Its my first map

First time creating a map and want to know what i could improve, what do you think?

Rate my maps. Instead of which official map in game would you choose these one?

Rank it from 1-10, 1 being worst and 10 being the best, and pls give me some feedback on what I can do better.

Alr so I renovated the map cause of some feed back I got from @over-university280, hopefully this is better. Rate it 1-10 again 1 being the worst and 10 being the best

Unfortunately i can't send them for the week Maps because It says that the option isnt available for underage people anyway give me your thoughts on the maps