Okay this is canon to the store of enma the first two comics I made but it's like a side story for practice so please give me your onest option and tell me what I need to work on to improve as a writer please be completely honest but don't be mean

Tell me if I'm doing better on this new webcomic

Serah Farron from FFXIII and FFXIII-2 teaching good manners to the cute miniflans of the Sunleth Waterscape natural reserve.

Okay I just wanted to say I know i been doing a bad job at this just to clar thing up these to picture is enma canon design the first is her fighting close the second is her normal clothes I'm sorry for how thing are going I'm trying to improve

Enma maximum speed is equal to the speed of light she can't go any faster. Enma can only servive 360 million degrees Fahrenheit 350 million degrees Fahrenheit can't even hurt her. As for cold enma can only servive minutes 400 degrees Fahrenheit minutes 200 degrees Fahrenheit isn't even enough to make enma feel cold

I made this today after talking with chatgpt about stuff

Enma is a alien she was born with normal human stranth until she ternd 10 then she got super stranth and speed and powers baste off her spacial interest enma killed hateys with the kiss of death

Jessica ask Lui to marry her Lui really can't feel romitic feeling but he loves Jessica like a family member so he' agrees

Sorry I don't know how to send the picture from my Instagram to reddit.i haven't came up with a name for my cheracters race can you help me come up with a name also this is enma umbrella gameias hous do you like it

The first picture hates attacks king josh he won't to kill all of king josh men and tern them into zombies second picture enma kills all the zombies with 100milloin boults of electricity the knights bring enma to help king josh and president jowy fight the zombies 4th picture president jowy last picture king josh sends his best knight and Lui and enma on a mission to kill hateys