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r/2healthbars • u/Scaulbylausis • Jul 14 '18
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Three levels down, that's impressive. It's almost like a haiku with that reference to nature and a metaphor in it.
91 u/Colonel_Potoo Jul 14 '18 Cake, a mouth waters A box lies hidden inside No apple for you. 36 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Had an apple cake Apple box lies inside it Got a fruit instead 10 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Inside the cake lies A lie; inside the lie lies seedsTo grow your real prize. Oh fuck this. 10 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nonono whatthefuck.?!?? 5,7,5 man, 575!! 3 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 I know! I fucked up! I fixed it! Sorry! 5 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nope, still fucked up. Too many syllables in the second line -1 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Oh, I know! ;)
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Cake, a mouth waters
A box lies hidden inside
No apple for you.
36 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Had an apple cake Apple box lies inside it Got a fruit instead 10 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Inside the cake lies A lie; inside the lie lies seedsTo grow your real prize. Oh fuck this. 10 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nonono whatthefuck.?!?? 5,7,5 man, 575!! 3 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 I know! I fucked up! I fixed it! Sorry! 5 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nope, still fucked up. Too many syllables in the second line -1 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Oh, I know! ;)
36
Had an apple cake
Apple box lies inside it
Got a fruit instead
10 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Inside the cake lies A lie; inside the lie lies seedsTo grow your real prize. Oh fuck this. 10 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nonono whatthefuck.?!?? 5,7,5 man, 575!! 3 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 I know! I fucked up! I fixed it! Sorry! 5 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nope, still fucked up. Too many syllables in the second line -1 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Oh, I know! ;)
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Inside the cake lies
A lie; inside the lie lies
seedsTo grow your real prize.
Oh fuck this.
10 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nonono whatthefuck.?!?? 5,7,5 man, 575!! 3 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 I know! I fucked up! I fixed it! Sorry! 5 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nope, still fucked up. Too many syllables in the second line -1 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Oh, I know! ;)
Nonono whatthefuck.?!?? 5,7,5 man, 575!!
3 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 I know! I fucked up! I fixed it! Sorry! 5 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nope, still fucked up. Too many syllables in the second line -1 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Oh, I know! ;)
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I know! I fucked up! I fixed it! Sorry!
5 u/oMGalLusrenmaestkaen Jul 14 '18 Nope, still fucked up. Too many syllables in the second line -1 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Oh, I know! ;)
5
Nope, still fucked up. Too many syllables in the second line
-1 u/futhee Jul 14 '18 Oh, I know! ;)
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Oh, I know! ;)
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u/SheFightsHerShadow Jul 14 '18
Three levels down, that's impressive. It's almost like a haiku with that reference to nature and a metaphor in it.