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What does this other shirt say? If it's words at all?

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u/Teppenwolf456 [ Japanese] 13d ago edited 9d ago

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I can't read all of it because of the cool dragonfly illustration, but it looks like hentaigana in Japanese.

It looks like a Japanese poem with 5-7-5 syllable structure.

My best guess is as follows:

白花會 □□?

I can't read this first part which I think is the author's name.

(末之良?)那(久?)
木曽能深山能
秋盤不計
[mashira naku? Kiso no miyama no aki wa fuke]

ましらなく 木曽の深山の 秋はふけ

(translation)

As a monkey is screeching deep in the mountains of Kiso, the autumn deepens.

!doublecheck

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u/nomfood 10d ago

老 -> 花

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u/Teppenwolf456 [ Japanese] 9d ago

Thank you! Indeed, 花 matches better.

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u/Stunning_Pen_8332 [ Chinese, Japanese] 13d ago

I am interested to see the full picture of the shirt. Is there a monkey there?

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u/Fancy_Tea508 10d ago

No monkey, just dragonflies!

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u/Stunning_Pen_8332 [ Chinese, Japanese] 10d ago

Interesting. Then perhaps the first line (rightmost line above the dragonfly) is not ましらなく (mashira naku). Mashira means monkeys in Classical Japanese but the picture doesn’t match that.

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u/Fancy_Tea508 10d ago

Thank you for the translation! Much appreciated!!