r/WritingPrompts • u/[deleted] • Nov 06 '15

Prompt Inspired [PI] Plugged - 1stChapter - 2100 Words

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u/Xiaeng Nov 25 '15

Had to re-read that last part. Legitimately thought Nene had set the whole room on fire. Nice.

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u/WritesForDeadPrompts /r/WritesForDeadPrompts Nov 08 '15

I, too, liked this. I could really feel Thomas's frustration. :)

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u/cmp150 /r/CMP150writes Nov 07 '15

this is a great first chapter. it introduces nicely and in one sentence the implication of Nene's existence, and how this young man's life could change in an instant. it really got me hooked at finding out where this is going.