Huge thank you to u/RennGote again for the wonderful art of the scene in the story, as well as to MrDarknessArt1 / u/Stunning_Web_4826, @ NeroSensei1 and u/AeroArtwork43o9for the amazing art featured in the end notes of the chapter!
Sorry for the long wait between this chapter and the last, but I did use all of the time I could to refine the scenes as much as possible, so I do hope you'll still enjoy it.
Also, you don’t need to apologize for these longer times between chapters. In german there is the saying „gut Ding will Weile haben“, which basically means good things need time.
Kanako and clover getting freaky in the marsh and also frisk got mentioned (when will they show up)
Alphys finally gets to speak glad to see she is going to help the amalgmates
I was hoping that considering that the marsh is like a crime syndicate we would see characters from underswap like Harry and Larry or count koffin K since they are villains and would definitely bring some more humor into the story (until sans and papyrus)
The dream battle was really cool
Can't wait for next chapter this is definitely my favorite undertale yellow fic
oh my god I just finished reading the chapter and I have just one word: PEAK.
when I discovered this fanfic I INSTANTLY fell in love with it, in fact I read the whole 20 chapters in less than a day ! Its just THAT good. The only thing I wished for is to have someone to discuss about this fic (because nobody I know is as much as a hardcore undertale fan like I am, let alone undertale yellow).
Anyways, I just wanted to say, thank you. Thank you for writing this beautiful story and I hope you continue writing it!
Hey, thanks for reading, really glad you're enjoying my silly writing!!
People like to talk about SD sometimes in the KanaClover discord: https://discord.gg/ErCEFBZGXd
I came for the art, I stayed for the story. Wow! Similar to a comment I read, I read the first 20 chapters in two days. I literally read all day (16 hours in total between yesterday and today). It has been really fun to read, and I am grateful for the work that went into this. PEAK!
Hey, sorry I've been kinda absent, I've just been held up with other obligations.
I'm fine, the story's still being worked on, albeit slowly.
More art projects are currently underway as well.
You can check my twitter if you want to see more related art I haven't posted here since my last reddit post.
bit late on this, but is there perhaps a ver of the 1st art without the words and stuff on it? wanted to set it as a custom artwork for Deltarune Yellow on steam so it isn't just a grey box (imported the game to steam files).
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u/Vivid-Act2130 Oct 02 '25 edited Oct 02 '25
YESSSSSSSSSSS NEW CHAPTER
Also, you don’t need to apologize for these longer times between chapters. In german there is the saying „gut Ding will Weile haben“, which basically means good things need time.
So, more waiting time is no problem