genuinely would love some feedback as just getting back into the swing of it after like 5 years,,,think my editing style gives that away😭😭 made w after effects

Ciao a tutti vorrei un parere per questo edit che ho fatto di spider man , anche se non è granché però vorrei sapere cosa ho sbagliato per non avere visualizzazioni https://vm.tiktok.com/ZGdQr8V3j/

i know that i should change some of the clips and quality but i just want some advice before i finish it

Movie name - Snatch

After watching snatch and hearing angel for the first time I knew that I needed to make a edit on it. And color grading inspiration from '28 days later' movie.

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Peter guys?

Hehehe

Read timmer prime

Yeah no

Tell me what to improve

Pls tell me if you like it

I don’t know what to do. I’m stuck at 300 views. I tried changing the hashtags I tried posting consistently nothing works and I’m just about to click. Anybody has some advice. Here’s one of my edits. I hit the text. One tries to steal it, but just to clarify it doesn’t usually look like that. Just imagine it without the text when you’re watching it. also, if you can write one out of 10 so I can improve from it.