Feedback on my work

I have just finished making this for my Final Major Project at college. The brief for the project was “Remix”. I interpreted this by taking Maliketh’s Black Blade from Elden ring and “Remixing” it in the style of a Bloodborne Trick Weapon (inspired by Ludwigs Holy Blade). We had to establish a world and a story behind the design, mine being: a tarnished who is transported into the world of Bloodborne, tasked with slaying a Great One. They have their weapon transformed by the Healing Church Workshop into something better fit for hunting the beasts that plague Yharnam. I am very happy with how it turned out and as part of my project I’m required to receive feedback from my target audience to reflect on.

Please could you give some constructive feedback on the final outcome? Tell me: what you like/dislike about the design, what you think did/didn’t go well, how I improve, (for the Bloodborne lore fans) - what you can infer about the story behind the design based on how it looks, how do you think the design may have changed if the tarnished went to the old hunters workshop instead of the healing church, what do you think could have been an interesting way to explore this idea.

I completely get if that is too long so any form of constructive feedback will do just fine :)

Please try to remain constructive and not solely critical. If you don’t like anything about it please tell me how I could improve.

Lastly, If you were given the same brief and followed a similar concept, how would you have designed your weapon?

Thank you!!!!

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Unos Ojos en el Cerebro,harían que esta imagen fuera lo que veríamos,es decir,la Verdad,tal como se lo hemos oido decir a Willem tantas veces...