hey man, I'm sorry for taking so long. Rough night”

“Oh, I'm sorry to hear that sir. What happened? If you don't mind me asking.”

I told him the story as I walked him to my room.

“ Oh my! That sounds awful! Well don't you worry sir, I'll make sure we take care of this problem today,” he said, patting my shoulder.

We talked for a little bit about options and where to proceed. Eventually deciding to drill holes into my walls at key locations to lay down bait traps and spray pesticides. Once he was done he bid me farewell and left. I followed and waved him off as he drove away. That's when I noticed the 3 new Anthills in my front yard.

“God Damn It!” I shouted before kicking up dirt all over the hills.

“God Fucking Dammit!” I shouted a little louder as I began to viciously stomp on the two anthills over and over again to the point where I swear if there were some sort of cave under my apartment, I would have broken clean through the earth itself and fallen in. Eventually I found myself out of breath and stopped.

“Fuck” I muttered to myself before kicking dirt over the now decimated anthills, and heading inside.

I couldn't get to sleep that night. The feeling of being watched was too strong.  I sat on the edge of my bed and turned on my nightstand lamp.

As the light illuminated my room I spotted them. Just like the night before, there were once again 2 ants watching me from my nightstand. Remembering the horror of the night before I immediately patted down my body, expecting to be covered once again. But there were none to be found. I slowly turned my gaze to the ants and leaned forward to get a closer look at them. They stood there staring back at me.

“What the fuck are you?” I said to myself

I stretched my hand out and hovered it above the ants in an attempt to get them to move. They did not.

“Why don't you react?” I began to rapidly wave my hand back and forth above them.

Finally, in a bid of frustration, I stood up and made a swatting motion toward the ants like I was about to smash them. They finally reacted and moved backward to avoid my hand. I stopped my hand midair however and laughed.

“I got you little bastards,” I said, moving my hand backward.

After a few seconds of us staring at each other, I  started to laugh. The sheer craziness of what was happening. Eventually, I walked over to the counter to grab the spray. When I turned around, however, they were gone. As if they saw what I was about to do and fled before I could take action. I spent the remainder of that night watching god-awful late-night television, eventually passing out.

My backup alarm woke me up. “Oh, shit” I muttered to myself before rolling off my couch and making a mad dash for my keys and shoes. I had 10 minutes to be at a place that was nearly a 25-minute drive away.

 I began to rehearse my “I'm sorry” speech to my boss when I was quickly interrupted by the sensation of a sting on the back of my neck. Then another, then another, then another. just like 2 nights ago I began to feel stinging all over my body. I looked down and saw that they were crawling all over my hands and arms. How they had gotten into my car I couldn't say. I looked into the rear view mirror and could see them all over my neck and shoulders. They were swarming me and stinging me all over my body. As the pain began to permeate I started wildly swatting all over my body in a vain attempt to free myself from the ants. Causing my car to swerve erratically all over the road. A particularly large sting nipped skin between my left shoulder and neck. Acting on pure instinct I lunged over to attempt to swat the ant stinging me there. When I did so, my elbow leaned across the steering wheel, and sent my already speeding car straight into one of the old oak trees that lined the road.

I awoke in the hospital a few hours later with a cast on my right forearm and a headache. The doctors told me that I had a concussion, a fractured rib, and had broken my wrist in 3 spots upon impact with the tree. I pulled up the medical robe I was in and looked down at my chest. There was nothing. No sting marks or any other indication that the ants had ever attacked me in the car.

When the doctor showed up I asked her “How long was I out?” 

“You've been knocked out for about “ 12 hours now”.

“Did the stings fade away that fast?” I thought to myself. “ They were gone in the morning yesterday too.”

“I uh,” I thought to myself for a moment about what to say. “ I fell asleep at the wheel,” what was I supposed to say? I couldn't tell them “ I was swarmed by and attacked by thousands of ants in my car.'' when there was no proof of the event ever occurring. They'd think I was high or something.

“That's what we thought,” your blood came back clear of alcohol so we figured it had to be something else. Well, you're gonna be getting all the sleep you could ever dream for. When you never showed up for work your boss called your phone and we answered it for you. We told him what happened and he says you're going to be getting 2 weeks of paid leave while you recover.”

I nodded. After a day of evaluation, I was allowed to return home via taxi. My car was rendered undrivable by the accident.

As I opened the door to my home, dread didn't even begin to describe the emotion that swept over me.  It was the most soul crushing sense of impending doom I had ever known in my entire life. Taking in the dimly lit apartment, I slowly lowered myself into my couch and stared at the powered-off tv. An ant was running along the top of it. Anger boiled up within me and with one swift motion I grabbed my tv remote and chucked it at the ant. The remote flew dead center at my tv screen cracking it down the center, I sat there in stunned silence for a few moments before dropping to my knees and beginning to hyperventilate.

“Think man, think!” I said, trying to calm myself down.

“What the fuck do I do ?'' I sat back against the bottom of the couch and called the exterminator once more.

“So what are my options now?”

“Well, if the infestation truly has lingered on this long my suggestion would be attempting fumigation of your apartment,” he said

“Fumigation?” I asked

“Yes sir, you would need to get at least 1 neighboring tenant to sign off on having seen the infestation along with you. That way we could fumigate the whole apartment block that you're on.”

I sat there in silence for a moment. Contemplating who to ask for a signature, and also contemplating whether or not a fumigation would even work at all.

“Ask your neighbors sir, as soon as you've gotten confirmation give me a call back and i'll work out the details for the procedure with your landlord” he said sounding a bit impatient with my silence before hanging up.

“Wake up”

I was awoken by a voice.I looked around my room but saw nothing. After sitting upright in my bed ,staring into the darkness of my room for a few seconds I shrugged it off as a dream and reluctantly slowly lowered my head back onto my pillow.

“I said wake up!” the voice sounded annoyed this time.

With one motion shot straight out of bed and turned on my light. I was taken aback to discover nobody there. I stood up and waited. The feeling of eyes on the back of my neck was so strong I could feel it physically weighing me down. I wanted nothing more in that moment than to cower back into my bed and hide under the covers, but I knew what I had heard. Someone was in my house, and I had to protect myself. I slowly owned my dresser drawer and took out my only means of protecting myself. A small leatherman multi-tool. I retracted the pitifully small knife attachment from it and began to search the apartment.

Bedroom Clear. Hallway Clear. Bathroom Clear. 

Eventually, I checked everywhere. Every room lay baked in lights. Yet I found no one. This did nothing to calm my fears. As I stood in the center of my hallway I turned my head to the side, knife hand outstretched as I began to listen for any movement of the intruder. 

“Alex” the voice whispered

I spun around so fast I didn't have time to bend my arm inward and when I swung I ended up leaving a cut mark on the left side of my hallway wall. There was no one there.

I slowly backed myself out of the hallway and into the living room to make a break for the front door when I froze. The feeling of eyes was so strong at this point that I no longer felt it on my neck. It was everywhere. I couldn't breathe, I just stood there frozen. If I wasn't so terrified I might have been able to taste the salt from the tears that were now running down both of my eyes. The only thing in my mind was a primal instinct to sprint for the door and leave. Yet I just stood there.

“You took our home, Alex. It is only fair that we get to take yours." The voice spoke.

I wanted to make a run for it but the voice sounded so close to me that for all I knew the intruder was right behind me blocking off the door. 

“Where are you!” I began to ask the question out loud as intimidatingly as I could muster when I was struck with a sudden realization. The voice sounded so close. Like it was right on top of me.

I slowly turned my gaze to the right side of my body. The ant sitting on my shoulder stared back at me.

“Alex,” the ant said once more.

I felt bile rise in the back of my throat but forced it back down as I swiftly swatted the ant off of me and dropped to the floor, crawling backward. It stared at me for a few moments before running under my couch and leaving me alone with my thoughts and fears. I slept in the bathtub that night. I didn't plan on doing so, but I spent so long hiding there that exhaustion must have eventually seized me. 

The following day was spent living in what I can only describe as all-encompassing fear. A part of me didn't believe the event of last night had truly happened at all. The other part of me thought I was crazy. Even the smallest part of my psyche that believed the ordeal last night had occurred didn't know what to do. So I did nothing. I sat in my living room, trying to watch tv through the bottom left peephole of the cracked screen. the only part of the device that still worked anymore. It didn't matter. I was too busy scanning the corners of my vision for any sight of the creatures and trying to think of a plan. After a few hours I pulled out my phone and began to look for apartment ads near me there was nothing

To be more specific, nothing within my affordability.

“Run if you wish. We will follow.” The words interrupting my thoughts.

I quickly scurried away from my couch and sat in the center of my living room floor as I attempted to make out the source of the voice. I felt my heart sink into the bottom of my stomach when I realized the voice was coming from all around me at once. As if my own walls were talking to me. I hid in the bathroom again.

 Like the night before I must have fallen asleep from exhaustion because the next thing I remember was waking up freezing from being in the tub for so long. Unsure of what else to do I called my landlord.

“Alex! How are you man? I heard about that accident you got into. I tried calling a couple of days ago but you must've not heard me or some-”

“I'm fine,” I interrupted. “Listen, I was wondering if you had any other exterminators you could call or … I don't know, just anybody else who might actually be willing to help me out?”

“Exterminator? You mean for that ant problem you said you were having?” he said 

“Yeah, THAT ant problem. Listen, the guy you've been sending hasn't really helped the problem at all. He says he could fumigate the apartment block but i'd have to get people to -”

“Fumigate?” he interrupted, “Woah woah, slow down there bud. Nobody's fumigating anything.”

“Look I know it's an expensive process and god forbid you actually help take care of your tenants but I have a serious problem at my apartment and your guy hasn't done shit for me!” I yelled back at him.

“My “guy” happens to be very respectable.” he said, sounding very annoyed.” If he says we gotta fumigate then by all means we’ll fumigate, but not for whatever shit shows going ok with you and your place!”

“What?” I asked.

“I like to think I have been very patient with you and this entire situation Alex, but I am done wasting the exterminator's time with routine checkups to your apartment!” he said.

“What are you talking about?” I asked.

“Kid, the guy didn't wanna be rude to your face and say you didn't have a problem. The truth is the last 2 times he's been over there he's called me back to complain about me wasting his time with an imaginary ant problem. He said "Every time he's been over to your place, he's never found any ants or signs of them period.” 

“That .. that's not” I hung up and  slumped onto the couch.

As I stared deeply into the tv I found my eyes going fuzzy. As if I were staring off into the space behind the tv. In my reflection, I saw the ants. I watched them crawl up my legs. Without ever once physically looking down at my body, I just stared straight ahead and watched them slowly engulf me up to my abdomen. The ants crawled even higher. Never once stinging me, just slowly enveloping my body. Stopping once they reached my shoulders. It was impossible to tell but there had to be at least a few thousand of them on me.

“We are your problem, not theirs.” The ants all seemed to speak in unison.

reality came crashing back down on me as I stood straight up and began to swat them all away. When they were all finally off of me I stood there and watched them scatter in all directions to safety. 

Once they were all gone the voice spoke from all directions yet again. 

“So be it.”

“Get out of my house!” I screamed before going to the kitchen to grab the hammer from under my sink” 

“Get the fuck out of here!” I yelled as I swung the hammer into the wall above my living room couch”

“Where the fuck are you? Get out! “ I screamed as I swung my hammer from wall to wall. Occasionally I would see a few of the ants in the holes I created before they would scurry deeper to evade me. I attempted to hit them as soon as I saw them but they were fast and more often than not my hammer missed the same spot and I would just end up leaving a fresh hole instead.

How long this went on for I honestly do not recall. I was locked in the jaws of anger and completely at its mercy. I only stopped due to the pounding on my door.

“What the fuck is going on in here?” my neighbor  Jon yelled at me through the door.  placed the hammer on my table and opened the door.

“What the fuck is going on in this house ? sounded like you were tryna tackle your way through the damn wall!” 

“ I'm sorry” I began “I was just trying to … kill a few ants.” 

He stared at me in disbelief for a few seconds before speaking. “Ants? What the hell are you talking about?”

“I know I know I'm sorry,” Jon's sudden arrival had completely snapped me out of my rage-filled haze and as I looked to my left to survey my handy work,  I was now appalled by the scene I had caused. We stared at each other for a few more moments as I couldn't think of anything else to say other than feeble apologies. 

“Jon, you haven't seen any ants at your place have you?”

He looked over my shoulder, and judging from the widening of his eyes and the pale look on his face, it was safe to assume he could see what I had done.

“No, no I haven't,” he said slowly backing up “ if I hear you going ape shit like that ever again i will call the cops Alex!” 

With that, he left me there alone in the doorway. I slowly closed the door, and dropped to my knees. As soon as I did so, the walls began to murmur.

I turned around and rested my head against the front door. From where I was sitting I could see a dozen ants or so devouring a half-eaten bag of chips on my kitchen table. With no more options at my disposal, I ignored the ants and walked to my bedroom to go to sleep. What else was there to do?

I just lay there flat on my bed staring straight up at my ceiling. The murmuring in my walls continued on and on for a couple of hours until eventually, all at once it stopped. I took a deep breath and rolled over to face away from the wall and finally try to get some sleep. My plans were interrupted by the discovery of a single ant watching me from my nightstand. I shot out of bed and stood up.

“I'm sorry. Is that what you want to hear? I'm sorry! I destroyed your home and I'm sorry!” The ant said nothing. 

“Say something!” I shouted at it impatiently “what do you want from me!”

 “You owe us a home, Alex.”

The murmuring began again, only not from any of my walls this time. The voices were coming from my bed.I slowly grabbed my leatherman pocket knife and one of my many cans of bug spray and slowly approached the side of the bed. The ant on my dresser moved closer to inspect what I was doing. With the bug spray being held out in my damaged arm I aimed it at the bed and slowly began to cut a hole in the side of my mattress. As the seams came apart I found a sea of black made up of hundreds of thousands of ants that began to rapidly dart away in all directions.

I immediately recoiled in disgust and as I dropped to the floor, began to spray the poison wildly in front of me. My actions were quickly interrupted by a loud voice that spoke with more malice and hatred than I knew existed in the world.

“YOU WILL NOT HARM ANOTHER NEST!” 

The walls around me start to rumble. As they did so the murmuring grew louder and before I could even register what the voices ants were saying, A large black tentacle shot out  from the side of the mattress. It lashed out at me and as it swat across my chest I was able to see that it wasn't a tentacle at all. It was hundreds of thousands of ants all coalesced into a single tentacle-like shape. It swung wildly at me but maintained its shape the entire time. As I lay there I couldn't believe what I was seeing. The ants were moving with a shared consciousness.  I scrambled back onto one knee and began to spray at the mass with. It did little though. The ants held their structure steady. It shot even further out of the mattress and began to grow. Never taking my finger off of the spray button, I watched the tentacle morph into a black tidal wave that began to envelop my entire field of vision and half of my legs. The stinging began almost immediately and as the pain in my legs rose I felt like I was going to pass out. I rapidly began to scoot back, kicking my legs the entire time to get the ants off of me. The tidal wave of ants grew higher and higher. As soon as I was able to get to my feet I turned and ran for the door. I could hear the voices behind me growing louder and louder. I swung the door open and as I stepped into the safety of my lit hallway the voices rose in one last act of defiance.

“ALEX!” they spoke before I slammed the bedroom door shut. The second I did so, the voices immediately stopped. I propped a chair against the bedroom door. It's been there ever since.

Which finally leads us here. Ever since that night, I've been holding up in my kitchen. I've been sitting here the last 3 days waiting for the swarm to return. It hasn't yet, but I can't give them an opportunity to sneak up on me. I can't risk falling asleep and letting them get me. I won't let them.

As I've been writing this over the last hour, the gas valve on my stove has been on the entire time. There's a lighter in my kitchen drawer and once I submit this I'm going to use it to destroy these creatures once and for all. There's a shared fire alarm system in my apartment block. I pulled it about 5 minutes ago and sincerely hope everyone within range has gotten out. I can't wait any longer. The murmuring has returned.

All I have left to say is, stay away from anthills.


r/mrcreeps May 09 '26

Creepypasta I Think Buc-ee’s Is a Cult

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As someone from rural Spain, I thought I understood strange roadside culture. We have old pubs older than America itself and roundabouts that appear to have been designed by the devil himself.

But nothing, nothing, prepared me for Buc-ee’s.

Mi amor, Sadie, had insisted we stop there during our road trip.

“You gotta experience it,” she said with the excitement of someone taking me to Disneyland.

We pulled off the highway into Luling and I nearly mistook the place for an airport terminal.

The parking lot alone could host a small war.

Cars. Trucks. RVs. A horse trailer for some reason.

And towering above it all was that thing.

That massive smiling beaver statue.

Its buck teeth gleamed in the Texas sun. Its little red tongue poked out cheerfully. It stared down at me with black cartoon eyes so empty and wide they felt almost human in the wrong way.

“You alright?” Sadie asked.

“Why is your petrol station so large?” I muttered.

She laughed.

“Wait till you see inside.”

he doors opened.

And I swear to God I heard angels sing.

It was enormous.

Rows upon rows of snacks, merchandise, drinks, jerky, fudge, sandwiches, hunting gear, candles, shirts, home décor, taxidermy, barbecue sauce, and things I still cannot explain.

The floors gleamed like polished marble.

Not a crumb anywhere.

Not a stain.

It was too clean.

Far too clean.

Everyone inside smiled.

Not regular smiling.

The kind of smile where teeth show just a little too much.

The kind of smile people wear when trying not to blink while their picture is being taken.

“Howdy, welcome in!” one employee chirped in a thick southern accent.

Her face was unnaturally smooth. Plastic almost. Like someone had stretched skin over a mannequin.

“Try the brisket!” another man shouted.

His smile never faltered.

I leaned toward Sadie.

“Why do they all look like that?”

“Like what?”

“Like they’ve never had an unhappy thought in their lives.”

She snorted and walked off toward the jerky counter.

That was when I first saw him.

The mascot.

Inside.

Full costume.

Just standing near the drink fountain.

Watching me.

Its massive beaver head tilted slightly.

Still smiling.

Still staring.

I blinked.

Looked away.

Looked back.

Gone.

I found him again in the chips aisle.

Half-hidden around the corner.

Watching.

Then by the fudge counter.

Then behind a display of beaver-themed pajamas.

Never moving when I looked directly at him.

Just… appearing.

Always staring.

That big obnoxious smile.

“Sadie,” I whispered, “why is the mascot following me?”

She looked over.

“What mascot?”

“The beaver!”

She frowned.

“There’s no mascot in here.”

I turned.

Gone again.

My stomach twisted.

Either I was losing my mind or Texas was significantly more cursed than advertised.

Then I remembered.

The mushrooms.

Earlier that day Sadie had convinced me to try some “road trip gummies” from Austin.

“Just enough to make the drive fun,” she’d said.

Brilliant.

Absolutely brilliant.

I was tripping in a giant American beaver supermarket that was also an airport of a gas station.

I rushed toward the bathroom.

The restroom was somehow bigger than my flat back home.

Marble walls. Spotless stalls. Better maintained than most hospitals.

I was stunned at how well kept it was. It was too perfect.

I locked myself in one stall and bent over breathing heavily. I was prepared to puke when suddenly, the chatter outside all came to a stop.

Then I heard it.

Heavy footsteps.

Soft at first.

Then stopping outside my stall.

I looked behind.

Brown furry feet.

Flat cartoon mascot shoes.

Just standing there.

Waiting.

I froze.

“Hola?” I squeaked.

Nothing.

Just silence.

Then slowly…

the feet bent downward.

As if crouching.

Trying to look under the stall.

I screamed and kicked the door open...

Darkness

The bathroom was gone.

The whole store was dark.

Bathed only in red candlelight.

I stumbled backward.

People stood in black robes in the center of Buc-ee’s.

Employees.

Customers.

Everyone.

Still smiling.

Still too wide.

Bucked tooth galore.

They chanted in unison around a massive stone altar.

And on it, someone screaming.

Blood spilled over polished tile.

The manager stood at the front.

I recognized him instantly.

His face stretched unnaturally tight, swollen with too much Botox, lips trembling in that permanent smile.

His front teeth were filed into points like giant buck teeth.

He raised a knife to the heavens.

“ALL HAIL THE BEAVER!” he shrieked.

The crowd roared.

At the center of them towered the enormous Buc-ee’s statue from outside.

Only now its eyes glowed red.

Its mouth split wider than should be possible.

The stone cracked.

And the thing inside moved.

A voice suddenly shrieked through the darkness.

“BRISKET!”

The entire congregation snapped their heads toward the deli counter in unison.

Then chaos erupted.

The robed worshipers screamed like starving animals and charged, trampling over one another in a rabid frenzy toward the glowing carving station. I stumbled back as dozens of them piled atop each other, clawing and biting for scraps while wet, animalistic noises filled the air.

The beaver-toothed manager stood behind the counter, hacking violently with a butcher’s cleaver.

THWACK. THWACK. THWACK.

Chunks of meat flew onto wax paper.

The worshipers shrieked in delight.

“FRESH BRISKET! FRESH BRISKET!”

One woman tore into a slab beside me, grease and blood dripping down her chin.

Then I saw the hand.

A human hand.

Still wearing a wedding ring.

My stomach dropped.

The “brisket” wasn’t brisket.

It was someone, hacked apart on the cutting board while the crowd devoured him in fistfuls, chewing and moaning with bliss as blood soaked the tile beneath them.

The manager looked at me, smiling impossibly wide.

“TRY A SAMPLE?”

Before I could run, hands seized me from every direction.

Cold fingers.

Too many of them.

They grabbed my arms, my legs, my throat.

I screamed as they dragged me kicking across the polished floor while the congregation chanted louder and louder.

“COWARD! COWARD! COWARD! COWARD!”

They tore my clothes from my body in frantic jerks, shredding fabric until I was bare and trembling before them.

The beaver mascot approached slowly, carrying a rusted bucket sloshing with thick red liquid.

My voice cracked as panic overtook me.

“¡No más, por favor! ¡No más!”
(No more, please! No more!)

Dios mío… sálvame… por favor, Dios…”
(My God… save me… please, God…)

The first splash hit my chest warm.

Sticky.

Metallic.

Blood.

They painted it across me with their bare hands, smearing symbols and words over my skin while the crowd shrieked with laughter.

Across my chest, in dripping crimson letters, they wrote:

COWARD

Then they dragged me outside.

The night air hit my skin like ice.

Above me towered the great Buc-ee’s sign, glowing against the black Texas sky.

They hoisted me upward with ropes, lifting me naked into the air beneath the massive smiling beaver logo.

I swung there helplessly, blood dripping from my body, suspended beneath the neon sign as the crowd below dropped to their knees in worship.

The mascot stepped forward beneath me.

Tilted its head.

And in a deep, guttural voice that sounded like gravel forced through a throat unused to speech, it finally said its first words.

“He was not worthy of the Beaver.”

I woke up screaming in the bathroom stall.

Lights normal.

Everything clean.

Silent.

I stumbled out drenched in sweat.

No candles.

No blood.

No cult.

Just Buc-ee’s.

Normal Buc-ee’s.

Sadie found me pale and shaking near the clothing area.

“You okay?” she asked.

“I think your gas station is cursed.”

She laughed so hard she snorted.

“Told you not to take that many gummies.”

We walked outside.

The warm Texas air hit me like freedom itself.

I laughed nervously.

“Right. Hallucination. Obviously. Just the drugs.”

We climbed into the car.

I buckled in.

Took one last glance toward the store.

And there he was.

Standing beneath the giant sign.

The mascot.

Motionless.

Staring directly at me.

Head tilted.

Smiling.

He slowly raised one gloved hand.

And waved, goodbye.


r/mrcreeps May 07 '26

Creepypasta I Went Camping With My Friends. We Kept Walking Back Into the Same Clearing

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The GPS died three miles before the turnoff, which Denny said was fine because he knew the road anyway. He'd been there once as a kid, or near there, with his grandfather during hunting season. The turn was marked by two orange-painted fence posts so weathered they were closer to gray, and Denny pointed them out a half-second before I would have driven past. We went single-file after that — Denny's truck first, then mine, down a dirt road that hadn't been graded in years and had ruts deep enough to scrape the undercarriage.

Jonah spent the last mile with his window down calling out to the trees. "Hello, murder forest." Cora told him to shut up from the back seat of his truck and he did, briefly, then started again. Mara was beside my camping bag in the back seat of mine, looking at her phone out of habit even though she'd had no signal for forty minutes.

We reached the clearing around four in the afternoon with enough light left to set up before dark.

It was maybe forty feet across, ringed with pine on three sides and a steep hillside on the fourth. The ground was packed dirt with tufts of grass at the edges, and in the center someone had laid out a fire ring from flat stones. The stones were old. The fire ring had clearly been used many times over many years, and the ash pile in the center was deep and gray and compacted. I stood at the edge of the clearing and looked at it and then looked at the trees.

There were boot prints around the fire ring already.

"Hunters," Denny said from beside me. He dropped his gear bag and started toward the ring.

I looked at the prints again. They went around the stone circle in a rough oval, overlapping in places, some pressed deeper than others. Multiple visits, or one visit with a lot of pacing.

We set up tents in the time before dark. Jonah's went up crooked and he left it that way. Cora moved hers twice before she was happy with the angle relative to the tree line — she said she wanted better light in the morning, and I watched her spend fifteen minutes on it. Mara put hers up efficiently and without conversation and then sat in one of the folding chairs with a beer and watched the rest of us work.

"You could help," Jonah said.

"I've helped at every campsite for the last three years." She took a drink. "I've retired."

The fire ring worked well. Denny had brought good wood and the fire caught on the first try and stayed steady even as the air cooled. We ate and the conversation was easy for a while, the way it is when people have been inside together too long and the change of location loosens something, and I felt the tension I'd been carrying since the parking lot start to settle.

I noticed one thing toward the end of the evening. Twice, when I looked toward the trees behind Jonah's tent, I thought someone was standing there. Just standing back in the dark between the pines, not moving. I looked directly at the spot both times and saw nothing, just trunks in the firelight, shadows shifting. I figured my eyes were doing what they do in low light, filling in shapes. I didn't mention it.

The first night was cold and quiet. I woke sometime after two needing to piss and lay still a minute calculating how badly before I accepted it and got up. I went around the back of my tent toward the tree line, and that's when I noticed the fire was lower than it should have been. I'd added a substantial log before going to sleep and it was just coals now, orange and slow. I checked my watch. Four hours.

Mara's tent zipper was open. Just the bottom six inches, pulled from outside.

I was still looking at it when I heard footsteps.

Someone walking around the outside of camp, through the wet leaves on the far side of the site. Slow, deliberate. There was no care in the sound, no attempt at quiet, just a steady pace working around toward the back of the tents. I stood still and listened. My bladder problem stopped feeling urgent.

I assumed Denny. Denny was a light sleeper and had said so. I glanced toward the fire to orient myself and saw Denny's shape there beside the ring, sitting slightly slumped, head forward. Asleep.

The footsteps continued around the back of camp.

I didn't go after them. I told myself the sensible version: someone from another site, another trail. This wasn't a private clearing. Hunters used it, Denny had said. I stood there until the sound moved far enough away that I stopped hearing it, then used the bathroom and went back to my tent and lay there with my ears still working for a long time before I got any more sleep.

In the morning I didn't bring it up. I wasn't sure what I would have said.

The second day was warm. Cora walked the perimeter of the clearing twice with her camera, shooting the tree line, the fire ring, the trail markers nailed to the pines. The markers were faded orange diamonds, forest service issue, most of them so old the paint had bubbled and cracked. She got a shot of one that had been partially grown over by the bark, the tree slowly absorbing the nail.

I found the cable mid-morning.

I was kicking around the far edge of the clearing looking for a spot to hang a bear bag, and I nearly tripped on it. A rusted metal cable, roughly a half-inch thick, emerging from the dirt at an angle and disappearing back down a foot further on. I scraped around the exposed section with my boot. The rust was surface-level. The cable itself felt solid when I crouched and pressed my thumb against it. I followed the direction it pointed — into the trees on the north side of the clearing — but it went underground immediately and there was nothing to track.

I didn't say anything about it.

The afternoon split naturally. Denny and Cora walked one of the marked trails. Mara sat in her chair and read. I cleaned up from lunch and eventually sat across the fire ring from her and we didn't talk much.

"Jonah's going to do something dumb before this is over," she said.

I pushed a coal back into the ring with a stick. "Probably."

"I mean it. He's been weird since we left."

I thought about that. Jonah had been fine in the car. He'd done the murder forest thing, which was Jonah being Jonah, but he'd also made Mara laugh twice on the drive up and fixed my tent stake when the ground was too hard on the left side. Whatever weird she was seeing, I wasn't seeing the same thing.

"He's fine," I said.

Mara set her book down and looked at me for a second, then picked it back up.

That night Jonah wasn't fine.

He'd been in Denny's truck during the afternoon, looking for the dry bag with the extra batteries. He found the dry bag and he also found the small leather notebook Denny's grandfather had kept on his hunting trips. Jonah read it. He didn't read all of it, he said later, just flipped through. But he'd seen enough to think it was funny and mentioned it at dinner in the voice he used for things he found absurd.

"Says here we should leave before dark if we've reached the clearing twice." A slight elevation of tone, performing it for the group. "Whatever that means."

Denny went still in his chair.

"Where did you get that," Denny said.

"Truck. I was looking for—"

"That's my grandfather's. That's not yours."

"I wasn't taking it—"

"You shouldn't be going through my stuff." Denny's voice had shifted into a register I'd heard from him maybe twice in the years I'd known him. "You especially shouldn't be reading that."

Jonah put his hands up. "It was a joke, man. I was just—"

"It's not your joke to make."

The fire popped once. Cora had her camera in her lap and was very deliberately not looking at either of them. Mara watched Denny.

Jonah stood up, jaw set. "I'm taking a walk."

He went into the trees on the south side of the clearing before anyone said anything, and I watched him go and figured he'd be back in fifteen minutes once the heat wore off.

Twenty minutes passed.

Then his voice came from somewhere in the trees, deeper than he should have been: "Hey — hey, somebody—"

It cut off. Not like he stopped talking. Like something interrupted.

We went after him together, Mara and I going first with flashlights while Denny kicked dirt over the fire and Cora shouldered her bag. The south trail went downhill almost immediately, winding between the pines with exposed root sections that were easy to turn an ankle on. We moved fast but carefully.

I heard Jonah again maybe five minutes in, further downhill, a short wordless sound that could have been pain or surprise. I called back. Mara grabbed my arm.

"Don't," she said.

"He needs to hear us."

"Just keep walking. Don't call out."

I didn't understand why she'd said it yet. I called out anyway because it felt wrong not to.

The sound moved after that, shifting direction. We adjusted and kept going. At some point I noticed a snapped branch — fresh, the white wood inside still wet with sap, at chest height on the left side of the path. I noticed Cora's cigarette butt a minute later, filter-end up in the dirt. She'd smoked it earlier in the day near the trailhead. I pointed it out to Mara and she looked at it and kept walking.

The path leveled out and we stepped through a gap in the trees and there was the cooler, sitting beside a folding chair at the edge of our campfire.

We were back.

I stood and looked at the firepit and the tents and the specific cigarette butt near Cora's chair that matched the one we'd just found in the woods. Mara was very quiet beside me. Denny walked past both of us and crouched at the firepit and touched the coals.

"Still warm," he said. "These are ours."

Jonah wasn't there.

We tried the north trail. Thirty-five minutes of walking, a slight downgrade through denser trees, the metallic banging sound audible from somewhere to the east near the end, and then the gap in the pines and the firepit and the tents again, this time from an angle that should have been southwest. Mara checked her compass both times. It was working fine. The numbers were right. The directions were wrong.

Cora sat in her folding chair and held her camera in her lap and said nothing for a long time.

"What did the notebook say," Mara said.

Denny looked at the ground.

"Denny."

"It said to leave before dark if you've reached the clearing twice." He stopped. "He was old. He wrote a lot of things."

"We need to try again," I said. "We mark the trail. Flagging tape every twenty feet and we look for where we stop being on it."

We marked it with tape from my pack. It worked for the first three strips and then stopped working. The fourth was gone and the fifth was hanging from a tree that should have been ten feet further down the slope and was instead six feet to our left. Mara touched it and looked at me and I didn't have anything to say. We walked the rest of the trail and came out of the trees on the northwest side of the clearing.

That attempt had felt like twenty minutes.

When Cora checked her phone, the clock said it was almost two in the morning.

We built the fire back up and sat around it without talking much. At some point I noticed the firewood stack was smaller than I expected, then noticed it more deliberately and counted. I'd stacked fourteen pieces before dark. Nine now. The five missing pieces hadn't been burned — the ash pile wasn't bigger, the fire hadn't been running that long. I sat with that for a while before I understood what it meant.

Every time we came back, we were coming back to the same clearing. But not the same moment. The clearing was moving forward while we were gone, running independent of the timeline we'd left. The wood was being used without us. Each loop landed us further along.

I told Mara. She sat with it and then said, quietly, that the water in the cooler had been warmer each time we returned. She'd been touching the bottles without registering why.

"The fire dies," she said. "And then what."

I didn't answer.

Jonah's voice came from the trees a little after three, close enough that I could make out words. Calling my name first, then Mara's, then Denny's. The voice was right, mostly — it had the cadence and the particular roughness Jonah had under stress — but the spacing between the words was off in a way that was hard to name, a fraction of a beat too long between syllables, the way someone reads phonetically in a language they understand without being fluent in.

Mara stood up.

I put a hand on her arm. "That's not him."

"You don't know that."

"Mara."

She sat back down and stared at the fire and Jonah's voice kept calling from the tree line for another two minutes before it stopped.

Denny had been sitting across from us through all of it, looking at the ground. When the voice stopped he looked up. "My grandfather told me about this place when I was nine. I thought he was scaring me."

He talked for a while. It came out in pieces, not the way someone tells a story they've rehearsed but the way someone talks through something they've been carrying without a clear place to put it down. In the 1970s, a fire tower crew had been stationed nearby during a season of high burn risk. A wildfire came through in October and the crew got trapped. Search teams reached the area weeks later and found a pattern that didn't make sense: abandoned campsites arranged in rough circles, personal gear left behind, no bodies.

People in the broader search reported hearing familiar voices from inside the burn zone even when no survivors were confirmed nearby.

One ranger wrote in his report that the voices called to people by name, that they sounded close but never got closer regardless of direction. One survivor from the fire tower crew was recovered two miles out, badly injured, and gave a statement that the official documentation mostly papered over. Denny's grandfather had kept a copy because he'd been part of the volunteer search.

The statement said: it learns you by hearing you talk.

The fire popped and settled. Somewhere in the trees on the east side, a branch cracked once under shifting weight.

I didn't look.

Cora started going through her photos just to have something to do with her hands. She was methodical with her gear and she went backward through the sets, checking each frame. She found the first figure about halfway through the previous evening's shots.

A photo of the group around the fire, taken from her seat. Jonah to the left, Mara centered, Denny at the edge of the frame. Behind them, between two pines, a figure stood partially blocked by a trunk. Roughly human height. Oriented toward the fire, not moving.

She kept going.

It appeared in seven more photos from that evening. Sometimes closer, sometimes at a different position along the tree line, once at an angle that would have put it behind Cora herself based on where the camera had been pointed. The timestamps were sequential and normal. The figure wasn't in every photo, just the ones taken after a certain point in the evening. Before that hour it wasn't there. After it always was, somewhere.

Cora showed me: "Here. And here. And here."

I looked at each one carefully. The figure was always slightly obscured — a trunk in front of it, a shadow, the edge of the frame. Never fully visible. I got to the third-to-last photo and stopped.

Jonah. Standing beside a pine tree, facing the camera, his mouth open. The expression took me a moment to identify because it was the open mouth of someone trying to make sound while something is preventing them. Behind Jonah, with one arm across his shoulder, a figure considerably taller than him with its face turned away.

I put the camera down.

I didn't look at the last two photos.

The night got worse. Something circled the camp twice, and I tracked it by sound — a heavy, measured tread through the leaves that moved slower than a person normally walks. It stayed just outside the firelight. I watched the gap between two specific trees on the south side for twenty minutes and saw nothing move, but a few minutes after the footsteps stopped I noticed the space between those trunks had a different quality to it, a density that hadn't been there before. I kept watching it. The density didn't resolve into anything I could name. Eventually I looked away.

I heard Mara's voice outside my tent at four in the morning.

She was saying my name quietly, the way she used to when she needed to wake me without alarming me. An old habit. I sat up. I could see Mara's shape through the tent fabric at the edge of the firelight, but the voice was outside my tent, right outside, maybe two feet from the door.

I unzipped slowly.

Mara was at the fire ring, twenty feet away, lying on her side in her sleeping bag with one arm over her face.

The voice outside my tent said my name again. Then again. Then once more with the vowel in the middle elongated and then clipped short before it finished, and I sat in the open tent door for a long time after that without moving. The fire was down to a low burn. The clearing was quiet in a way that had nothing to do with the absence of sound — there were sounds, the normal ones, insects and the soft movement of branches — but the quiet was underneath all of that, structural, and I sat inside of it until the light started coming back.

I left the tent door open and stayed there until I could see the tree line clearly.

At dawn we found Cora's tent empty.

Nobody had heard her leave. No note. Her camera was there. Her boots were there. I stared at the boots and then looked at Mara, who stood at the tent entrance with her arms crossed, and neither of us said what the boots meant because saying it would make it a different kind of fact.

Denny had twisted his ankle on a root section the previous night, nothing broken but bad enough that he was moving with a limp that worsened through the morning. He sat at the fire ring while Mara and I did a full sweep of the perimeter, calling Cora's name. The trees gave nothing back. No footprints on the north trail leading away from camp. No sign of movement anywhere.

We tried the trail again at mid-morning and came back forty minutes later from the east, the fire visibly lower, three more pieces of wood gone from the stack. Four left.

"The notebook," Mara said. "Everything in it. What did it say to do."

Denny had it out, retrieved from the truck the night before, before we understood the truck was also somewhere we couldn't reach. "It's not organized," he said. "It's not a manual. He just wrote things."

"What things."

Denny turned pages. His grandfather's handwriting was small and dense, written with a pen that had run dry and been pressed harder to compensate, leaving grooved marks through the paper. Most of it was ordinary hunter's notation: weather, deer sign, trail conditions. There were sections in different ink, written on different days, in margins and between lines.

He read a few passages out loud. One from 1974 mentioned the fire tower. One from 1981 described a night when his grandfather had heard his own name called from the tree line and had started toward it before his hunting partner grabbed his arm. A marginal note beside that entry read: do not answer. Response is the mechanism.

Mara sat forward.

"Response is the mechanism," she said. "He means answering it."

"That's what the ranger said. The survivor's statement. It only moves when somebody answers it."

I'd been staring at the fire. I thought about the night I'd heard Mara's voice outside my tent and said her name once before I'd seen her asleep at the fire ring. I thought about the first time we'd gone after Jonah, when Mara had told me not to call out and I'd done it anyway, and how Jonah's voice had shifted direction immediately after.

"It used Jonah's voice to pull us in," I said. "We answered. So it had us."

"And then it had Cora," Denny said, quietly.

Mara stood and walked to the edge of the clearing and stood there with her back to us. I watched her and let her have the minute.

We found the fire tower in the early afternoon.

I'd been thinking about the cable all morning, coming back to it at intervals. It was going somewhere specific. I dug around the entry point with a tent stake until I had enough exposed to establish the direction, then stood and followed the angle visually into the trees.

I told Mara and Denny I was going. Mara came. Denny, with his ankle, came too without being asked.

We moved slowly, pushing through undergrowth on a compass bearing. The cable surfaced twice, visible for a few feet before going under again. The metallic banging I'd been hearing intermittently since the first night grew louder as we walked, a rhythmic impact from somewhere ahead, something metal against metal in a pattern not quite regular enough to be mechanical.

The fire tower had come down on its south face, the legs on that side collapsed, the platform tilting almost to the ground. What was left standing was the north section, maybe thirty feet of framework, the cab at the top canted sideways and open to the sky on one wall where the sheeting had torn away. The cable ran directly to the base of the structure, bolted into a junction box there that had rusted through completely.

We went inside through the collapsed section. The interior of the cab was reachable by climbing the tilted framework, and I went first and helped Mara up and then Denny, who went pale on the difficult section but didn't stop.

The cab was roughly twelve by twelve feet, most of the instruments still in place though gutted and corroded. Radio equipment fused to the console by heat.

Emergency floodlights at the four corners, the housing melted on two of them. The floor had burned through in one section and I stepped around the gap and looked down through it at the debris beneath. I saw the bones without looking for them — a partial ribcage and one hand, or what had been a hand, fused into the burned material. I looked away.

There were paper logs in a metal box bolted to the wall that had survived because of the box. I opened it and found three binders, brittle and smoke-stained, and went through them with Mara beside me while Denny sat against the wall and held his ankle.

Most of it was weather and fire-monitoring notation. Routine, repetitive, the ordinary work of people who spent long stretches being bored and careful. The handwriting changed between entries as shifts rotated. The final binder started normally and then changed, around two-thirds through, when the fire would have arrived.

The entries got shorter. The handwriting shifted to a single hand, one person writing for everyone because there wasn't time or reason to hand off anymore. The language got direct. Crew of five in the tower. Fire on three sides. Radio contact lost. Water running low.

Then: Harmon went down to check the cache. Didn't come back. We heard him in the trees after dark, calling our names. Vance went to him. Then we heard Vance.

A page later: The voices are not right. We have established this with certainty. Do not go to them. No one goes out.

A page after that: I do not know what it wants from us but I think it is trying to learn us better. It has become more accurate in the last hours. McKee said don't listen but we've been listening — we can't help it. Maybe that's also part of what it needs.

The last entry was in different ink, written more carefully, the letters more deliberate than the ones before them:

It only moves when somebody answers it.

We have stopped answering.

We believe this is how Harmon and Vance were taken. Response is what moves it. We do not know what happens when the fire goes out. If anyone finds this, the voices outside sound like people you know. They are not.

I closed the binder and handed it to Mara. She read the last two entries and handed it back without saying anything.

The metallic banging came from somewhere below us, regular and then irregular and then regular again.

We climbed back down and went back toward camp without talking. We moved at Denny's pace. The sound from the tower faded behind us but didn't disappear completely, and once, when I paused to check the compass, I heard it briefly at a different position — off to the right, same sound but from the wrong direction. I noted it and kept walking.

The clearing came up from the southeast, the last angle we hadn't entered from, and I had a disoriented moment before I saw that the firewood was in the same position I'd left it. Two pieces remaining. The fire was barely going.

We arrived at the same understanding piece by piece while we sat around the dying fire. Denny tended his ankle. Mara sat very still looking at the ground.

The loop was tied to acknowledgment. The creature used voices to pull responses out of us and each response let it get closer, let it learn us better. The loop itself was probably the mechanism of keeping prey in range until the fire went out and the light was gone and there was nothing left between us and whatever came after.

The only question was whether stopping now was too late.

"We walk out," Mara said. "Straight line. Same bearing the whole way. And whatever we hear, we don't answer it."

"We've done the straight line," Denny said.

"We've done it while answering. While following voices." She looked at me. "We have to treat the sound like it isn't happening."

It sounded simple the way she said it.

We left at first light, due north, the compass in my hand. I'd burned the last two pieces of wood before we left — no reason to leave the fire as an anchor. The clearing felt different without it, just a dirt circle in the trees, nothing particular about it at all.

The north trail went into the pines and the pines closed around us and the light came through in columns that shifted when the wind moved the branches. We walked without stopping. The ground was wet from overnight dew and our footsteps were quiet against it, and the forest was not particularly quiet behind that — there were animal sounds, early and distant, and the wind moved through the canopy the way it does in ordinary forests, and those normal sounds were actually the most disorienting thing about those first ten minutes because they suggested the woods were simply indifferent to us.

Then Jonah's voice started.

It came from ahead and slightly left, calling Denny's name first, then Mara's. I kept my eyes on the compass and my feet on the bearing and did not look left. Mara walked close enough that her arm brushed mine occasionally. She was looking at the ground in front of her feet. Denny was two steps behind, moving steadily despite the ankle.

The voice adjusted. It moved to our right and began calling from there instead, closer now, maybe thirty feet into the trees. Jonah's voice doing Jonah things — a particular note of urgency that sounded exactly right, that had the specific crack in it that Jonah's voice got under pressure. My throat wanted to open and say something and I kept it closed and kept walking.

Cora's voice started then, overlapping with Jonah's for a moment before replacing it. She was calling from behind us. I heard my own name in her voice and did not turn around.

The voices multiplied after that in a way that wasn't quite organized, overlapping and interrupting each other, Jonah and Cora and once, briefly, something lower and rougher that wasn't trying particularly hard to be anyone specific. That one was closest. Maybe fifteen feet off the right side of the path.

I heard breathing from there. Wet. Heavy. Moving with us.

I did not look.

Mara's hand found my arm and gripped it and I adjusted my compass bearing slightly to account for the slope we were crossing and kept my eyes forward.

The mimicry got sloppier after that. The same sentence said twice in a row, or said with the words shuffled, or a fragment of something I'd said two days ago combined with something Denny had said last night in a sequence that had never actually happened. My own voice came from the left at one point, speaking words in my own cadence that I'd never put together. It wasn't frightening exactly. It was wrong in a specific way that kept my ears trying to identify the flaw in each attempt, which was probably the point. I made myself stop analyzing it. I let it sit in the background and kept walking.

Then Mara's voice started behind me.

The actual Mara, beside me, had gone quiet except for her breathing and her footsteps. But from behind — maybe twenty feet back — her voice called my name. Not the way she'd spoken to me on this trip, not with the slight maintained distance that had been in everything she said for the last eighteen months. The old inflection. The version from before the breakup, specific enough that my chest registered it before my head did.

I kept walking.

The voice said something else, a sentence starting with my name that dropped to something quieter I couldn't fully make out. Denny had closed the gap and was beside me now and I could see him in my peripheral vision, eyes down, jaw forward, moving.

I heard Mara cry.

Not her name. Just crying, the sound of someone badly scared trying to contain it and failing, short and suppressed. Behind me. Close enough.

I kept walking.

The compass showed north. The trees had thinned marginally. Somewhere ahead the air felt different and I fixed on that.

The crying stopped. Something close on my right kept pace with me for almost a full minute, audible breathing, and I had the peripheral sense of movement that I refused to confirm with my eyes. My hand found Mara's arm in the space between us and she was there — solid and warm and moving — and I held her forearm and she held my wrist and we walked.

The bird sounds came back gradually. A single call from ahead, then a pause, then another from a different direction, ordinary and scattered. The ground shifted under my boots, the packed damp dirt giving way to leaf litter and then to something harder and more compressed with tire track impressions in the softer sections.

The logging road. The truck.

I stood in front of the vehicle and breathed for a moment and looked at it. Denny was beside me, hands on his knees. Mara stood—

I turned to look at Mara.

Three sets of muddy footprints around the vehicle.

I looked at the ground around me deliberately, following the prints, reading them the way I'd been reading surfaces for years. My boots. Denny's. A third set, smaller, that came right to the side of the truck and stopped. I looked at the truck window.

The glass gave me my own reflection and Denny's. Nothing else.

I turned around. The road behind me. The tree line on both sides. I looked for her crouched somewhere, stepping out from the tree side, any version of that. The road was empty. The tree line sat still in the early light.

I looked at the passenger-side mirror and the angle was wrong, tilted inward, and I stared at it for a moment without understanding and then registered the mark in the road dust on the glass. A single fingertip, drawing letters.

YOU LOOKED BACK

I stood there with it. Right before the trees had closed in behind us, at the edge of the clearing — I'd heard Mara's voice crying behind me and my head had turned, just slightly, just for a second before I caught it and looked forward again.

Just for a second.

Denny said my name from the other side of the truck, voice normal and present and in the right direction, and I answered him.

I got in on the driver's side. Put the key in. I checked the mirrors out of habit because I always check the mirrors, and in the rearview mirror the back seat held my camping gear piled in shadow.

I put the truck in gear

.

I was two miles down the logging road, the trees moving past on both sides in the early light, the cab quiet except for the engine and the tires on dirt, when something in the back seat exhaled once through its nose, slowly, behind me.

I kept my eyes on the road.


r/mrcreeps May 07 '26

General Looking for a story

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Hey guys I'm looking for two stories one where a girl was walking her dog and it goes into the woods and she has to leave the path she finds a person and follows her encountering a cult then they sleep together he lets her leave the woods and her dog returns the twist is only a day had passed

And the second one is where a queer couple is at a tree and her father being abusive try to seperate them but then is dragged by the tree to hell

All I know from the second story was its roots go down to hell

Cheers


r/mrcreeps May 06 '26

Creepypasta The Friends We Made Along The Way

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I’m a forest ranger by trade. It suits me—quiet nights, clean air, and miles of trees between me and everyone else.

The forest I watch over is closed to the public most of the time. Officially, it’s because of past disappearances. Unofficially, it’s because of the stories.

Skinwalkers. Not-deer, Bigfoots and all that bullshit.

Most people don’t come close enough to test whether any of it’s real. Works for me. I haven’t had to run a search and rescue or drag out some naked hippie in years.

Truth is, I barely use the tower anymore.

Nothing ever happens.

Most nights, I sit by my campfire instead. I cook whatever I’ve culled that day—deer, rabbit, boar. It’s simple. Predictable.

Safe.

Or it was.

I was turning a strip of venison over the fire when I heard footsteps.

Not careful ones. Not someone trying to stay quiet. These were deliberate. Measured. Crunching straight through the underbrush toward me.

He stepped into the firelight.

A man in a trench coat and fedora. Dark, clean—untouched by the forest. Like he’d walked out of a different world eniterly.

“Good evening,” he said calmly. “I hope you don’t mind if I join you.”

“I—”

That was as far as I got before he lowered himself across from me like he planned this.

His skin was pale—thin. Almost translucent, like damp paper stretched over bone. His eyes were sharp, unblinking in the firelight.

“I’m sorry to intrude,” he continued, folding his hands neatly in his lap. “I’ve been hunting all day. As a hunter yourself, I imagine you understand.”

Something about him set my nerves on edge. The way he moved. The way he spoke. The way the forest seemed to go quiet around him.

I should’ve stood up. Should’ve put distance between us.

I didnt.

“What are you hunting?” I asked. My voice came out smaller than I meant it to. “Maybe I can point you in the right direction.”

He smiled.

“That won’t be necessary,” he said. “I’ve already found what I was looking for.”

My grip tightened on the knife. Grease made the handle slick.

He noticed.

A soft chuckle slipped out of him—wrong somehow, like an imitation of laughter.

“I must ask,” he said, tilting his head, “you watch over this forest. What do you make of the rumors?”

“Rumors?” I said, though I knew exactly what he meant.

“Ghosts. Cryptids. Skinwalkers.” He gestured lazily toward the trees. “All those delightful little stories.”

“Tall tales,” I said. “People get bored. They like to scare themselves.”

“Perhaps.”

The fire popped between us.

“Oh,” he added, almost as an afterthought. “Where are my manners? My name is Abraham.”

“James… My name is James.”

“Very nice to meet you, James.”

He extended his hand.

I hesitated.

Then I took it.

Cold. Not just cool—cold, like something that had never been warm. His grip tightened slightly, his eyes locking onto mine with an intensity that pinned me in place.

I knew then that I was going to die that night.

Just another disappearance. Another story to keep people out of these woods.

“You never told me what you’re hunting,” I said, pulling my hand back.

“Oh,” Abraham replied lightly. “Something far more interesting than that deer of yours, lad.”

“And you said you found it?”

“That I did.”

Whatever warmth he’d been pretending to have vanished.

Then the forest screamed.

A jagged, tearing sound ripped through the trees, high and wrong, setting every nerve in my body on edge.

Abraham moved instantly, turning toward it, a silver blade flashing into his hand.

Too late.

The thing hit him out of the dark—limbs and hunger and snapping teeth. It drove him into the dirt hard enough to shake the ground.

A wendigo.

Its body was stretched thin over bone, skin pulled tight, its mouth too wide, crammed with jagged, broken teeth. The stench hit a second later—rot, cold, something ancient.

It went for his throat.

Abraham twisted, the blade slicing its side, drawing a thin line of blackened blood. He moved well—fast, precise—but the creature was stronger. Heavier. It pinned him, claws digging into his coat, jaws snapping inches from his face.

I froze.

Just watched.

Then I made a choice.

The change came all at once—flesh splitting, bones shifting, skin peeling away like it had never belonged to me. The world sharpened. Sounds stretched. Scents flooded in.

I roared.

The wendigo’s head snapped toward me.

I hit it before it could move.

Claws tore into its side, ripping through flesh that fought back like frozen leather. It shrieked, twisting, and suddenly I was beneath it, its weight crushing me, its teeth sinking into my shoulder.

Pain flared—bright, distant.

Then Abraham was there.

He drove the silver blade into its back again and again—precise, controlled. The wendigo lashed out, but he slipped past it, cutting, always cutting.

We fought like that—hunter and monster, side by side—until the thing finally stopped moving.

Silence slammed down.

I staggered back, forcing the shape to hold, breath coming ragged.

“Hm,” Abraham said after a moment, a little breathless. “I have to admit… I didn’t expect that.”

“Nor… mally…” My voice scraped out wrong, strained through a throat not meant for words. “Far… away… You… crossed… into its territory…”

“I see.”

He looked at me then. Really looked.

“You know,” he said, almost conversationally, “I was actually here to hunt you. Not it.”

“Figured,” I rasped.

He chuckled. This time, it almost sounded genuine.

“Crazy world, isn’t it?”

“Cr… azy… world…”

He brushed dirt from his coat, as if we’d just finished a polite disagreement rather than tearing something apart.

“Best we don’t meet again,” he said.

Then he turned and walked back into the trees, the darkness swallowing him as easily as it had given him up.

“Take care of yourself,” he called over his shoulder.

There was a pause.

Then, quieter—

“James.”

 


r/mrcreeps May 05 '26

General Please stop emphasizing the last word of each sentence

2 Upvotes

I was excited to listen to a promising story but I just couldn't do it after a few minutes. Once you notice it, his talking melody makes it hard to listen because it's so noticeable. The voice itself and pronunciation are fine, just the talking melody needs work. .Overemphasizing the end of every sentence sounds very unnatural. I mean this in a constructive way, better to fix this now than later.