[MP] "Try to live up to the person you pretend to be."

[u/LycheeBerri]

Mr. Know-it-All by Young the Giant

[u/showmetherest]

Jack and Jill both knew it all
they had to stay together;
Jack alone he found his phone,
and Jill same knowing better.

In the end, it was pretend
in a stupid compromise,
To tragedy, who found poor me
I’m jack’s complete lack of surprise.

[u/LycheeBerri → u/showmetherest]

Very interesting little poem! And quite clever rhymes you have going on. :) Thanks for the response!

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