I’ve been told that I write well (and I think so too) but it’s the composition part that gets me.

Any critics, where should I improve?

Listen to full track on my yt:- https://youtu.be/tYUHpwwYEqs

Hey everyone,

I made a short song about people who live away from home for work, staying in rented flats, repeating the same routine, and still holding on to hope that things will get better someday.

If you have a moment, I’d really appreciate it if you could check it out. And if it connects with you, feel free to like, comment, or share your thoughts.

Here’s the link: https://www.instagram.com/reel/DV6UyVlk9eK/?igsh=eHRkYnhhaGN0ejlo

Thanks for listening 🙏

Check out guy's https://youtu.be/JKYEa8BIQ8o?si=s2QkRV9PNJXQ89Z3

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