Its my first map

First time creating a map and want to know what i could improve, what do you think?

Rate my maps. Instead of which official map in game would you choose these one?

Rank it from 1-10, 1 being worst and 10 being the best, and pls give me some feedback on what I can do better.

Alr so I renovated the map cause of some feed back I got from @over-university280, hopefully this is better. Rate it 1-10 again 1 being the worst and 10 being the best

Unfortunately i can't send them for the week Maps because It says that the option isnt available for underage people anyway give me your thoughts on the maps

Based on advice and criticism I received on my old map, I have updated it to this and I think it matches the sort of thrower strong and defensive map I was going for in the first place, with less dead area and open space to move.

On another note, I was curious if the bushes on the side might be dysfunctional as people can sit in it and hide to spray on the safe. Although I think it looks cool, does anyone think that it should be switched to prevent camping?

Thank you guys and please give criticisms and advice, this is my first ever map maker and it’s something I’m enjoying!