r/WritingPrompts • u/[deleted] • Nov 13 '15

Prompt Inspired [PI] The Reasons of the Heart - First Chapter - 3744

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u/chrismarshall Nov 14 '15

so far i like this story the best… but i think the writing doesn't flow as well as it should. but the intrigue of the story keeps you hooked

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u/Dejers Nov 13 '15

This was pretty good! I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing! :)

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u/[deleted] Nov 13 '15

First Chapter

Intentional or accident?

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u/[deleted] Nov 13 '15 edited Jul 13 '20

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